Rishbala SS: Second Chance at Love(complete) Part 5a,5b pg 23 (14/05) - Page 18

Loved it!!! I like how RK did not give up on Madhu and got very creative in being with her.

I am glad Dipali was out of the picture.

I liked the ending. Whether Madhu got her memory back or not, did not matter to me. RK & Madhu were in love and together - for me that is enough.

first of all sorry for my late reply...
this is a fantastic ss dear...plz can you give us an epilogue?... continue to write more stories & dont forget to pm me

You just amazed me sangeeta !!! how beautifully u write absolutely mindblowing ... start to comment from the first part to this one story was so gripping that i cannot blink my eyes Rk gradually fall in love with madhu then he realized how he cheat her an finally their true love won beautifull end ... cant get enough of Rishbala their pillow wall repeat here i m so glad ;)) their kisss just took my breath away too hot to handle !!sorry for late comment my net was frustrating a lott n thanxxx for the pm :)) waiting fr another superbb piece of witing from ur part ;))) just lovely n god bless u hun

superb story dear...

Seriously nice story and awsome update

Superb ss luvd it so much !

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

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Unres...luv luv ur update gonna miss it plz plz come back soon with new stories ...

thanxx da😊
I'm sorry yaar you were waiting for madhu to regain her memory but it din happen..but I.m glad u still liked it!!!

Originally posted by: madhurish

superb!! awesome!! fabulous!! marvelous!! wonderful story!!👍🏼👍🏼 i loved both d parts but part 5b was outstanding!! 👏👏 its a perfect ending for this lovely story👏👏

part 5a - quite emotional part & it was written well!!😳👍🏼 rk nicely blasted that bitch dipali!!😈 i like d way how rk genuinely accepts his mistakes & confessed his true feelings to madhu!!😳 even madhu did d rite thing by not forgiving him so easily & made him beg for forgiveness!!👏👏

part 5b - i loved every single bit in this part!!👏👏 i was continuously blushing☺️☺️ , grinning😃😃 & rolfing🤣🤣 while reading this part!! its a super cool part😎😎 & i m gonna read it again to make myself happy😳😳

i loved rk's determination & efforts taken to win madhu's love & trust back & finally he succeeded in it!!👏👏

rk miss madhu's baby pink nightie more than madhu lol!!😆😆

i loved how cleverly rk convinced madhu to allow him to stay with her by taking sasuma & sasurji's name lol!!😉😆

aww!! shirtless rk yummy!!☺️☺️

oh god! wherever rk madhu goes this pillaw wall😡😡 , patil & mangesh follows them😆😆

rk adjusting madhu's dress & covering d love bite on her neck was too adorable!!😳😳

"Nothing in this world can keep me away from my queen" - yup! u r d sole owner of ur queen rk lol!!😉😆

oh god! what a scene this man created for a small cut but shld agree that rk is very caring hubby😳😳!! i liked trishna & sasuma's comment for this incident!!😆😆

i could imagine madhu in that dark pink saree & she is looking heavenly😳

wow!! rk feeding madhu , flirting with trish (nice jeeju saali combo)

😉 😎& madhu's jealously!! alll these scene wr very cute & sweet!!😆😆 she is too possessive on rk!! but i love her for her possiveness!!😳😳

rk making dark chocolate mousse for his biwi was so romantic😳😳

"I didn't know it would take a fire accident to bring you this close to me...Had I know it then I would have planned it a week ago."- this line cracked me🤣🤣 he is ready to crack a joke & teaser her in that situation too!! naughty rk😆😆 BII.WIII...ahaan!!!😉😳

i wish to see madhu forgetting everything happened after accident & rk seducing madhu to love him again☺️😳 i wanna read more, i m insatiable!! 😛😳y dont u give a "third chance at love"😉😆 by continuing this story as a ff instead of ss or u can write a sequel of it!! think abt it dear!!😉😳

u r an awesome writer👏👏

keep writing more & i m waiting for ur next beautiful piece of work⭐️⭐️

thanks for d pm😃😃

love u❤️🤗

thanxxx a tonnn da🤗
reading your comment made my day...thank you so much for liking this part so much that you found it worth reading twice!!!😳

I was also rofling while writing RK's part😆 He is true Kameena you see..

awww you want a sequel to it..well I don't have anything in mind what happens to them next..lets leave them like this happy forever I promise I'll come up with something new..I hope you'll like that too...
love you too🤗

Originally posted by: uma88

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I must say this first, there was heavy competition in commenting ur story, i reserved the place the next moment ur pm reached me, but still am at 4th place, see how many of us were eagerly waiting for ur story, i liked the way you end it, it doesn't matter,if she get back her memory, our rk is ready to seduce her now, ha ha ha, liked the way how he managed to lie so easily to her to be with her, and the way he kept count of people falling for his side was so good.

Trishna's this line cracked me up

she loses a lot more blood every month, you can't help with it.

Do write more dear, and don't forget to pm me on your next write up.

thanxxx Uma 😊

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it!!!

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Genuinely nice update. 🤗 So finally Madhu came to know truth but she heard half things. Dipali was behind everything. She is not that good she wants to use both. Good RK realised and understand that he is not what he thought inside him a beautiful person wants to come out. His interaction and confession to Madhu was perfect. Indeed she helped him to break his wall and come out and this can only be possible because of that incident in their life. Or else RK would have never given any chance to Madhu. At end RK's manauing scenes were great return. He was so careful and possessive towards Madhu. He cannot able to take small cut in her hand. 😆 Love the way he convince his whole family that he is responsible man now. Well written each part which explains their feelings perfectly. At end Madhu cannot resist more and went straight to check his dearest husband.

Lovely update keep it up and thanks a lot.

thanxx Shahi🤗