RiMa FF: My Brutal Love...[Thread 2 link on pg 1] - Page 52

Originally posted by: Prettyliars

Nice update

thanks pika dear!!!

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Awesome Update and Thank you so much for writing RK POV and want to know more

thanks dear!! u r welcome!!!

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Prologue and chapter one is intriguing. What is s story of Madhu and what jay RK doing all are mystery. Loved the style of writing. Keep it up and thanks.

thanks shahi dii... u r welcome!!!

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Chapter 2 - What a different way to get girl back. Nice one loved RK and Madhu heated argument. Midhi nice one creative keep it up and thanks a lot.

hahaha!!! ya diff one!!! thanks di.. glad u loved it... u r welcome!!!

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Read in one go... from start to chapter 9 -

Well like I said first few update it was full of excitement to know what is happening and still in present I am like what happened if they love to each other so much.

I know answer lies in past. Well past it seems cute RK sometimes from past only give mystery for his action. Madhu fallen for a guy.

You know the story reminds me of Rajbala more... you Raja was gunda and you once wrote also that eating wala scene beside that his gun and Madhu said once she don't want to eat from his earning. Malik too hates him I guess. I think he took wrong path which none liked.

In past it shows Madhu being more keen to do friendship with him. Now when RK grew up to be not so good liking person she is running from him. The whole idea gave me only Rajbala.

Well coming to your writing style it is unique and you know where to build suspense. I always read your suspense story and all was unique and brilliant.

Keep the good work and thanks for writing and sharing with us.

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thankss soo much shahi di... Happy u read the whole story!!! yup it's resemble to rajbala I know but still it's diff!!! u r the only one who targeted Malik nd u r right to!!!
glad u like the writing style dear!!! thanks again!!! u r welcome!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: aaliya14

<font size="3">I read all the chapters in one go and the story has been going awesome. I am more curious about their past because that is where all the answers lie. Update soon😊</font>

thanks dear for reading!!! keep reading .. ya will update asap!!!

Bhai update kardo .mujhe ye story padna hai yaar plzzz

Originally posted by: poojabhatt934

Bhai update kardo .mujhe ye story padna hai yaar plzzz

ya will update on sunday dear!!!

Outstanding update Suru Di!Thanks fr pm!Luved Madhubala helping Rishu In completing His books & copying His handwriting!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!I would Luv to read RK's pov frm next tym!

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Outstanding update Suru Di!Thanks fr pm!Luved Madhubala helping Rishu In completing His books & copying His handwriting!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!I would Luv to read RK's pov frm next tym!

thanks lipi dear!! glad u loved it... u r welcome ya will update tmrw!!! Will try to gve it...