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@Semeira

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Posted: 11 years ago

😊 Hey Friends,

I have been writing a long OS on another show..want to make a try about this one...i know it wont be perfect and maybe i won't be able to do justice to the characters as i have started watching this show really recently so please if it happens do forgive me in advance...

Here we go hoping you Guys will like it 😊 don't hesitate leave comments it will encourage me thank youu..my OS start on the current track...

Madhu was still shocked, how could Abhay do that to her ? How could Deeda hide to her the truth ? So many questions were taunting her but unfortunately right now she wasn't able to got some answers was left only two things : a betrayal made by Abhay Sir and a husband a perfect stranger who was behaving like a kid..

Madhu was at the door wondering if she should enter or not the famous room where her "husband" was sleeping, she take a deep breath and go inside, he was still sleeping with an angel face...and an innocent smile...poor guy he didn't even know what he did...Madhu comes near and look at him when suddenly he opens his eyes and says :

R : Good Morning Guriya 😊

M : surprised unable to say a word

R : Chauka diya na ?? 😃

M : 😲

R : Pata hai ghar peh na me maa ko aise chauka deta tha...

M : Me...woh...nashta

R : Nashta ? yeahhh nashta mujhe cheese omelette or or or jus or or or..

M : Tum fikar mat karo...me le ayoungi

R : Yeaaah 👏 tum bohot achi ho Guriya

M : 😲 she wasn't expecting any compliment from his side, she slowly left..

Madhu was in the kitchen making breakfast for her husband when suddenly Abhay enters :

A : Woaw Madhubala Kundra nashta bana rahi ho apne husband ke liye ? Not bad i must say i am impress was not expecting you to take your responsabilities so easily..well i guess you don't have any choice..you have to do it..

M : keep preparing the breakfast without giving a look or saying anything to Abhay

A : Kya baat hai ?? Itni bolne wali ladki..aaj chup kaise hai ???

M : not a word

A : Madhubala i am talking to you !!! 😡

M : ...

A : Madhubala when i am talking to you look at me 😡

M : turn look at Abhay and says very calmly Mujhe apko kuch nahin kehna hai Abhay Sir or jaise aap dekh sakte hai me busy houn apne pati ke liye nashta bana rahi houn...

Inside herself Madhu was imploring her heart to stay strong and to not show Abhay that he affects her and how much she is still hurt she has to be strong she has to stay strong for Deeda for her self respect..Abhay didn't deserv to see her suffering...hey pyaare kana mujhe himat dena..Mopuu tum saath dena..she was still praying..when suddenly :

A : Kahogi bhi to kya kahogi tum bilkul apne baap ki tarah jo ho 😡

M : Baas !! Mere maa baap ke khilaf ek shabd bhi nahin..

A : Oh...

M : Mere bare mein apko jo kehna hai aap keh sakte ho lekin apne mummy papa ke khilaf me ek shabd nahin sunha chahti

A : Warna kya ??

M : Warna...Warna...

Abhay was shaking strongly Madhu's arms, she was getting hurt and he was very angry...when suddenly RK enters :

R : Guriyaaa mujhe bhook lagi haii..he stops when he saw what was happening there he looks at both and says : Heroo tum yahain ?? Tum Guriya ko tang mat karo na please woh bohot achi hai pata hai kal se woh mera bohot kheal rakhti hai..

Abhay was shocked he suddenly left Madhu's arms and look at RK, he was the perfect copy of Reshab Kundra his ennemy, it was unbelievable..he comes near him and say :

A : Raju sambhal ke rehna...tumhari guriya ko dhoka dene ka bohot shok hai..kahin tumhe dhoka na dede woh..

R : Nahin Hero...Guriya bohot achi hai

A : Me keh raha houn na Raju !

R : Guriya gandi hai bohot gandi

A : Right keep that in mind

Abhay left and Raju comes near Madhu and says :

R : Guriya...tum gandi ho ??

M : Tumhara dil kya kehta hai ?

R : Ke tum achi ho...

M : To baas apne dil ki sunho

R : 😊👏

Madhu looks at Raju...even if he was behaving like a kid...he seems to have a golden heart, she has to take care of him poor boy..

End of the OS

Please do leave comments 😊

⭐️PART 2 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3974369/os-a-golden-heart-part-3-page-3?pn=2

⭐️ PART 3 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3974369/os-a-golden-heart-part-3-page-3

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved ur os

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Posted: 11 years ago

its a short & sweet os

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Posted: 11 years ago

its so sweet os... write more

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Little S

@Semeira

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Posted: 11 years ago

😃

Thank youuu sooo much wasn't expecting all this comments at all..

Here we go for the next part...hope you keep liking it..

Madhu put the nashta on the table, Raju sit and looking at Madhu he waits with an innocent smile, Madhu looks at him and Raju keep staring at her waiting with his smile :

M : Kya hua ??

R : 😊

M : Khayo na

R : Guriya tum khilayo na 😃

M : Tum..

R : Guriya khilayo na pleaseee mujhe bhook lagi hai

Madhu sit in front of him and she tried feeding him but Raju turn his face..

M : Kya hua ?? Abhi to tum keh rahe the ke tumhe bhook lagi hai phir kha kyu nahin rahe ??

Madhu look at Raju surprised...he was still looking at her with a smile, with an innocent expression on the face...Madhu suddenly got an idea, she took the roti and :

M : Plane airport ke karib arahi hai lekin airport band hai, Flight number 123 is calling the control tower Raju Sir kya aap airport ke darwaze khol sakte hai ??

R : 😃

M : Jaldi kijiye Raju Sir kholiye jaldi zoummm zoummm jaldi jaldi nahin to accident hojayega

R : slowly open his mouth

Madhu feed him and Raju start applausing : 👏 yeaaah !!!!!!

M : Thank You Sir...aap ne darwaze khole or plane land hogaya

R : Me nahin hota to accident hojata ??

M : Haan tum nahin hote to plane kabhi land nahin karpata 😊

R : 😃

Madhu start doing it again but Raju didn't open his mouth so she make the roti fall in the plate and says : Oupsss yeh plane to crash hogaya

R : 😔

M : Lekin fikar mat karo iss mein koi insaan nahin tha yeh plane candy se bhara tha..aab sab bache candy kha payenge good job Raju 👍🏼

R : Candy ??? Sachiii ??

M : Haan 😊

Madhu and Raju both start laughing 😆

From the door, someone was spying them and this someone strangely feel tingling pain in his heart seeing both laughing : it was Abhay, he wonders why he was feeling so hurt after all it was Madhubala..RK's and Madhubala Kundra's daughter his worst ennemies..why was he feeling jealous seeing both of them laughing...

A : to himself What the hell am thinking obviously i will feel bad i can't see her happy she has no right to be happy her father is responsible for my father's death and she's gona pay for that !! 😡

Abhay enters the kitchen and shout :

A : Rajuu !!!

Raju look behind and his eyes start sparkling like everytime he saw Abhay he stands up and says :

R : Gandi Guriya !!!! Heroe tum yahan 😊

A : smirking Aayo mere saath mujhe baat karni hai tumse 😊

Madhu wonders why he wants to talk to him in privacy she clean the kitchen and left for Bebe's room she has to talk to her, Bebe surely have the answers of her questions..Madhu reach the room she was at the door waiting to find the courage to enters when :

B : Puttar baar kyu khari hai ? Andar aa

Madhu slowly enters looking down..

B : Niche kyu dekh rahi hai ? Tumne galti thodi na ki hai ? Aaja beth mere paas

Madhu sat next to Bebe on the bed her tears start falling down...

B : Mat roh Puttar...me janti houn ke teri koi galati nahin hai...yeh saab uss secrety ka kaam hai warna mera Abhay puttar..

M : Nahin Bebe..yeh nafrat jo me Abhay Sir ki ankhon mein dekh sakti houn woh unki hai or mere liye hai...lekin Bebe mera vishwass kijiye me sach keh rahi houn mujhe nahin pata tha ke Abhay Sir or mere Papa ki dushmani hai..mujhe yeh bhi nahin pata tha ke mere maa baap kaun hai...

B : Kya matlab tujhe nahin pata tha ??

Madhu told Bebe everything which means the few things Deeda and Bittu Mama Chacha told her about her parents..Bebe's eyes were full of tears

B : Puttar me samaj sakti houn...me janti houn ke tere saath Abhay ne jo kuch bhi kiya bohot galat kiya..lekin uske sir peh dushmani ka bhooth sawar hai...woh meri baat nahin maanega chahe me

M : Nahin Bebe...aap Abhay Sir ko kuch mat kahiyega...unko apki zaroorat hai me nahin chahti ke meri khatir aap Abhay Sir se naraz hojaye..please Bebe...aap fikar mat kariye me theek houn or waise bhi Mopu or Pyare Kana mere saath hai sab theek hojayefga 😊

B : Bhagwan kare aisa hi ho...mera ashiward tere saath hai Puttar, Rab tumhari har mushkil asaan kare😊

Madhu was feeling confident now Bebe's know the truth and trust her she was feeling better, at least Bebe's ashiward was with her, now she has to be strong she pray inside Mopu and Pyare Kana to give her the strengh to face all the upcomming difficulties her destiny was going to bring..she left from Bebe's room and was about to pass by Abhay's room when she heard him says Guriya, she stays behind the door and try to heard what was happening inside :

A : Tumhe Guriya ko bohot tang karna hai ok ? Or jaise maine kaha waise karna..or phir dekhna me tumhare liye bohot khilone lekar ayounga

R : Sachiii ?? 😃

A : Haan baas tum wohi karo jo me tumse kahoun...

Abhay suddenly notice Madhu at the door and says :

A : Aayo Madhu baar kyu khari ho...

M : take a deep breath and enters

Abhay looks at her, she slowly enters facing him and she stops in front of him he looks at her and says :

A : Kya hua Madhubala ? Abhi se tang hogayi ho ?

M :...

A : Don't be..kyuke abhi tak to maine kuch kiya hi nahin hai..abhi tumhe tarpana bohot hai...

M : she gave him a strong look and confidently says Sasurji agar apki bakwaas khatam hogayi ho to kya me apne pati ko leja sakti houn ? She looks at Raju who give her a bright smile but when Abhay give him an angry look, his eyes look immediately down and the smile on his face disapear..Madhu looks at Abhay and says :

M : Abhay Sir...i mean Sasurji lagta hai ab kehne ke liye kuch raha nahin apke paas..aap mere pati ke kaan bhar chuke hai so hum chalte hai..

Madhu hold Raju's hand and walk away of the room with him, Raju asks her ;

R : Hum kahan jah rahe hai Guriya ??

M : Cartoon dekhne 😊

R : Yeahhh chalo chalo chalte hai..mujhe Tom and Jerry dekhna hai

M : Dheere Dheere chalo..

R : Jaldi na Guriya miss hojayega 😔

M : Nahin hoga fikar mat karo dheere chalo..

Abhay was sooo angry how dare she called him Sasurji ?? How dare she talked to him like that ?? He was Abhay Kapoor the Superstar and nobody has the right to talk to him like that without paying the price of doing it...

A : with an icy stare Madhubala you are gona pay for this !!! 😡

End of this part

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Qurat-ul-Ain

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sasur ji very nice I like it RK style

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awsome updt
Wow sasurji hilarious
Hum sabke dil ki baat tumne is story mai likh di
Aww raju is so cute
Papa se jyada toh ye apni gudiya ka fan hai
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