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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Thanks a lot for likibg the story and moreover thanks for the birthday wishes...

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Amazing os...so the story starts with Madhu on the night of her suhaagraat...then flashbacks of their marriage, the first night...I felt bad when RK behaved with Madhu like that...and then Rk's back story and opening up was also emoted out beautifully...and it was a beautiful ending...keep writing...

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Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

"Come on, let's end you"
hehehehe i am giggling reading that line...

nice OS... very different too :)

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veni7842

@veni7842

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

reading this os second time... loved it

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veni7842

@veni7842

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

don't know how many times I read this story... one of my favorite stories loved rk and madhu in this story... :)

Edited by veni7842 - 10 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

I hv read it again dear superb story

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

a very sweet and soothing OS...lovely plot, backdrop of events before they were getting married...funny suhagrat scenes...omg, dumb RK inadvertently hurts madhu with his even more dumber accusation..glad the way they patched up n became one again..

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Lol...🤣

Read this os again yammy...

I have said this over & over again yet repeating it...U r brilliant in writing cheesy & naughty dialogues girl...

They r one despo couple... Always their gutter mind was on doing it...

I loved the end line... " u r going to be my end woman"... " come on...lets end u"...

This story is a mixture of...hot romance... Sadness... Love... Fun... I loved it girl...

Do write more OSs dear...

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catharsis

@catharsis

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Wow...beautiful os, Maryam di...
Loved d journey of this adorable couple...d way they got over their own insecurities, fears...opened up to each other n realised their love. 😳

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arorasurbhi

@arorasurbhi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Amazing os... 😊

Edited by arorasurbhi - 9 years ago

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