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GOODLUCKANGEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

After reading cmnts cudnt stop myself frm reading update.😃 But still rk's pain is nothing infront of pain n hurt which he gave to madhu till now.😊

He is really so stupid, idiot , immature n one confused soul n yup COWARD too. D way he broke up wid her instead of knowing reasons of unhappiness n solutions to solve them.I mean wat kind of a man he is. Cant he take such important decisions of his life himself?

I REALLY WANNA KNOW HOW OLD IS RK ? i dont think he wud have realised his love n mistakes if ria n rohan wudn't hav talked to him n shown him mirror .I mean maya said its okay u had breakup n he thot its okay. then rohan n ria advised him to talk to madhu n patch up n he again changed his mind . when wud he bcm mature eneough to take imp decisions of his life himself.

This time also he went behind her bcz he was kind of astonished n hurt to see madhu leaving him, not talking to him properly n saying final goodbye to him happily.

wen wud realise dat his so called bestfriend is actually Dost k roop mein BHEDIYA n his worst enemy who wants to snatch his real love n happiness. she was ready to propose him 👎🏼, seriously as if he wud say yes. HATE HER🤬

I so want to see madhu going straight to vikram's house n hug him tightly n pour her heart n ofcourse say sorry to him [ only in friendly manner , like dat party night] n den door closing leaving RK completely hurt . 💔 wanna see him suffer same way like she suffered n realise his mistakes like he realised his true love for madhu today 🥳

BIG THANK U for this update buddy🤗🤗🤗🥳

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

LUV U TK ❤️🥳

U R BEST 👍🏼👏

Waiting for more pain n hurt for rk 😉😛

waiting for moo kaala of dat looser w..tch /b..tch 👎🏼 she shud get exposed [ i dont think it wud hpn bfr RM's engagement]

continue soon dear👍🏼🤗

update was really stress buster for me 😎I'm happy 😃

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

U shud write a novel on this concept buddy👍🏼

ur updates r very long [ i think one update is equivalent to 3 -4 normal updates as i hav seen in dis forum]

so relax buddy n take ur time . 🤗😃

lu u muah!🤗

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

super update 18... nice to see rk's side of story for 1st time...loved the way u depicted his confusion, anger, frustration n helplessness at this break-up...

letme tell u, i saw many ppl blaming maya from past few updates but i never thought she was evil...she just started feeling for a guy who was her friend till now n her emotions were getting positively responded by her 'friend'..so its obvious any gal might fall for it...she didn't deliberately plan n plot against madhu just like the stereotype vamps do...(omg m sounding like defending maya but m not)...

today for first time, i thought she did WRONG...she just listened to rk crying,panicking,breaking in front of her n asked him to 'MOVE ON'(with her?) n convinced him that madhu still cares for him 'just as a friend'... instead of giving him a piece of mind like riya n rohan..n was she proposing rk just after 6 days of his break-up?

big XOXOXO to riya n rohan...they perfectly hit target...👏👏👏...
riya made him realize that he was treating she,maya n madhu r just the same...n he is just TAKING UP from this relationship...loved that sentence...big hugs to u...

finally, i hope maya realized that RK DOESN'T BELONG TO HER...
curious to know what happens next..

p.s. i don't know if vikram's role is over or not..honestly don't want viky n madhu hook up..bcoz ultimately rishbala gonna end up together n can';t see vicky get hurt in a process...

Edited by memad - 11 years ago

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: teekay

Sorry writing Chapter 17 took a lot out of me, and Chapter 18 wasn't going to be easy to write either. Besides, the last few chapters have been almost 4000 words - that's almost like 4-5 "normal" chapters. It takes me almost two hours to write one right these days. I hope you understand.

But, to make up, I have posted Chapter 18 several hours earlier than the one-chapter-per-day. Let me know if you like it.😊

oh, yes, i can understand...writing is such a task n this is not just writing..its quality writing...
i loved the new chapter...god, i never ever replied so long n deep until now..but ur story automatically make me write more n want more...

the best part of this FF is i'm reading n enjoying all the comments along with the main story...something which i never did n never occured to me before..

on funny note--i just realized ..m i being too demanding like rk accused madhu?😲...oh, no, u take ur time..

Edited by memad - 11 years ago

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-Blue_Sapphire-

@-Blue_Sapphire-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

and runs off to read 😛

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: rekha.366
phir se iam late😭
taru ,love love love you for the update🤗 ,i liked rks point hmm bandha upset hai ,muje laga birthday party ,ke baadh break up party dhega 😆😆😆,thank god 😳,and love ria and rohan there are true friends ,not like maya😡😡 i liked ria questions ,kya kbc kheli hai😆😆😆iam impressed 😳,bandha realize hogaya he loves madhu ,hum bhi kab se keh raha hai ,he really loves madhu but me ,myself ke chakkar main madhu ko bhool gaya gadha kahika😡 now i dont want madhu easily maaf kardhe ,he should suffer to get madhus love ,trust.and maya hate her ,propose karne jaa rahi thi madam🤢 ,i warn you maya ,get away from rk ,he is belongs to madhu only madhu ,😳😳
waiting for next update taru🤗🤗

riya..n her kbc questions😆😆😆😆

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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

God !! It was awesome. ...rk deserves this...especially after wat he made madhu go through. ...I dont want madhu 2 forgive him...he deserves 2 b wid tht maya. ..ria is outstanding. ..love love love her...she showed him d mirror...maya's true colours should come out soon...I would b glad 2 see rk's reaction wen he will come 2 knw about her reality...he deserves heartbreak coz he broke madhu's heart...n this maya...she was going 2 propose rk huhh ?? I wished rk would have been in his senses @ tht time...so he would have 2 come 2 know why madhu was insecure ...but I guess it will never happen ..d prologue itself said tht...update soon...😭

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-Blue_Sapphire-

@-Blue_Sapphire-

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#469

Rk is pathetic 😡 I hope Madhu doesn't forgive him.

He needs a taste of his own medicine ; Madhu & Vikrant can start afresh as friends & Madhu may see life with an open perception . As for RK he can go to Maya now forever 😡

Fabulous parts ⭐️

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Saha Vikram Khanna

@SahaVikamKhanna

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#470

Remember what I posted in my earlier review if u let RK dumped Madhubala, I will not read your story. Well, I was this close to leaving it midway, but then I realized, as a writer it's not fair to you, you're writing for us, and I should be encouraging and praising you not threatening you😆 Anyways, I'm still mad at you TK.

Chapter 16 was heartbreaking, despair, and full of anguish. I hate to admit, but that breakup was already on horizon, and it was only a matter of time. Breaking up is never easy, but it's perhaps even harder to simply continue on in a relationship one isn't happy with. Am I happy with the way RK broke up with Madhu? hell no, he could have met her face to face insensitive jerk😡😡😡 And now he doesn't love her anymore😡😡😡 so she was a time pass, a passing fancy for him😡😡😡😡😡

chapter 17: If I have never told before how talented writer you really are, then let me tell you now, you're by far among the few writers whose talent goes beyond words. standing ovation to you👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 another heartbreaking and full on emotional update. u covered all stages of breakup from denial to anger to bargaining to depression finally, the acceptance. I was happy Madhu went to the party, saw, realized and finally accepted it herself. she needed this reality check that RK moved on so should she. why do i get this feeling she will come out stronger? best way to move on is completely ignore that ass.😆 I hope she has re-gifted the same gift RK gave her on her birthday😆🤣

chapter 18:did i ever tell you how much i hate this bitch Maya?😡😡😡😡😡 RK emotional turmoil and second guessing his decision👍🏼 Rohan and Ria showing RK the mirror👏👏 the best part was the birthday note" what a slap it was on RK's face"👏👏👏👏 him finally realized what he has lost. I hope Madhu doesn't take him back in the next chapter.

can't wait to read the next one. update soon.

Edited by SVK1234 - 11 years ago

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