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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

Superb Chapter Doll!!! I mean it!! For the first time, I am not feeling like pulling my hair...😆

really hai how this happened nooo😆
Though I am not liking this Raja at all till now, I loved the way you wrote Madhu's worry and tension!! Beautifully written Akku!!!👏 aaye aaye didu😆
Ahhh... The twilight touch!!! I like that song!! And the flashback you added so beautifully suited with the song... You chose so apt sequences of past girl!! Kya baat hai, madam to expert ho gayi hai re... Kya Baat... Kya baat... Kya baat!!😆
mai toh chaa gayi😆
Ok! So to maintain my sanity, I won't join the forecasting club of yours!!!😆 Bring it on Girl!!!!
And yes... One of the Best FF ever Akku!!! 😉😆
join forcasting group and ab kuch jyada ho ra hai😆


and you know i laughed a lot reading your comments😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanxx dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanxx zoya😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nadia724

Superb fantastic awesome update

thanxx nadia😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: revti21

Poor madhu...i think irfan was sent by rk to help her

thanxx revti di😃

heheh pls join forcast group😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: uma88

Beautuful update akku, actually i must be angry for making the hero missing and making madhu mad,but the second half of the update was wonderful, actually i don't know the song which u have mentioned, but with the way u had explained, i have imagined such a situation and those scenes u linked with the song was so apt.

I have no more words to praise this update, this story has a spl place in my heart, as its so different, but specially this update wil always be remembered


aww glad you are liking this story

thanxx a lot didu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .PheonixFire.

Very nice update Akku.
Loved the way you portrayed Madhu's emotions.
Continue soon.

thanxx and ya will try😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Awesome update Akku! Are ye RK baar baar kaha gayab ho jata hai! Bechari Madhu ne kitne sapane dekhe the!

thanxx pratha😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 21

Door opens...I thought may be miracle happenes and he came back..so I turned but they were my friends..i never thought I would be sad by seeing my friends ever...they came with a joy and fake enjoyment towards me..they have some parcels of food which they places in table front of me..i was looking their gesture with an expressionless face

"its so yummy madhu le na.."said krish

I didn't replied...

They tried to make me smile by cracking few jokes...I don't found any of them that can fulfil my sorrow..no laugh no jokes no news...

"fine madhu lets be straight" said shivi "you haven't came either to classes or to play since two days..we were worried"

"also not answering calls and msgs...that's why we decided to attack your room" said pusk

I didn't replied yet

"look madhu we know you are hurt..and certainly this is a very difficult moment for you and we all are with you" sid shivi holding my hands

"but madhu this play must go on..we found a actor who will play DUSHYANT but no one is able to do shakuntala...madhu this is for collages prestige..for collages honour..you have to do it" added krish

"and janeman when who will listen chief guest name you wont even be able to step back" said pusk in rejoicing tone

Finally I spoke out " I don't have to do anything with chief guest or anyone...the one coz of whom I was doing this is not here...no more in my life...I don't care about rest of the world"

"but madhu.." shivi tried to say something but nikki stops her

"guys I want to talk madhu" said nikki and all looked towards her "alone" she explained and other left from there

Nikki started " look madhu" she said sitting beside me in same position as I was "people die everyday..leave everyday..but it never means that we should leave world for them..my parents left me they died but I m still alive and living my life why..coz there are still people who loves me and cares for me..you also have such people your parents ...and your friends we..me..and you are saying you don't care about rest of the world for just a guy who even don't care about you.."

"he cares for me..alot" I corrected her

"huhhh cares for you..really you stil think so if that person cares for you in such a extent then why he left you" she replied me but she said this ironically "madhu" she softened "we cant stop of journey in absence anyone...we have to work on..and your first step would be playing in drama..without him..if you denied may be we loose and reputation of our collage too..but this loose wouldn't by our but would be yours because you stepped back due a guy..think about it madhu..we will wait for you tomorrow in auditorium" she tapped my shoulder and left

If she was right R.K. never cares for me..if she was right..what should I do now..

NEXT DAY

I DECIDED TO GO BACK..and to join drama once again I have to forget him I have to...

When I reached auditorium everyone have smile director rushed to me..and said "get ready we will reherse in dressup today..as tomorrow is the day"

I smiled ..my friends came and greeted me nikki looks me with a kind of relaxation..whatever it is but now whatever I wil do would be a pure drama..pure acting I have no feeling left now

Finally the one playing DUSHYANT is the AD..i have nothing to do with it

Time pass and next day came today is the main competition day...hope my inner sorrowness does not effects the play I can only hope so...

"next is ours" said director looking toward ourself "and the chief guest here as you all know..who is he..i want a straight impact on him..we are really honoured to have him as a chief guest" he added

"LADIES AND GENTELE MAN PUT YOUR HAND TOGATHER FOR OUR NEXT PLAY BY JOURNALISM DEPTT. OF APS UNIVERSITY" announced there and the play begins..and ended

I was good..fine I can say coz I acted the best I can do...

Finally time comes when the name of winner woud be announced..i m ready I have no expectation..other members face are full of delima few chewing nails..few rubbing palms few closed hands in way of praying..but I have no expectation no feeling

"finally most awaited time comes..we have our winners...now may I call our hounerable chief guest to come on stage and announce winners name" announcer was saying and I was looking all this from back stage...

Chief guest came..i cant see him clearly actually there is a curtain between them and us..but this face cut is familiar to me I think I know him...what I have to do whoever he would be announcer handed over mic to him

He finally spoke out "Dear childerns"

DAD!!!!!!!!! This is my dad's voice Mr. P. ramakrishnan India's president

Oh NO.OOO.OOO...god what to do now..he seen me...he was here automatically my both hand touched my forhead and sweat proust out...god god hope he haven't seen me hope someone else is winner...what if he calls me daughter in front of all ..i m gone I loose R.K. I don't want to loose my friends dad forget your daughter for this moment please...where to run...where to die..hell out of this where to go...what to do

"dear friends " he continued " all of the performances were very good and nicly inacted but I m glad to announce that winner of this drama competition is my daughters group"

Gone all...everything finished..he .said his daughter's group..all the auditorium filled with hustle they were talking to themselves that who is presidents daughter...yup I m going to me talking point from this moment and ownward...a sorrowness filled my group as usulal they are knowing that presidents daughter is not here hence some any other collage won ..they lost hope can be clearly seen..i don't know what would be there reaction after announcement


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