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meenji22

@meenji22

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hey uma apne baaki ff,ss update karo na

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

oh uma...it was a cute OS dear 😊😊😊

wonderfully written 👏👏👏

i must say this...that ur writing is very very improving...its not that u were not good at first but now...hmm...now something pulls us towards the story...wonderful dear 👏👏👏

i really liked the way u broke the story to pieces like 1 year befor,3 mnths after...i liked it 😊😊😊

and do u know my fav.line? this one...wait actually i have equal share in bringing this good news, but no one seemed to care.

and the end...oh god...i think i hav never read this way of ending...i liked the unique ending 😊😊😊

but let me tell u onething,i was confused first 😕😕😕...bcoz the last line was in different font,so i thought its you saying something...then i became more confused,uma bringing her son? 😲😲😲she is married??😲😲😲??when...??? 😆😆😆...then only i could understand it was rk who was asking us to give him some privacy 😆😆😆

nice OS dear...u changed ur dp pic??? 😊😊😊

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow!! fantastic os dear!!👏

after reading d 1st para i guessed madhu was pregnant so out of curiosity i went to d last to make whether my guess is rite or wrg!🤪 i was rite but i dont know that in btn they had lost their 1st symbol of love!! that part was quite emotional & heart wrenching🥺

u have taken d story too well & it gives d feeling that actually rk is narrating story for us!!😛

lust or love which ever comes 1st ultimately love wins!!👍🏼

rk dreamt of lusting with madhu & immediately is dream came true😆

i personally feel that in arranged marriage everyone gives important to looks 1st then only after understanding each other they start loving!! so here also rk preferred for a good looking wife & when he got that he accepted d marriage!! so this is my defense for rk's behaviour after all i love rk more than madhu in serial too!!😆

u know what i actually like these kind of stories more " a perfect family story"😳 i may sound old but i like after marriage love stories a lot!!😳

what abt last line?? will rk narrate abt their little miracle?? will we get a continuation for this lovely story??😳 if u r planning then i m in to read further!!😃

keep writing more of such wonderful os dear!!👍🏼

thanks for d pm!!🤗

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revti21

@revti21

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Superb os...sry fr being late...busy nw a days

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan
really awesomeee os dear!!!

thank you suru dear

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: revti21
Superb os...sry fr being late...busy nw a days

thank u dear, no prb, I can always wait for ur comment.

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: madhurish
wow!! fantastic os dear!!👏
after reading d 1st para i guessed madhu was pregnant so out of curiosity i went to d last to make whether my guess is rite or wrg!🤪 i was rite but i dont know that in btn they had lost their 1st symbol of love!! that part was quite emotional & heart wrenching🥺
u have taken d story too well & it gives d feeling that actually rk is narrating story for us!!😛
lust or love which ever comes 1st ultimately love wins!!👍🏼
rk dreamt of lusting with madhu & immediately is dream came true😆
i personally feel that in arranged marriage everyone gives important to looks 1st then only after understanding each other they start loving!! so here also rk preferred for a good looking wife & when he got that he accepted d marriage!! so this is my defense for rk's behaviour after all i love rk more than madhu in serial too!!😆
u know what i actually like these kind of stories more " a perfect family story"😳 i may sound old but i like after marriage love stories a lot!!😳
what abt last line?? will rk narrate abt their little miracle?? will we get a continuation for this lovely story??😳 if u r planning then i m in to read further!!😃
keep writing more of such wonderful os dear!!👍🏼
thanks for d pm!!🤗

ha ha, even I wil do that at times out of curiosity, and thanks a lot for liking this story, yes dear, always looks matters in arranged marriage, and don't worry am more into that type of story.