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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh gosh my first OS ever 🤣 I am so nervous ! I really hope
It's good !! The reason for this OS was that I always wanted a lip kiss and and a rain dance between RM! I no they will never give it to me 🤣 so to please my self I wrote one how could it be 🤣 ! A girl who hates Writing and reading and is just horrible at spelling is writing a OS 🤣 the things I do for RM!!!!🤔🤣I don't no if it is gutter or not 🤣 but if it is than 18 and up🤣 a girl who is 15 writing this is saying 18 up🤣🤣Plz don't throw chapels it's my first try 🤔🤣





It was a full moon night... With grey clouds covering up the sky. Rk and Madhu were driving they were going to a award ceremony. Rk dressed in a black suit with a red tie , Madhu wearing a yellow saree with curly hair. That saree Rk gifted her.
Rk asked Madhu and told her to wear it tonight for the function.

Madhu: (asking all nervously) Rk Tum Lagta hai ki yah saree teek hai is award show ka liya...

Rk: Biwi come on You are Rk wife You always have to look different for everybody else.ending that with a smirk)

The car was slowly slowly stopping. And finally stopped.

Madhu : Rk what happened?

Rk : Biwi ek min...Let me see.

Rk gets out of the car and opens up the front part of the car.

Madhu trying to see what's going on... Rk close it up and tells Madhu

Rk : Gas is coming out

Madhu: (All mad )what now... what do we do.

(She felt rain drops...) oh great now it's raining what do we do rk !

Rk : (Looks around) Biwi look a house. Lights are on let's go their just for the night. And tomorrow morning we can leave.

Madhu: (Scared) rk what if someone is their and does something to us!!!! No I don't want to go their .

Rk : Come on Biwi let's go !! (Madhu still not agreeing ... SO RK picks her up !)

Madhu and Rk all wet from the rain rk running to the house..
Madhu telling Rk to put her down .. She can walk by herself .
They see the doors open . Rk puts Madhu down .

Madhu : Rk I am scared... Please let's go from here.

Rk : Biwi look no one here let's stay Naa. Nothing will happen ( while saying that he closes the door )
Rk looks at Madhu.. [Color]( Madhu trying to dry her hair from the rain )[/Color] Rk slowly slowly walks towards her ...
He Goes behind her and holds her tight and says..Madhu all nervous.

Rk :( Goes near her ear and whispers)Biwi why are You drying Your self. You look so sexy . Mat Karo na . Yellow Mai Tum Bohat sexy laghti ho!

Madhu Turns around to him gets her hand puts it around his neck...Rk slowly slowly gets his hand and puts his hand though her saree and holds her wrist . And pulls her towards him. Their is only a finger tip distance . They are that close that the only thing that can go though them is their breath.

Rk : biwi . Raat akahli ..
Nobody is here not even Bittu Ji .
Tum muja voh dado jo muja chaiya hai.

Madhu is blushing and pushes Rk . When she is trying to run away from him her saree gets stuck to his suits buttons.
Rk holds her palo.
Madhu all nervously is breathing harder and harder . She holds the tip of her palo. Making sure it does not open more .
Rk pulls her Pali towards himself ! Madhu closing her eyes. With her heart beating fast . The only thing You can hear is their Heartbeats. Both of them wanted to come so close that no one can ever seperate them. Rk gets his hands again and puts it around her wrists . Madhu feeling the coldness of his hands , she starts shivering from his touch and just does not want him to let go of her . Madhu turns around and just gives him a tight hug ! This time that tight their is no space for anything that lil space is for their love . Rk puts her that close that even if she tries she can't get out of that hug . Both of them feeling each other's souls uniting not wanting to let go of each other ! Both slowing slowly seperted from each other . Both were lost in each other eyes ! Rk picks up Madhu and goes out to where their car was ! Both of them getting wet while just looking at each other ! He gets her and lays her down (he lays her down in the front mirror of their car) Rk tries to walk away . Madhu gets his hand and holds him shaking her head saying no . She is
Breathing faster and faster , as he comes
Closer and closer!

(Background Music : Hayi Ram Yeh kya howa)


Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain


She gets up and just starts hugging him ! Rk gets her face and hold it tight and gives a kiss in her forehead


Tauba Meri Tauba Ab Kya Sitamb Hai
Kaise Zidd Karne Lage
Jaane Tumne Kya Kya Socha Aage Aage
Hum To Ab Darrne Lage
Arre Socha Hai Yehi Raat Aur Din
Tujhe Pyaar Karenge Hum
Darrte Ho Kyon O Jaaneman
Mere Pyaar Se


Madhu starts shaking she tries to get away but he hold her back! His hair all wet he kisses her neck and than her face he leans to kiss her on her lips. But madhu puts her hand in his mouth and shakes her head !

He gets her and starts twirling her around she is about to fall when he catches her! They both stare at each other again!


Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain


She holds his collar and looks at him all nervously
She goes towards his back and puts her hands around !!!
Rk holds her arms and kisses her hands ! He gets her and puts her In front of her and kisses the bottom of her hand and kisses her hand until her reaches her neck ! Puts himself in her neck and tried to kiss her again ! But madhu stopped him again!
Madhu ran away but suddenly the wind blow and her saree got in RK face ! You could see her stomach showing . Rk removed the saree and and went closer and closer to her her went and slowly touched her stomach . Madhu covering her face in Rk shoulders getting all shy ! The feel she was getting when he was touching her she never wanted that feeling to go ! Madhu slowly slowly got her face
Out of his shoulders , she was just staring at those deadly eyes,

Kaali Kaali Zulfein Gori Gori Baahein
Mujhko Tadpaane Lagin
Honth Bheege Bheege Nasheeli Ye Aankhein
Pyaas Ko Jagaane Lagin
Chhodo Na Aisi Baaton Ko
Kyon Kaun Raahon Ko
Modo Na Meri Baahon Ko
Jaane Do Na


The wind blowed again...
And madhu hair got in her face

Rk gets his hand and removes her hair from her face . He saw her face all tense . Rk shakes his head nodding meaning don't stop him now !
He gets her Paulo and opens it up slowly gets her towards her and picks her up ! Twirls her around the rain !
They both go inside the house ! Madhu is in arms and trying to hide herself inside of him !
They both go upstairs to a room !
He lays her in bed ! He closes the doors .
He gets his jacket off !!!

Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain


He goes up to her and gets her ear ring off ! (Madhu can't control her self )

Madhu : Rk Tum...
Rk gets his hand and puts it in her mouth!
Madhu looks at him !
He leans towards her
Madhu gets her hand and puts if around him , she closes her eyes and They both kiss , the way they kissed like they have never kissed each other and just wanted that Tadap to go away from their souls they both just got Lost in each other... They started to feel each other's souls ...The last thing u could hear is their breathing nothing else !

Lights turns off.

Next morning
Both of them inside each other arms ! It looked like both of them were each other blankets that whole night.
Rk wakes up looks at Madhu and her eyes, he leans foreward and kisses her forehead , Madhu wakes up with a smile ,


Madhu : Only a forehead kiss ,

Rk : Ahahaa Biwi kya bata hai

They both slowly get up and Rk leans over and Kisses Madhu on her lips,
Madhu smiles , she sees her lipstick stain in his mouth and removes it ,

Madhu : So is the car fixed

Rk : Uhmmm Biwi You no how I said the car is broken well I was lying

Madhu : Kya !?

Rk : Biwi come on You actually thought I would take You to a award function when You are wearing this sexy saree and I won't get to do anything , if You did than You don't know me .

Madhu : Rk Tum bhi na

Both Hug each other !


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Credits :
Okay a big Thank You to hanna ! That's just my baby she just helped me with the title and gave
Made me the siggy !!! Love You so much for this ! Like truly 🤗 what You did for and has always have done I can never forget about it ! Love You loads and Loads ❤️
Edited by Cute_Strawberry - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great work! Keep it up! wish I could write like you.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awwie its was so beautiful Razu my cutipies rock
great job Razu👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This Is your first OS?!?! Nah...you write beautifully! Loved it Razu!
Edited by shweta2728 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oye hoye razzy...
Kya likha hai aapne.. kamaal kardita hain...

Waise where r u??? Reply nahi kiya aaapne
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG RishBala That was electrifying You write so very beautifully 👏 The way you describe in your writing is sublime. I felt like I just watched a hot romance filled episode of MB. I could hear the song and see the beautiful scenes. Absolutely lovely read 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW!😃


Omg!! Omg!!! OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!! So beautifully written 👏
I could see them and hear the songs .. Naughty RK and blushing beautiful Madhu
HOTTEST Couple eveerrr
Amazing OS Baby, you rock!! Love it and love you 🤗

you know what, Now i need more 😆
now i can sleep may i'll dream about this 😛 😆
Edited by -Hanaa- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations on your first story on Rishbala 👏 It was really awesome & nicely written ❤️ Keep it up the good work ! 👍🏼All the best Razu 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Razu Di!pls can u send me a friend request?

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