SS: I am pregnant with your baby [Discontinued]

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Cliched name
I don't know how cliched the story will be but I promise drama
and tons of it.
I am in an angsty mood.
Don't expect too many revelations now.
Just go with the flow.


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[Scene: Rishabh Kundra is waiting for a guest in a cafe. A man by the name of Neil Mann enters]

"Look at you bas***d acting all high and mighty! What good have you done to end up so happy? This isn't fair, is it? You should be the one suffering. You should be the one crying not my woman, you bad jerk!"

He thought all these thoughts but didn't say any out loud. Instead, he entered the cafe and immediately got down on his knees.

"Please save her", he said.

He was never a crier but today the tears won't stop. With bloodshot eyes and barely sucking shallow breaths in, he begged him until he broke.

"Only you can save her. You are the last person, no the only person who can make a difference. Speak please".

His eyes frantically darted left to right but always stopped in front of the man in the chair. He was so desperate he could die from it. He was so frustrated he could murder to rid him of it. He was so in love he was blinded by it. So he tried, again and again, until the man in the chair budged.

"Neil, she isn't my woman. I don't have any right over her life".

With those few words, Neil's patience was long gone. This was all he could bear to hear from the mouth of that proud bas***d. He took a seat in front of that bas***d until his angry eyes met his indifferent ones.

"Rishabh, listen to me carefully. She came to me yesterday, flustered, confused, she was wailing. The woman I have known for ten years wouldn't so much as bat an eyelid no matter the stress in her life. For the first time, she broke down. Her vision was cloudy, her speech slurring. She stumbled into my room, held on to my leg like a puppy taken from the litter and cried for two hours. She isn't the woman I have been in love with for 10 years. She's turned into a stranger all in the span of one day. What exactly did you do to her?"

There was no reply. That much was expected. Neil had toughened himself before coming here. He'd known there would be nothing but disappointment carrying expectations from this snake like man.

"She is pregnant with your child. So the wrong you have done, fix it. Fix it in time or you mark my words Kundra I am going to ruin you. If you hurt her one more time, I will take her so far away from you that you won't see so much an eyelash of hers in this lifetime. I will take her away and then I will come for you. And when that happens, when that happens you bas***d, you better run. Run like the wind and don't look back because I am going to make you cry tears of blood. I am going to dig your out of your rat hole and kill you slowly. Of course, anyone who has ever looked upon you favourably with also die. I am going to destroy every hair on your body and eat the rest of your for breakfast. SO, FIX IT. FIX IT and don't ever let it come to this. Don't make me come to you. Don't make me see her cry again. DO NOT, listen, NEVER test my patience. I will cut you, understand?"

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Aaru4DVD thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great.. continue soon and pm me wenevr u update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice continue and please pm me
DonnaHarvey thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fyi ya'll
I will not be sending pms.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

fyi ya'll

I will not be sending pms.


:( then shud. we stalk???
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Originally posted by: Aaru4DVD


:( then shud. we stalk???

yes, go for it😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intriguing, RK has made her pregnant and Neil is also in love with her but she sees him as a friend to confide in, they've known each other for 10 years so his no stranger. yes looks good.
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Originally posted by: .Nafisa.

Intriguing, RK has made her pregnant and Neil is also in love with her but she sees him as a friend to confide in, they've known each other for 10 years so his no stranger. yes looks good.

you are half right and the rest of your guessing is VERY wrong.
try again if you wish.
but you came close girl.
this would be my first guess too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha.366

nice continue and please pm me

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear
madhu is pregnant with rk's child...but madhu and neil knows each other for 10 years...hmm,they r friends???😕...or was lovers??😕...or hubby and wife and madhu cheated??😲oh god,my poor guessess😆

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