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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shasha1989

nice update akku
thanks for pm


welcome friend
and thanxx😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanxx ankita and ya will try😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Akku...yeh toda zyada ho raha hain..intni bhi suspense mat maintain karo yaar...thoda toh hum readers pe reham karde...bata dena ye mystery kya hai...chal koi nai...waise update tho dhasu that...kash hamara serial wala Raja bhi ek did aise hi English bolna shuru karde😆

loved the update

di jyada hoga tabi toh maja aaega
thanxx😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sani9226

read both chapters, awesome updates, like raja and madhu nok jhok, so confused whom madhu will fall in love with raja or rk, like your suspense in the story

what if she falls for both
hahaha😆
thanxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
all dearies
i want to clear one thing this story is as per MADHU's point of view so whatever is going on is as per what she thinks

PART 12

As I turned to my route a girl came to me partially half dressed

"didi pls save me ...pls save me" said she is shivering voice

"what happen just cool down what.."I tried to calm her

Raja left I turned to seek help for him but he left perhaps aww now I have to help her...

'are you alone" I asked

"nay di there are atleast 12 more girls struck there" her voice shivered

"okay just come...come with me" we just hide behind the tree

Now what to do... koll police dam my battery...if I save only her and let other suffer then that wont be good...god pls send someone what if my hero...shut up madhu what are you thinking

What to do..what to do...yeah I seen a big fat stick okay a danda there I can use this

"you just hide here I will save others too" I assured the girl

"nope di I will come with you" she said

"but.." I exclaimed

"you wont get them else' she proclaimed

"okay" I replied

We got there with theif steps and hide behind the truck I looked all side of mine thank god there is a way we can rum from there just need that these goons moves some other place ...

They were having tea and the one there was near truck ...god pls help me this time its not about me please... he is going somewhere yeah he is leaving... perhaps to put tea cup down that's perfect time ...I have to open that door and I did the same I opened it slowly and and signed the girls to leave slowly they first get afraid then that girl signals them and they followed here quietly

Faster faster dam what if they see me my heart beet was at its extreme right now... faster faster I waved them

"arrey wo bhag rahi hai" shouted one of them
"fater jao jaldi" I shouted too

Dam god help me now I cant run I have to save them with my full confidence and shivering hand I picked that danda tightly I have to stop them... I have to do this

"jao jaldi" I shouted again thank god last girl comes out from truck too

Now its me to fight with these three mustandey

"chali gayi sab pakar unhe " he shouted

'tum log unhe nahi pakar sakte mere hote hue" my shivering voice said

'tu rokegi hamein" one of them said

And they brust into laughter... why they are laughing ...why cant I stop them

And in their laugh one of them snatches danda from me and another sriches my hairs

"ouch" comes out from me

"waise iske kafi daam milenge...gora badan" said one

"bhai isee mujhe de do mai iski itni keemat dooga kee" said another

Dam they want to sell me ...i have to rum but how

Ya the one I seen in films

With my full strength and full power I hit between the leg of the one who hold me

"amma" cam from his mouth

And I ran with much speed I can ... They were following after running a while I understand I cant run like this hence I hide behind a bus

I can see they came there and left too in search of me

"hash" thank god they left

"Sakal hee nahi akal b hai iske andar" said one of them with laugh

"par kya hai na janeman film ham b dekhte hain" all brust into laughter

Dam ... I have to run again

And I ran with the best strength...and fallen I cant fall this time ...i tried my level best and ran again and collides with a person...my hero... Rishabh

"rishabh" came from my mouth and I hugged him tightly as I never hugged anyone before as someone gave sanjivni to the dead person I cant tell you how relax I was

"Rishabh pls mujhe bacha lo ye log...wo un larkiyo...mujhe pakar liya...pls bacha lo pls" something complete something incomplete I said

he comes in front of me by keeping me aside and looks at goons they get afraid and ran from there

Wow I thought their would be fight but they left amazing

"tahnxx.. I cant tell you.." I was about to say something

"you saved the girl in the truck" he asked

And I nooded

"They helped me to get here come with me" he said

And I goes with him

The girl who came to me higged me and said "thank god di you are alright I was afraid"

Rishabh ordered someone to give me water and said 'take care I will be back in while"

And I simled he gone somewhere I sat for a while but mere pair ka til I cant stay at a place for more time

And I started pacing here and their

"stay away from her" Rishabh was saying to someone

"you cant do this for a girl whom you met not even before month" said the guy with Rishabh

"look.."he was about to say something but the man pointed him towards me and he gone and rishabh looked towards me

Wow that blue eyes I m mad in these... If they were talking about me...

Rishabh came to me "why u have such a great intrest in me" he almost stomed to me

"what happen " I said

"why you always want to know me why came here" he said

"didn't you know the answer" I am in mood come on Mr. Kundra

"really should I know" he said in my tone

"ya a guy saved me almost everytime...always there when I need him...hiding his face always...talking with me rudely and talks other soflty...shouldn't I be interested in that guy... why cant i... and the same question I can also ask...did you follow me always...why you reach in every place I m " I said na I m in mood lets be aar yaa paar

"you think so...okay miss ..whats your name" he asked

"Madhubala" I said

"so miss Madhubala we saved 20 girls from racket nearly an hour before if you were there" he asked

I signed NO

"we conquered almost 3 tomm of drugs were you there too" he was louder this time

I said "no"

"there is long list of the same and you were no where then how can you say that I always follow you even one thing is possible that you gets into problem so that I can save you or you always follow me and find a place so that I should save you... look miss stay away from me.. its my duty to save you but keep your matters till you don't try to get in in my personal matters" he said and left me

I had teras in my eyes..but why...does it affects me...

...😭...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Fultu Filmy update Akku!! Ohoo... What an amazing stuff!!
I liked Madhu but I liked the dialogues of those goons more... Rofl... Film to hum bhi dekhte hain jaaneman... Rofl...
And a heroic entry of Mr Rishabh Kundra... And wait... So is he undercover cop or what!!! I am impressed with him now... I am still trying to imagine VD in blue eyes... Lolzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
awww mera hero he is a darling
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update dear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Akku Di!So Madhubala helped those girls and In d end Rishab saved Her!But Rishab spoke harshly wid Madhubala!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!

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