Rishabala FF: Can't Take My Eyes Off Of You: Part 17 on Page 136 19/11

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Grishu30

@Grishu30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Awesome update dear...loved it...thanks fr updating...Eid Mubarak in advance to you too...

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#572

Kitten and lover boy😊

pls dont say you don't feel like writing😭

Eid mubarak😊

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

Superb update..

Their care n trust in each other in such short time is amazing.

Eid Mubarak.

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ferii

@ferii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Awesome update itha ⭐️
Yah advance eid mubarak itha 🤗 🤗 hope u enjoy eid itha 😛

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#575

firstly, please please don't loose ur interest in writing!! u know how much we guys like ur writings & how desperately following ur stories so please dont do this to us! u take short breaks but please dont lose interest in writing dear!

EID mubarac to u too dear!!

okay! coming to the update...

fantastic update! i loved this part mainly for madhu & her punch to that liar nikil! he's such a creep!! i guessed that he is gonna get a big blow from my sheni madhu & he got the right fr talking ridiculous abt madhu!!

i love the trust & understanding they hold for each other!!

she dint show any scene for eating in roadside shops & also allowed him to eat non-veg!! that's so nice of her!

ha.. making out in beach that was something so romantic!! they were going wild in that moment without realising where they were LOL!!

Rk asking madhu not to wear revealing dresses shows his possessiveness!!

oh my poor Rk, already fighting with his urges but madhu's seeding him naughty ideas!! LOL!!

For the first time i should say i liked madhu more than Rk in any of ur updates!!

she is so so adorable, funny, loving, bold, innocent, beautiful, smart, witty... she is a perfect blend!! i should say this is the effect of her punch to that asshole!! i love this jungli billi!!

i hope u'll bring in trish & baba's enrty in next update as they planned to move to their home!!

thanks for the wonderful update dear!

Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

eid mubarak to u too in advance lazy😃

a v nice update.da way madhu punched dat idiot nikhil,mera dil garden garden hogaya.rk n madhu r the most caring,loving n adorable couple.

looking forward to next update.

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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

superb update...

i loved hw madhu punched that Nikhil...😆

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

oh my lazy,i love this "mary-kom" wala madhu...hey hey...poor nikhil
and then the hand playing...oh lazy...you got me there...i love it when you write couples playing with caressing fingers...its sooo romantic 😳😳😳

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..Razia..

@..Razia..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#579

What an update 👏
I truly loved it 😳
I got shocked when I read Madhu punched him 🤣
It was to funny 😆

BTW
Lazy can u plz write a Dark passionate possasive FF on
RM plz once u get time 🤗