Rishabala OS : Mills & Boons Series 1 : Indecent Proposal

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I actually preferred this version then what you were planning to write. Sometimes RK can be so dense. Things are right in front of his face yet he sees nothing. Oh the fool! Glad Dips was there to open his eyes. Great story!

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rinku06

@rinku06

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Lovely os and the end was perfect.

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revti21

@revti21

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Superb story nd it was nt at all messed up

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

lovely os lazy ,i liked it ,😃😃

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vimala jersha

@christobelle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

nice os

loved how rk realised his love

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Mahi78

@Mahi78

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Good ob Lazy, loved it, 😃 Deepali has such a nice role to play in ur OS. Loved her.

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

I never thought I would say this first but here goes: I liked Dipali! And Thank you Dips!

I will start with your comment about how you had planned on ending the story and then followed your instincts. Please. Always. Follow. Your. Instincts!

I truly loved this ending better. This version was unexpected but it made complete sense!

Of course RK would be questioning why Madhu agreed and he would be questioning why does he care that she changed her mind. This RK is not shallow that all he wants is a ahem ahem but he truly cares for her. So it made complete sense and I loved it!

RK stopped and thought about the situation and his feelings and then with Dips' help he confronted Madhu.

I honestly never want your stories to end! I started the story and then I had to leave it half way. When I came back, instead of picking up from where I left off, I went back to the start just because I wanted the pleasure, the enjoyment, to last longer!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

hahahahaha rk is crazy. Bt i luved dis story. Thax fr pm.

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Hily Stevens

@RaniGayetri_DD

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

I like the story so much. The ending you gave is fine. Better than the one you planned.

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Kuku...I lovd dis ending rathrr den d other one dey havn one nt stand nd den realizn..it..
dipali convo..
was awesome. .specially dat last killing part. 🤣
lovly 🤗
WAITIN for next on dis series..
luv u..for dis
cont soon

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