Rishbala SS: Second Chance at Love(complete) Part 5a,5b pg 23 (14/05)

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Uma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

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I must say this first, there was heavy competition in commenting ur story, i reserved the place the next moment ur pm reached me, but still am at 4th place, see how many of us were eagerly waiting for ur story, i liked the way you end it, it doesn't matter,if she get back her memory, our rk is ready to seduce her now, ha ha ha, liked the way how he managed to lie so easily to her to be with her, and the way he kept count of people falling for his side was so good.

Trishna's this line cracked me up

she loses a lot more blood every month, you can't help with it.

Do write more dear, and don't forget to pm me on your next write up.

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silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Genuinely nice update. 🤗 So finally Madhu came to know truth but she heard half things. Dipali was behind everything. She is not that good she wants to use both. Good RK realised and understand that he is not what he thought inside him a beautiful person wants to come out. His interaction and confession to Madhu was perfect. Indeed she helped him to break his wall and come out and this can only be possible because of that incident in their life. Or else RK would have never given any chance to Madhu. At end RK's manauing scenes were great return. He was so careful and possessive towards Madhu. He cannot able to take small cut in her hand. 😆 Love the way he convince his whole family that he is responsible man now. Well written each part which explains their feelings perfectly. At end Madhu cannot resist more and went straight to check his dearest husband.

Lovely update keep it up and thanks a lot.

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Jyoraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

It was a nice story very well written.

Keep writing.

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ankitashaw1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

vrrry nice i love it n vrrry vrrry happy ending which i love the most

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rekha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

wow nice ending geet i loved it it doesnot matter if she regain her memory or not they love each other and they live happily together

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arorasurbhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Awesome updates ... Lived it

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ashitha235

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

wonderful SS😊

will wait for your new SS😉😳

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cool_sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

awesome story!!!!!!!!!! u should write an epilogue for this..loved the story!!!

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Really nice Sangeet

Loved the last parts 😛. And you pls keep writing stories and pls pm me whenever u update one 😉

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Thanks a tons for sending me pm
why did you end it so fast?
Anyway the story was AWESOME
I hope now Dipali will keep herself
completely away from Rishbala
At times forgetting things are the best way to lead a life
I loved the way Rk charmed her family
I loved it till the very end
Please write more
And pm me if you write any new SS

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