RM FF || Madhubala - A Mystery || - Page 58

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

what an end!!!
fantastic work
touched by rk's word
m being greedy is the any chance for an epilg???
plz plz consider

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Amazing

suddenly rk will not be able to love madhu

will miss this story

Loved it

will u write an epilogue??

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

It was superb story n i loved it n enjoyed it to the core and i vl request y to write more

Originally posted by: lathaprasad

superb 😊

OMG!! Awesome ending dear!!

really I loved the way u ended the story!! it was so different & unique!! he neither accepted nor rejected her!! I could understand his depth of love for madhulika, knowing she was a ghost he still loved her & married her & when coming to know all that was a plan then his action is justified!! infact he behaved like a gem by forgiving everyone but till my heart went for madhu when she cried for forgiveness & accept her in his life & give her a small place...& i'm so glad that even he couldn't stand her cry & agreed to take her with him...for sure this is gonna lead them for a new beginning for them by madhu making all good for the betrayal she did to Rk & make him forget the pain he faced & paint a new beautiful memories of them with their love & also I can imagine their symbol of love, Rishbala's kids...haha...as a reader I can imagine something happy happy right?

So madhubala's love was also a mystery till the end!! nowhere u showed or hinted that even madhu is in love for Rk...even in dehradun u showed her fear but not her love for him...that was amazing!!

Its one perfect mysterious story with no loose ends left...u have beautifully tied all the knots well & amused us with ur excellent writing!! hats off dear!!

"A mystery" will always be close to my heart as I loved reading this story from start till end!!

thanks for giving me this exceptional story & please do write more such stories. if possible, dear.

God bless u, sweetheart!!

Originally posted by: SreeRK

Weird ending..but yes it was different..

let's hope Madhu wins RK's heart soon and they lived happily ever after😛

Originally posted by: madhurish

OMG!! Awesome ending dear!!

really I loved the way u ended the story!! it was so different & unique!! he neither accepted nor rejected her!! I could understand his depth of love for madhulika, knowing she was a ghost he still loved her & married her & when coming to know all that was a plan then his action is justified!! infact he behaved like a gem by forgiving everyone but till my heart went for madhu when she cried for forgiveness & accept her in his life & give her a small place...& i'm so glad that even he couldn't stand her cry & agreed to take her with him...for sure this is gonna lead them for a new beginning for them by madhu making all good for the betrayal she did to Rk & make him forget the pain he faced & paint a new beautiful memories of them with their love & also I can imagine their symbol of love, Rishbala's kids...haha...as a reader I can imagine something happy happy right?

So madhubala's love was also a mystery till the end!! nowhere u showed or hinted that even madhu is in love for Rk...even in dehradun u showed her fear but not her love for him...that was amazing!!

Its one perfect mysterious story with no loose ends left...u have beautifully tied all the knots well & amused us with ur excellent writing!! hats off dear!!

"A mystery" will always be close to my heart as I loved reading this story from start till end!!

thanks for giving me this exceptional story & please do write more such stories. if possible, dear.

God bless u, sweetheart!!

Superbbb update...
but didn't like end part ...why Rk forgive Madhu?????
if Rk didn't plan dis Mentally ill person game She already move in her life...i hate madhu for playing with Rk feelingggsss...


After d way she played with his love or even their marriage too...ya i know i need Madhu POV too for make my decision ...but i didn't need it becoz She has full Year to think about it nd accept her mistake...but she didn't choose that...

Awesome update. Loved the ending. I realy loved this story. Plz write an epilouge.

Read parts 18, 19, and 20 in one go! You built up the tension well, and then removed all the curtain of doubts one by one with your amazing writing! Very nice .. loved the climax scene ... and loved RK-Madhu's conversation at the end. Right now, the ending seems totally appropriate as separating them or uniting them at this point would have been cliche. But please write an epilogue .. I really want to see RK falling in love with Madhubala.