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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 1: So its a story of revenge...RK took revenge from Madhu as Madhu's father killed his father...poor Madhu...
thnks for pm sis!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rg0782

Awesome prologue dear...its damn interesting...will read the next chaps soon...thnks for pm...

glad u liked it di ...n no problem 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rg0782

Part 1: So its a story of revenge...RK took revenge from Madhu as Madhu's father killed his father...poor Madhu...


yup it is di ...n no problem 😉
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Rk's pov

I saw her standing outside my car. But why is she here? Maybe she's here to invite me in. She is my master key to enter this house as where as their lives. I should act sweet with her. But I know why she is doing this. She thinks that I don't know, but I do know that she is just calling me in so that she becomes popular using my name. But who cares?

"Uh...Rk...I am really sorry for di's behavior. Actually dad isn't at home na so that is the reason why she behaved so rude. I hope you don't mind. She is very sweet and adorable but it's just that dad's very protective about us and if he finds out that we have let someone inside without letting him know then he will be quite upset. And di loves him a lot so she was helpless at that time. I am so sorry for that." Trishna said.

"Hey it's ok man! Chill. And I seriously understand why your di did that. And I didn't feel bad. So don't worry" I said.

"Thank you so much Rk. But if you don't mind you can come in. It's quite dangerous out here."

"But won't your sister mind?" I asked her. Of course I can't just say yes like an idiot. What will she think? And I can't leave this chance in any way now.

"No, she won't even know that I brought you in. She's reading a book and I bet she would be definitely engrossed in that book, so she won't notice us". Trishna giggled saying so.

"Hmm...But I don't think it would be good to come in and stay in your home without asking for her permission. Moreover, if she finds out about this then she will get damn angry, so I don't think I should..."

"No...You can't ...what will I tell Ria..." Trishna bit her tongue nervously. I smirked hearing that.

"What will you tell whom?" I raised my eyebrow.

"What...I think you didn't hear properly...it's so windy out here so maybe you got me wrong there. I ...uh ..i meant to say that its getting dark and you should get in or you will fall ill. And I bet you are here for some important work, so if you fall ill it will cause great losses. So please come in..."

"Uh...ok" I said.

Trishna smiled hearing that. And two of us proceeded towards the main door.

"What a fool she is! She herself invited a big problem for herself as well as her family, especially that Madhubala." Saying this I let out a evil grin.

I entered the mansion with Trishna by my side. To say that that mansion was incredible was an understatement. It was as beautiful as Rk Mansion.

"So, I will take you to the guestroom, you can stay there till the time you want, just make sure that you don't come out coz di's room is the closest to the guest room, and if she comes to know about this, then she will throw you out of here." Trishna murmured.

"Fine. But did you just say that she will throw me out? You don't know me sweetheart, now even your sissy can't stop me from staying in this house as well as well as her life." Rk smiled evilly.

"Huh? What do you mean?"

"Uh...nothing. I just meant to say that if I have your support then she can't throw me out, right?"Rk instantly covered up.

"Uh ...ok then. Let's go." Trishna said still confused.

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Trishna took me to my room. It was a well furnished room with white and grey walls which gave a calm and soothing look to the room.


It was definitely not as big as my room but it was as attractive as my own. Hardwood floor, king sized bed, a big walk in closet, it was just of my standard.

"So do you like it? I know it won't be as big as yours but I hope you can manage" Trishna said hesitantly.

"No, it's perfectly fine. In fact it's awesome." I said.

"You liked it? Everything is of di's choice. From the color of the walls to the furniture, she personally took care of everything. Ok then, I better go to my room coz if di finds my room empty then ..."

"Ya sure ...even I have to shower."

Trishna gave a cordial smile and went away.

"Hush!! Finally!!Now I can relax." I go in the bathroom and turns on the shower.

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After about 15 minutes I walk out of the shower wrapping a towel on my waist and sit there on the bed.

Phew! That was quite refreshing. Thank god that Trishna did get a doubt. I better control my tongue now onwards. I took my cell from the side table and check if there are any new messages. There were 10 missed calls from Bittuji. What's wrong with this man? Why doesn't he ever leave me alone? Irritated I keep my phone aside n start thinking about Madhubala.

What should I do? That girl doesn't know I am here. So should I go and tell her that I have already entered her house? Naah. That would be foolish of me. But I have to begin my game soon now, coz I don't have much time left. But what should I start with? She seems to be quite strong mentally, so should I break her confidence? Hmm...I will think about that later, first I better wear my clothes.

I started hunting for clothes all over the room. But alas! I found none. Does that mean I have to wear that wet clothes again? Having no other option I picked up my jeans and wore them. I was in no mood to wear that drenched shirt now. And who cares? That Madhubala will be engaged in her book and Trishna will be busy dreaming. Seriously did she really think I wouldn't catch her? God! What fool! Anyways I am tired now. I better sleep now.

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I got up with a jerk. I was complete drenched in sweat. The same dream again. Why did you leave me dad? I am so alone without you. Everything seems so dull without you dad. I won't forgive that man easily. I will destroy him, I will destroy his complete family. My throat was parched. But there was no jug of water in the room. What kind of people are they? No clothes, I completely understand ...but not even water?

God! It seems that I myself have to go to the kitchen and get myself a glass of water. I made my way through the kitchen and saw a figure there. Who could be that? Its 2:30 ...who could be awake this late. I observed the figure and came to a conclusion that was a lady. I advanced towards when suddenly she was all erect, as if she had sensed me coming towards her.

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Madhu's Pov

I opened the refrigerator to take the bottle of water when I heard some footsteps from behind. Alarmed I turned back to see if anyone was there behind me but to my surprise there was no one. Huh? Hallucination? I turned back to take a bottle from the fridge. It was then when a manly hand gripped my waist and other closed my mouth. Terror spread all over me. Was there a thief in the house? What am I gonna do now? But I remember very well that I locked the doors and windows before going to bed. Then, how can someone get in? Madhu...there's no time to think, you should do something. But what? Should I shout for help? No, there's only Trish at home, and if she comes here even she will fall in trouble. What should I do now?

Just then I spotted a knife on the kitchen counter. I extended my hand a bit to catch hold of the knife. That man held my wrist to stop me from taking that knife into my hand. Damn! Then he turned me round to face him. His eyes were chocolate brown. I couldn't get a full view of his face because of the dim light coming from the refrigerator. His eyes seemed somewhat similar. Have I met him before?

Who ...who are you? I asked with trembling voice.

His grip tightened on my waist and he pulled me closer. I could feel his breath on my face which sent goose bumps all over my body. He bent towards my neck and I could feel his lips near my ear lobes sending unknown sensations in my stomach. Suddenly reality dawned upon me and I wondered what was wrong with me. I pushed the man with all my force and turned on the lights.

"You?" I was shocked to see the man standing in front of me.

"Yeah, me of course. Whom were you expecting huh?" Rk grinned naughtily.

"What the hell are you doing in my house? I told you before too, you.cant.stay.here. Then why don't you understand?"I asked losing my patience.

"Your sister let me in." he said shrugging.

"Huh? This can't be possible. Trish won't do that! How can she just let you in?" I said angrily.

"You better ask her this." Saying this he walked back.

I was shocked seeing his casual behavior.

I ran behind him and asked.

"Hey, where are you going?"

"Where do you think I might be going? To the guestroom of course." He said.

"But..." before completing my sentence he banged the door on my face.

"What was that?" I asked myself before walking reluctantly towards my room.

I sat there on the bed holding my teddy close to my chest.

What's wrong with me? Why didn't I fight with him? How could I just let him stay here? What if dad comes to know about this? He will be very angry at me. And when he came close to me, why didn't I push him away, what was that feeling in my stomach when he brushed his lips against my earlobes? Did I like that feeling? No ways! That's impossible! I will get him out of this house as soon as the storm gets over. He won't leave before the storm stops, and even Trishna won't let him go. God! This is so confusing. I looked out of the window and it was still raining heavily. Seems the storm's isn't in the mood to leave soon.

I lay down on the bed and soon drifted into deep slumber.

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Rk's POV

I locked the door and sat on the bed. So finally I took the first step. Now Madhubala is aware of me staying in this house. Now let's see what she will do. The game has started Madhu...baala...

I saw her from the kitchen entrance. She was drinking water. This was the best opportunity to make her realize that I was staying at her home. And finally when she came to know about this and ran behind me shooting her questions at me, I shut the door close on her face just like she did that day. But this is just the beginning Madhubala, there's lot more to come. I took out my wallet and caressed dad's photo kept in it. I am gonna fight for my dad. I am gonna give justice to him by hook or crook. He has been my support even after his death. Looking at his photo itself gives me so much strength.

Papa, I promise that I won't let that man go away easily. I will punish him for what he did to you. Whatever might be the cost dad, I am ready to do anything for you. I will make them suffer. I will torment him in the same way he hurt you dad. I will finish him! I won't let him win this time dad, I promise you. I caressed dad's photo one last time and kept in my wallet back at its place. Tomorrow is gonna be a long day, so I better catch some sleep now. Soon I dozed off.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yayy, me first finally shriya, first a big thanks for the lengthy updates.
All POV are very clear and i was not strucked up at any point, first encounter was too good, but i guess RK will soon fall for this girl, forgetting the cause for which he has come, lets see how the lengthy day is going to be?

Very nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
R
Unres...Excellent update👏 waiting 4 next
Edited by noiseygirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting chapter!!! You portrayed the point of views beautifully!! Well done...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...RK is too much..bechari Trish...ahaan Junglee billi Madhu..
What r u planning for the next ???? waiting baba 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha
nice update
you written every one's pov very clearly
thats good
and thaxx for lenthier update😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update 😊

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