FF: Ankahee | Thread 1| Chapters 1-33 - Page 72

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

201.4k

Users

77

Likes

4.2k

Frequent Posters

yogendra1 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay


Ah okay I feel terrible now. You know this portion wasn't part of my original story, I don't know why I added this. I started typing and it became this. It was supposed to be a happy story for a while. I feel awful now.
I will post chapter 26 soon too - already half done - to explain a bit. The rest I will explain when I end the story.

And yeah eventually RM end up together.

But meanwhile, I am very sorry.

thanks for the confirmation that RM will be together now I can read the remaining part of the story with relaxed mind.U know what your story remind me of last year April when makers were trying very hard to make Sultan the hero and RK villain and being a RK and Rishbala fan I was very tensed and watch each episode with a hope to get some clue to know whether RM will be together or not. I Must tell u your story is very gripping .u should write a novel because the way of your story telling is awesome.
teekay thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
Ok your comments are depressing me. I am sorry for a terrible chapter 25. I should have stuck to my original story and not gone into the details of what happened here. It's still the same track, but this wasn't supposed to be so detailed and so gory. I feel awful.
I just finished chapter 26. It should answer some of your questions.

Sorry.
Edited by teekay - 11 years ago
teekay thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 26

Madhu was shivering when RK returned. He immediately embraced her and tried to console her.

"I...killed...them..." Madhu's words were broken and RK's eyes watered seeing Madhu so hurt.

"No honey...you didn't" RK mumbled as he hugged Madhu tightly protectively. Two days back, he had been shaken to his core when he picked up Madhu's phone and heard the police constable repeat what he had just told Madhu. Two middle-aged people, identified as Mr and Mrs Malik, had died on the spot in a road accident 45 minutes ago. Their taxi had collided head on with a truck that had jumped the red light and there were no survivors. Horrified, RK tried to wake Madhu up.

With the nurses' help, she regained consciousness after half an hour but she was in a state of complete shock, not responding to anything. RK and Rohan took Madhu to the police station, leaving Ria and Nisha to take Maya home when she recovered. From there, RK called his parents and explained everything, and they had all helped complete the formalities and bring the corpses to Madhu's home in Benaras. Madhu was not in a state to do or understand anything. RK had hoped she would break out of the trance when she saw her parents, but she did not react. RK had called Deepali, who had rushed to Benaras and informed all relatives as well. For two days, RK and Radha had been at Madhu's side, but it was like she wasn't even aware of them. RK knew how important Madhu's family was to her and seeing him so broken shattered him as well. At some level though, he was thankful to Deepali. Her poisonous words had finally broke Madhu's trance and maybe now, she could let herself grieve.

"Rishabh...I killed them...Rishabh...Ma...Papa...I should have been in that taxi...I should have been with them...they had come for me..." Madhu was hysterical even as RK tried to comfort her.

"No Madhu...Deepali didn't mean that...she is hurting...but she didn't mean that. It's not your fault. It's not anybody's fault. It was an accident." RK cupped her face and tried to explain, hoping she would believe him if she saw it in his eyes.

"Rishu...why did Deepali say you made her convince them to come for my wedding?" Madhu asked after a few minutes. The question surprised RK, but he knew it was going to come up.

"It's not like that Madhu. Listen, I had just..."

"Tell me Rishabh"

RK sighed. "After I learnt everything about you and your family, I knew it was important for you to be there for you and your happiness would be incomplete without them. So I found their number from your phone and called them. I told them about us and asked them for your hand. Your mother didn't say much, but she was indifferent. She didn't want to come for the wedding. I gave up at that point. The following day, I coincidentally ran into Deepali. I learnt that the client I was working with...our project was about completing a merger deal between my client and Sikander Bhatia's company, who was Deepali's husband. We didn't think the deal was very good for our client, but their CEO insisted on doing it. At that time I did not know that, but somehow I got to know that Deepali was cheating on her husband and sleeping with my client CEO, and that was the reason the CEO wanted to do the deal with Sikander's company. I also recognized Deepali from the photos you showed me, and when I talked to her, it was confirmed she is your sister. So I just asked her, if she didn't want me to tell Sikander, which would screw up the deal as well as possibly her marriage, she could do me a favor and ask her parents to be a part of your wedding. She agreed, and so the next day I asked Ma to call them and invite them over. That's all."

"It was a lie.." Madhu gasped, shocked.

"I am sorry Madhu. The only reason I kept all this from you was I didn't want to hurt you. You were so happy to have them near you. I don't know what Deepali told them, but honestly, I think all I did was make them show the love they always had for you. It wasn't a lie, Madhu. I am really sorry."

"Go away, Rishabh." Madhu screamed.

"Madhu...I am sorry. I only wanted your happiness. I didn't want to hurt you."

"Go away, Rishabh. Go away. Don't you see what happens when I try to be happy or someone tries to make me happy? Don't you see what happens to every life I touch. I killed my parents, and I will kill you as well. Go away from me. Leave me alone. I will not marry you." Madhu screamed in hysteria, before fainting again. Her grief had finally overtaken her.



RK sat outside with his mother. Fresh tears streamed down his eyes. Madhu had slept after RK had called a doctor who had sedated her. He knew she was in shock and had over-reacted but remembering her words sent a fresh wave of panic run through Rishabh. What if she really was in that taxi? Was he really losing Madhu? Could he?

"Ma...I can't see her in pain like this." Rishabh cried to his mother.

"I know beta. But she is a strong girl. She is going through a lot, but she will come out of this. You just need to be with her, by her side. She's your responsibility now, Rishabh. You love her, don't you? Now you have to give her strength so she can recover again and learn to live again."

"You're right Ma. I will not leave her side. But she cannot heal here. We have to take her away from here Ma."

"Yes. We'll take her tomorrow with us." Radha said, comforting her son.

After a few minutes, RK looked up at his mother and said, "Ma. I cannot leave her alone anywhere. I want to marry her. As soon as possible. I want her to have a home."

Radha nodded in understanding. "I am proud of you my son. Madhu has a home, and a family. We will take my daughter home."

Destiny sulked, shocked at the last minute loss. So close, yet so far. RK had trumped Destiny, leaving her bitter-faced and empty-handed. She should have known better. RK had always been the king of the grand gestures. It was hard to beat him on the big things, and hard to beat Madhu as long as RK stayed with her. The only hope was in the little things, and with one of them at a time.


Destiny really should have known better.


Edited by teekay - 11 years ago
rekha.366 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
wow back to back updates thank you so much taru🤗 lovely update ,so love rk how he handled the situation ,hope madhu depression main na chali jaaye😭😭 this time she needs family support , love and care and i think radhaji will give her motherly love . and i like rk desicion to marry madhu and take her his home ,she badly need that😳😳😳

RK had trumped Destiny, leaving her bitter-faced and empty-handed. She should have known better. RK had always been the king of the grand gestures. It was hard to beat him on the big things, and hard to beat Madhu as long as RK stayed with her. The only hope was in the little things, and with one of them at a time.

i loved these lines so much😳😳

Edited by rekha.366 - 11 years ago
teekay thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha.366

what 😕 you did not want to senior member😆😆😆


No. I guess I was happier and saner when I was just a silent member. 😕😭😔
cool_sri thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
omg... i need to update myself with the story..
havent been reading it..sorry...
read only dis chapter..poor madhu...she is suffering so much..but am happy rishab is with her...
hope this maya doesnt come between them...

manju21.k thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay


No. I guess I was happier and saner when I was just a silent member. 😕😭😔


Taru cheer up.....we love ur story...and its ur imagination u can take it as u hv thought abt it...so dont feel bad...😃
Love u dear...🤗


yogendra1 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update .Love RK and love u too teekay for updating this part today. waiting eagerly to know Madhu's reaction on RK's Marriage decision.I know she will not agree easily what RK will do to make her agree for the marriage.
Khush13 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
My friend recommended ur ff to me
and so I started reading ANKAHEE
I just finished reading all the chapters
but I didn't want to comment before reading all through it
so that (hopefully) explains why I didn't comment earlier...😉😆

U have penned down all the emotions so well😊
from their love to separation
from confession to denial
from dreams to heartbreak
its just awesome😃
U are a wonderful writer👏⭐️


Khush13 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay

Ok your comments are depressing me. I am sorry for a terrible chapter 25. I should have stuck to my original story and not gone into the details of what happened here. It's still the same track, but this wasn't supposed to be so detailed and so gory. I feel awful.

I just finished chapter 26. It should answer some of your questions.

Sorry.


It is your story and I am sure u know where u are taking it
it is completely your imagination and your version of their feelings
it does make us sad after reading some parts
but then it is very realistic ,
and that aspect of the story has kept all ur readers glued to it
so you dont need to ask SORRY
the way the story is going with the flow is great
Ur ff actually has connections with reality , so pls let it be that way...
dont get depressed
Edited by Khush13 - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".