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Posted: 11 years ago
thanxx dia di for your feedback
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: momi78

I'm fida on RK's blue eyes!! All naughty thoughts coming to my head ... oh what to do??!! 😳


blue eyes hypnotise uski karti hai tennu

wait n watch u will certainly enjoy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

i think the blue eyes and Raja are one and the same...may be he's sporting that rude behaviour just to mask his Heropanti...

but i'm kind of confused with the color of the Eyes...blue eyes...normal eyes kaise angaye...😲

is he also like spiderman or some other super hero... trying to mask himself with artificial contacts🤔🤣


wah wah what an analysis

just keep guessing i really like this concept too
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanxx for reading and commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanxx rekha di thanxx for reading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Very nice update.

Ye RK ne heroine ko akele kyun chor diya??😆


because this r.k. is like that apne kaam se kaam😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Nice but make madhu character more strong dear...i wanna see our Jungli billi avtar not dreamy type...nd Rk kay ab vampire bhi hai...jo uski eyes blue colour ki hai...


everything will come di on its time she will turn to jungli billi but how thats the story
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 5

"Dekhiye I m first time travelling alone and first time rewa too mujhe kuch nahi pta pls meri help karo mujhe rewa thak chor do pls ek akeli larki anjaan kaha jaaegi aap toh acche insaan ho aap he Na mujhe girne se bachaya tha pls save me now too pls pls pls pls..." I can't leave this chance

Okay he nodded and signs me to sit in bike

I thank god and sat finally mil Gaya ham KO sathi mil Gaya ham se agar koi jal Gaya he ho jalne de ye gana chal raha tha mere mind mein okay so we are moving silently baatein toh mai apne aap se b karti hu

But no idea what to talk my heart is still beating badly abi toh yahi nahi stable Hui arrey yaar isne do baar meri jaan bachai but why his face is always covered god!!! If he is dacoit or what gabbar singh type!!!

Nahi nahi if he would then why he saved me... exactly he is better than that fool raja mil jaye WO raja mujhe doobara... uski toh

Dhaba again... he stopped in dhaba

"mai raat ko drive nahi karta mai aaj yaha rest karuga tum jo chahe kar skati ho rukna ho toh ruko mai tumhe kal rewa drop kar doonga else u can leave" he said in his serious firm voice

As I have option waise b raat ko kaha rehti mai ye dhaba he sahi as long as he is with me I m feeling safe

He left and signs me to seat in a chair and he goes inside and usne apne mask nikal liye sirf mujhse hee problem hai hainn!!!! Par mai Ni dekh payi yaar!!!

After few min a lady came

"Jo kahne ka ho kha ke udhar AA kar aaram kar Lena" she signs towards a room

I nodded she turned "suno" I called her "wo jo gaye yaha se"

"wo shahab ne hee mere ko bheja hai" and she left

Chalo theek hai but UN shahab KO mere se hee sharm kyu aati hai mujhe bus nahi dikhaya apna khilta hua chehra

Hogi uski koi problem mjhe kya Lena Dena

"Khane mein kya logi" he came and asked from me again se face covered kewal mujhse he ye kyu sharmaata hai

"Anything simple" I replied

"Take rest after eating and we will leave 7 am tomorrow" he left by saying this

After few min baigan ka bharta and chapatti came okay aaj ye he sahi ... My phone is bhannaing else who sunny

"Hi" I said in cheering voice

"Kaha hai" he asked in his fav tone

"dhabe pe"

"what r u doing at dhaba"

"eating"

"and bus"

Bus ka accident

"Nothing yaar its here only ..its night no so we are having dinner" I replied in as normal as I can

"Koi problem toh Ni Hui u r alright Na"

Problem...huh... first bus accident then that irking raja then those goons ab ise kya batau

"nahi re problem kahe ke" I again tried to b normal

"pakka"

"pakka"

"bye call me after u reach rewa"

"okay bye" and I cutted phone ab jab baat ho ri hai toh kaka ko b laga leti hu

Bell ringing

"kaka" I said

"bitiya kaha ho"

"Bus rewa pahuchne wali hu abi khana kha ri hu" don't know why but I have tears in my eyes first time talking to kaka via phone I miss him

"aaj ek azzeb baat hui" said kaka...Kamal hai hua mere sath aur pta inhe chal gaya "sahib aur memsahib ne larai nahi kee" he continues

Kamal ho gaya kya unke larne ka reason mai thi that ke mere aate he wo dono friends ban gaye

"sacchi" I reacted

"haan" he reacted in same tone

"accha kaka mai rakhti hu kal baat karte hai" I said to him seeing that blue eye is coming

"theek hai bitiya apna khayal rakhna" said he and cutted phone

"ye tumhara hai " he was pointing towards bracelet in his hand

Haan mera he toh hai sunny ne diya tha par iske paas

"haan" I replied firmly

"tum jab gir rahi thi toh mere haath mein aa gaya tha " he said and gave that to me and left

Arrey yaar I was thinking he is dacoit but he is so kind look even he gave me back my braclet its of gold

Chalo sote hain ab

Bus accident we are falling someone save and I jerked ...its dream yaar

I turned for water

"Hunnnh" glass fallen from my hand I had seen someone there what was that my heart is beating badly I can't sleep like this here I have to go outside to meet that blue eye I don't know anyone else here

I get out from there

Hash hero is sleeping without his mask aaj toh chehra dekh ke rahugi


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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb & Nice update dear !! 👍🏼

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