Rishbala OS: To be or not to be

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

lovely os kat and long one also

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I loved it!!!

They started off so honestly but then things got complicated. But then love is complicated.

RK was a virgin?? I was as surprised as Madhu!

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome OS !!

Oh god !! Loved it when Madhu was singing kabhi kabhi lol !! It was hot initially !! But then things turn lil sour hehe, I was expecting her to fight n shout but instead she simply used his own words against him LITERALLY 😆😆 !! Great move 👏 !! Glad it sorted out nicely and Loved the end too

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Aaradhya Malhotra

@Aaru4DVD

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

that was wonderful dear.

i just enjoyed myself while reading..

quite long one huh.. my lappy hanged 3 times while reading it..

the idea was too good... he said and she followed..

i just loved how you described the entire story.. crystal clear..

and madhu's charcter was also too good.. and the best part is suhaagraat.. quite realistic..

and his confesion to her about his past and his teenage feelings and all..

very realistic..

keep it up... and plz write more based on the topic marriage.. u write well..

and we'll love it...

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Happy bday dear ;)..awesome is ..like is nt wrkng..but srsly ur is brought me to this world again...was feeling so lost..love u..have a gr8 yr ahead 😳😊