Rishbala OS- Night At The Movies

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone, Meghana here. My first OS on Rishbala is finished. I am not that skilled at writing as most members here are, but I tried my best and wrote this OS. Hope you guys enjoy and feel free to give me any feedback on the writing. It will help me improve for later projects 😃


At RK mansion...

"BIWI!"
I turned around. He wasn't there.
"BIWI!"
Where is RK?
"BIWI! Wake up!"
Next thing I knew I was completely drenched in water. RK stood next to the bed with a small bucket in his hand. He was up and ready.
"RK! What's wrong with you?"
"Come on biwi. The one day I don't have to go to shooting and you decide to sleep in."
"Ughhh...sometimes you really annoy me."
"That's my job biwi." He smirked. "I brought two movie tickets. We're going, and that's final."
"What...wait, a movie?!" Is he finally taking me out on a date? Am I still asleep?
"Are you drunk?"
"Biwi, you don't believe me. Or is it that you are still in your dream land?"
"No. I totally awake. You just don't seem like yourself today. You never took me out willingly."
"Today's the day then." He gave me my good morning kiss.
"What movie are we seeing?"
He gave me a wicked smile.
"Ram Gopal Verma Ki Aag. My jungli Bili will love it." He started to laugh really hard.
"That wasn't funny."
"Just kidding, Dhoom 3 is playing today."
"Why an action movie?"
"Biwi, you ask too many questions. Or did you want to see one of my films?"
I didn't answer. I didn't like seeing other girls romance my RK in front of my face.
"We're leaving at 7, sharp. Now go and get ready before you get hypothermia."
"Wait, RK."
"Another question, biwi?" He smirked again.
"Are you going to go like this to the cinema? People will be all over you."
"Don't worry biwi. No one will take me away from you. I have a plan. And RK's plans never fail."

A couple hours later...

"RK...where are you?"
"Right here biwi." I turned around and jumped. RK came in wearing a fake mustache and sunglasses, with a cap too.
How did I get stuck with him?
"What on earth are you wearing?"
"It's called a disguise biwi. We're going to see the movie like this. You get ready too.
"And what am I supposed to wear?"
"Wear that dress I have you a couple weeks ago. The black one. And here is one of those hats you girls like to wear." He threw it at me.
"I don't understand you sometimes." I groaned.
"It's takes a while to understand RK, biwi. Go and get ready. We're leaving in 20 minutes.

At the movie theatre...

"Biwi, we're here."
"I can see that, lets go."
RK parked the car, and we went inside. This disguise thing was bothering me.
"See biwi, no one recognizes us."
"Can I take this hat off when we get to our seats? It's annoying me."
"Oh biwi, always complaining."
We found our seats. The movie was about to start. RK tapped my shoulder.
"So biwi, do you like me in flims more or Aamir Khan?
"Aamir Khan. Why?"
"No reason."
RK was watching me more than the movie. It felt special. I don't think he took his eyes off me more than once.
"We need to spend time together like this more often", I thought.

After the movie...

"RK, I'm feeling very tired. Lets go home."
"Your wish is my command, biwi."
He carried me in his arms to our room when we got home. He set me down on the bed.
"How did you like our date, biwi?"
"I liked it, we should go again. And you know why I like Aamir Khan in films more than you?"
"Why?" He looked curious.
"Because the less time you are in films, the more time I have to spend with you. I love you."
"Me too, biwi. I love me." He laughed and left the room.


The End

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madhurish thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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short & sweet story😳
i loved it😳👍🏼
madhu wants to spend more time with her superstar pati..ahaan😉
keep writing more dear😃
by d way i m 1st to comment to ur 1st work😛🥳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

short & sweet story😳

i loved it😳👍🏼
madhu wants to spend more time with her superstar pati..ahaan😉
keep writing more dear😃
by d way i m 1st to comment to ur 1st work😛🥳


Thanks 😃 glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os i liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha.366

lovely os i liked it

thank you 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you
Glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chitrarocking

<font size="4"> lovely one😳</font>

thanks 😛
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Short and nice.
I liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Short and sweet os, do write more dear.

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