RiMa FF: My Brutal Love...[Thread 2 link on pg 1] - Page 50

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Awesome... 😊

thanks dear!!!

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm

u r welcome dii...

Originally posted by: piaviviandsena

i to surly want RK's pov! I luved hw u wrote dis part!

yup I gve it!! glad u loved it!!!

Originally posted by: piaviviandsena

vry vry nice part. Thax fr pm.

thanks nd u r welcome jaan!!!

Originally posted by: lathaprasad

lovely update like this rk's pov

thanks dear.. glad u liked it...

Originally posted by: kg15

Amazing update Suru! Loved to read RK's point of view! Loved every bit of it... Eager to know the reason for Madhu's hatred for RK...

Continue Soon!

thankss kavya dii... glad u loved it dii.. u will know!! Will update soon...

Prologue and chapter one is intriguing. What is s story of Madhu and what jay RK doing all are mystery. Loved the style of writing. Keep it up and thanks.

Chapter 2 - What a different way to get girl back. Nice one loved RK and Madhu heated argument. Midhi nice one creative keep it up and thanks a lot.

Read in one go... from start to chapter 9 -

Well like I said first few update it was full of excitement to know what is happening and still in present I am like what happened if they love to each other so much.

I know answer lies in past. Well past it seems cute RK sometimes from past only give mystery for his action. Madhu fallen for a guy.

You know the story reminds me of Rajbala more... you Raja was gunda and you once wrote also that eating wala scene beside that his gun and Madhu said once she don't want to eat from his earning. Malik too hates him I guess. I think he took wrong path which none liked.

In past it shows Madhu being more keen to do friendship with him. Now when RK grew up to be not so good liking person she is running from him. The whole idea gave me only Rajbala.

Well coming to your writing style it is unique and you know where to build suspense. I always read your suspense story and all was unique and brilliant.

Keep the good work and thanks for writing and sharing with us.

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Originally posted by: JsparrowJ

you given update at night i waited whole day

well coming to episode

well actually if i would be in your position i never given r.k. POV to create suspense as its going on now from past and present case i will always makes in readers mind that wheather he loved him or not

well that question was in my mind but you totally cleared the same...well from todays episode it was confirm that he also liked madhu or i can say attracted..

and madhu is cute and you explain ezpressions well

awesome update and beautifully written R.K. POV..this told me that he was feeling same as madhu strange without bag..and also he tries to be cool which he is not

and first girl friend hahah never talked to any girl..wah..

waiting for next

and thanxx for dedication ya i wa swaiting from long...

and update regularly

LOVE U MY SURUJAAN

Thanks soo much miss.sparrow!!!
really glad u liked it all!!! ya I know I should wid my plan of madhu's pov but for all I thought to give RKs view as no prblm in it...
yup feelings are mutual!!!
srry to make u wait for whole day dear!!!
u r welcome u deserve dedication!!!!
love ya too My Miss. sparrow!!!! ❤️