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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Mismatched Couple

Once upon a time in Mumbai at goregaon lived a mad adventurous girl in a medium sized flat. Her name was Madhubala Malik. She was expert in camping and other adventurous sports. She was appreciated for her work. She had a father named Shamsher Malik, a mother Padmini Malik and a big brother Sunny. And on other side lived a big and successful businessman named Rishabh. He seemed to be the most boooring man on earth. He had his life between his laptop, his office and his meeting. Once Madhubala was in a camp of Matheran and as usual a merit camper. In the camp they got the task of trekking up to the mountain. She had a very bad habit of forgetting as thought of she forgot her map and her compass. First she was with her friends but as she had to come first she starts running and forgot her way. Now she was shouting and crying and it was during rainy seasons so it started raining and she became wet but she didn't lose her hope and started walking towards the direction of sun. Very soon she came across the main road. Rishabh was passing through same road but was ahead then Madhu but on same road. Rishabh car got in contact of water and stopped working. He was continuously trying to call the mechanic, police and at home but couldn't because of bad signal. Madhu was walking and came across with Rishabh. Madhu asked Rishabh and Rishabh asked Madhu about the right way. They both sat together being two strangers finding out the right way but couldn't. Rishabh insisted that they should walk along the main road but Madhu insisted the go inside the forest as her camping site was inside the forest. She pulled Rishabh with her into the forest and started walking. Hours pasts out in walking but they couldn't reach the camp. So Rishabh told that they should return towards the main road again but they were lost in the huge forest. Rishabh was in search of his mobile network so that he could call someone but he couldn't. Rishabh and Madhu decided to go in opposite direction but they got tangled more in that forest. They were walking continuously and it started becoming dark.

Further part... how they encounter the huge forest

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved it
i am waiting to the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept, and different background, welcome to the forum.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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When it becomes dark Madhu lights up the fire and she feels thirsty so she removed her water bottle she drunk the water but seeing her Rishabh got desperate with thirst so he waited till Madhu had drunk then he tried to take the bottle and drink the water secretly but Madhu caught him and tried to take from him as she had one and only bottle but bottle got missed from her hands and felled in a hole built for animals to catch. She started to shout at him and asked him why he didn't ask her. Rishabh replied in embarrassing voice that his ego would get hurt. Madhu built a tent of big leaves using her camping skill but it was only as big as big as a LCD tv so to take more space both of them pounced in the tent as soon as they did so the tent broke. So Madhu built another one and she herself slept in it. But poor Rishabh he had to sleep outside. After a while Madhu heard an irritated voice. She came out of that tent cum roof she saw Rishabh outside getting wet in rain and mosquito biting him. So she felt pity on him so she entertained him inside but Rishabh was only ready to come in only if Madhu sleeps a little far from him. Madhu agrees to him and they put some rocks between them as a partition. They sleep. After a while Madhu gets up again but this time Rishabh wakes her and ask her whether she can make a pillow and a blanket of anything for him because he can't sleep without them. Madhu makes for him and the sleep again. At dawn Madhu wakes up and a growling sound is heard from behind of the bushes. She sees carefully and sees a bear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnk u all for liking n commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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bhaag madhu bhaag bear araha hai 😆 ...btw nice update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one.,..
liked the start..waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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She tries to wake up Rishabh but she cannot, so she pushes Rishabh very hard and Rishabh gets scared and get up. When he wakes up he asks Madhu about the reason for waking him up so early, so Madhu points over the bear Rishabh also gets scared. Madhu suggests that they should run but Rishabh refuses because the bear would become angry. So Rishabh removes his mobile and switches on his phone's flashlight, so the bear gets scared and the bear goes away. Madhu gets happy and gives a blow to Rishabh. As soon as Rishabh gets the blow he gets accelerated a little ahead and the roof of leaves gets destroyed so Madhu shouts at Rishabh. Rishabh tells Madhu that due to her blow he got the push so the roof felled. Madhu realizes and to hide this she changes the topic and tells to further continue their search for main road. While walking they both start feeling hungry. After some Madhu sees a tree of papaya and tries to break the papaya she succeeds and she starts eating. She offers Rishabh also but Rishabh refuses then Madhu questions him that whether he was pregnant or what so hearing this Rishabh gets annoyed and shouts at Madhu in very rude voice. Then in addition, Madhu forcibly makes him eat. As soon as Rishabh eats the papaya and becomes unconscious.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow genius rk...what a bright idea to make a bear run away... and madhu with papaya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Madhu gets shocked and shouts "Rishabh." Madhu starts crying. Then she observes rashes on skin of Rishabh. She starts dragging and takes him to the main road. However, where to go Madhu got confused but she kept logs of wood below rishabh and tried take him because rishabh was heavy enough by doing she was walking straight she did not knew how she by chance came to the main road She tried to take the lift on the road but no one is ready to take him. Then she observes her camp bus she goes in front of the bus to stop. She manages to stop. She tells to make place for rishabh to lie down. The instructor asks who was he and how he met her. Madhu tells the whole stories. There in bus, there comes Trishna and she sees rishabh and says that he was her brother so Madhu asks her after eating papaya what happens to him. Trishna tells her that he has a very bad allergy from papaya. As soon as he eats papaya and he faints and rashes comes on his body. Trishna tells Madhu that he should be immediately taken to the hospital. They reach the hospital and doctor takes admission fees. Madhu removes her earrings and gives it to doctor. First doctor refuses but Madhu forces him and then he takes. After treatment of rishabh, he gets up and directly tears a cheque of 10,000 rupees and gives it to Madhu. Madhu starts shouting at rishabh telling him that she was not the one who took money and gives service to someone. Rishabh tells her that she should take in replacement of her earrings. Rishabh forces him to take and then she cannot refuse so she takes. Rishabh bids a thank you and card to Madhu and Madhu proceeds to house. Rishabh has to stay in hospital until his recovery. 😊

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