Rishbala SS- Broken Ties -Pt.9/Pg 58-[18/10] - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: harman12

Nice update continur soon


Originally posted by: cool_sri

Nice update...

I guess the suprise is RK😊😛


Thanks and yep rightly guessed😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shasha1989

lovely update dear
but im disappointed that u didnt introduced rk in this part😆
waiting for the next one


HAhah another heart break...am sorry😆
but he will be in the next part and that is for sure...am not gonna break ur heart this time...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

LOVED MADHU'S REUNION WITH HER PARENTS AFTER SIX YEARS

BUT WAITING FOR RK NOW


Ahhh...you too...hehe...don't worry he will be there in the next update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u everyone for all those likes and comments (i have replied to all of them so do check them out). i know many of u were disappointed with me not introducing RK but in this update he will be but before that i want to clear some confusions.

Padmini and Shamsher had run away to get Married and had no contact with them since then. Therefore the Malik's never knew about Madhu. When Madhu left her parents they felt the pain which the gave to their parents by leaving them (Lol Karma). And they never really mentioned about Madhu as they believed that she has abandoned them and is also angry with them. Hope this clears some confusion...😊

So here goes the next part..

Part 3

"So who is it?" said Payal as we walking along the corridor. Really this girl never let me

at peace.

"what do you mean?"

"Who is the guy that Dad is talking about?"

"How am i supposed to know...there are so many i know...how about you just wait...only

a few more hours to go..." i said least bothered.

"How old are you by the way?" she seemed to be younger than me but i was curious

"Am just about a 5 years younger than you..." so she was 20.

"Btw do you remember me?" i looked at her confused. Did i know her or have i meet her

before?

"ermm...have we meet before?"

"Yes...well that was ages ago but we did."

"When?"

"It was when u came to Delhi to promote your film, your second one. In 2009." she looked

at me with hope.

"i remember coming but when did we meet?"

"Remember i was the one well..who..err...spilled my drink on you.." she said in a nervous

voice. Oh God that was her! I had cursed her so much that day! Calm Madhu..Calm. I

gave her a smile...

"Yh i do remember that.." still keeping that plastic smile to which she smiled back.


"You know my friends are going to freak out when they find out i am related to you..." she

said giggling...

"Where is the bathroom?" I said...i needed a break from her.

"just go down straight and then left.." i hurried from there.


"Hey Madhu.." said Karan who i found around the corner. He seemed to be a nice guy.

"Wanna go to my room...she won't come into my room...so wanna head over there?" he

asked casually. Really he was a life saver. I nodded and headed to his room. I was big and

was painted in different shades of dark Grey. I let myself fall on a bean bag and he did the

same on another which was opposite mine.

"So tell me something about yourself..." i started a conversation.

"hmm...there is nothing much to know about me...am a shy guy...help out with the family

business and that's pretty much it." Now that was something i would not believe.

"Oh come on Karan...i bet you have another secret life..."i said with a wink and he blushed.

Like actually blushed, a guy.

"I bet girls must drool over your good looks...so tell me who is the lucky one!" i said with

excitement.

"Well..."he started off while scratching his head "...there is someone i like...but i don't

know how to tell her..." he said with such an innocent look. We continued talking and he

mostly kept on describing the girls he likes is and their cute meetings. Really such a good

looking guy who seemed to have a good personality too had problems proposing someone?

Well i gave him loads of tips and ideas aswell..to which most of them he laughed off. He

had a good sense of humor too. We were disturbed by a scream and i knew who's it was...

"Payal..." we both said sighting.

"Lets go and check on her.."

"No...she always does that when she gets super excited..."said Karan not even bothered

to get up..

"Come onnn..."I said as i pulled him up by his hand..."Come.." really he was still not

budging...what was he..a 5 year old? I took his hand and started dragging him out of his

room till the sitting area where the scream came from. I felt some unusual sensation rise

in me with every step i took. Something like this never had happened to me before...maybe

i was just hungry...it was already around 8 and i hadn't eaten anything after lunch.


A tall man stood in the middle of the room; had casual wear on, a pair of blue jeans with

a maroon leather jacket on top. I needed to see his face...he looked so familiar from the

back but who was he? He was happily chatting with Daadu...that voice...it seemed like a

part of me...that laughter was like music to my ears which made my heart race.


"Ahhh...here she is...RK you probably know her really well..." said Rohan Uncle. Wait

what did he say...RK? It couldn't be...and then he turned around.

For the first time in the whole day i Froze...i couldn't move...couldn't think...it was just

me glaring at him. My eyes started moistening, i could feel tears building up in my eyes.

The same emotions reflected through his eyes too...my Rishabh's eyes. All our past memories

started rushing through my head...it was making me dizzy until i felt my eyes closing...i saw

was Rishabh...my Rishabh running towards me...

"MADHU!!!" i couldn't control my body anymore...i was falling...but luckily only to fall

into my Rishabh's arms.


RK's POV


It has been 2 years...2 long years, since i left this country...to get away from that guilt...from

those feelings...but not any longer. I can't live without her anymore...i need her...in every

moment of mine. I have come back to India just to get her back...my life...my love...my

everything. God had parted us 2 years back and i deserved it...for all the pain i gave her,

but she didn't. But now let what come what may...i will get MY Madhu back!


I had only informed Uncle Rohan about my arrival back to India...he was the only one i

could look up to right now...Madhu still would have not forgiven me and well my mansion

is a place where i don't want to go back to...not with all those memories present there.

Rohan uncle is like a father figure to me after all he did consider me as his own son. Him

and dad were best friends and also business partners but after their death when i was just

17 i wanted to make my own identity...and look at me now am the Superstar RK! I was

going to meet him after a long time...10 years!


His family seemed so loving...especially Daadu and Daadi, but his brother Shamsher and

his wife Padmini...why did they seem so familiar? As if i had seen them somewhere before...

but there was something else about this place...i had a strange feeling in me...which made

me curious. Uncle did tell me that i would be pleased to meet someone here but who...

Payal?? No..she was another of those fan girl types. Deepali?? Well she was just giving

me those seducing looks...i just smiled at her thinking what Madhu would have done...

probably poked her eyes out...hehe

"WOW!!! Today seems to be a special occasion..two Superstars..." I didn't hear what

Payal said after that...this strange sensation rose in me which made me turn around

without thinking...


I just stood there...as if time had been frozen...it was just us two...nobody else seemed to

present over there just us and our love. After 2 long years i was seeing her angelic face.

Those hazel brown eyes. Straight dark brown hair, carefully placed on her right shoulder.

Yes i had seen her on screen...never missed anything related to her...be it from her latest

movie to just a normal picture or just a related gossip but still i could not touch her...feel

her...love her...


I could see those tears forming in her eyes...just wanted to take her in my arms and tell

her everything will be as it was 2 years ago, but before that she started to fall. As quickly

as i could i ran to her...catching her in my arms shouting her name...

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So how was it everyone??

Please do leave feedback and do like 😊

Edited by lubzzxxx - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I told you Lubu, I am actually stalking you... Rofl
I am here even before your pm... Heights of Stalking!!!! Rofl
Hmmm... Lubu, you finally brought him in light...
I was just thinking if this time you again give us a Chakma then you would be definitely cursed by all of your readers more than anything... 😆
Coming to your update... It was just Fab!!! You wrote it amazingly dear!!!
And RK is also a Superstar... Wow... But the mystery begins from here... Wow... What did he do with her?? Betrayed?? Are they living together or were they married???
Now, I am literally warning you to update it soon... Means really soon!!!
Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So both are superstars! Interesting! I wonder what happened between them 2 years back that had RK leaving the country in guilt! Update soon please ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

I told you Lubu, I am actually stalking you... Rofl

Reservedwa...


Lol i hadn't even sent out PM's yet and here u r already reserved..hahaha😛

looking forward for ur feedback😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
So finally entry of rk! btw nice update. curious to read what happened between them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update Lubeeda Di 😊 Finally My Superstar arrived 😛 So Rishbala know each other already!But how?What happened 2 years ago?Were Rishbala married? 😕 Coz RK said that He can't go back to the mansion bcoz of some memories!What did RK do that He had to leave the country in guilt?So many questions!& the answers only U know 😭 Pls continue soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written prologue👏 and Madhubala is already a superstar

Chapter 1
I really like how you introduced Madhu's family, she has a big family, and an annoying and weird cousin😆 don't change the title, it suit the story.

Chapter 2
something happened to Madhu in those 2 years. family reunion is over and all is forgiven. An
d uncle Rohan surprise hmmm is it RK😉😆

Chapter 3
annoying and weird cousin Payal 😆 a true fan. Karan to the rescue. so far I like Karan and Madhu friendship. he is easy going, friendly, and seems like a nice guy. i hope he stays the same. so RK is the superstar himself. the first meeting b/w them, and her fainting in his arms were they in a relationship 2 years back? something major happened b/w them? did he cheated on her? betrayed her? that's why he left the country???... so many questions. I guess have to wait for your weekly updates.

please update soon or I will hound you😆

Edited by SVK1234 - 11 years ago

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