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Posted: 11 years ago
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ETWINED WITH YOU


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Rk stopped in his track listening her voice..

" Bhook ...Dard... Akelapan.. aur INTEZAAAR.." madhu gulped... her eyes tightly closed... While she broke down like a baby...

He came back and knelt infront of her... Looking at her with horror.. who is she? Same as him.. how can she feel the same as he feels???

" bachpan mein... mere maa baap ko kone ka dard... phir akelapan... Pata nahi.. kaha jaana hai.. kisse baat karu aur kisse nahi??? Zindagi mein bhook ka ehsaas bhi dekh chuki hun... aur who ummed.. ki koi na koi aayega.. aur uske INTEZAAR meinn ab bhi zinda hun.." she said between her sobs.. weeping badly that no one could bear...

For the first time.. he felt weak.. seeing his reflection in her.. his feelings in her.. his tears in her...

He cupped her face... and kissed on her forhead...

She looked in his eyes... which are crying for her..

He nodded his head saying her not to cry..

She gulped and throwed her arms around his neck into a soul searing hug... While his rights hand is on her head and the other on her back.. patting her.. rubbing her back...

" kyun.. kyun mere saath hi aisa horaha hai??" she cursed on her fate..

"shhh.. ab tum akeli nahi ho madhu.. I'm there for u..."

And she weeped badly on his supporting shoulder...

And unknowingly... don't knw wen she fell asleep in that squeezy and comforting hug.. but she felt happy.. which is somewhere lost in her life for a long time.. and drifted into a peaceful sleep..

He slowly. Carefully brought down his right hand to his shoulder level frm front.. that he can see her face.. as his right palm was supporting her head..

Her baby face... her soft skin.. her cheeks.. her tried tears.. showing him sumone whom he forgot long back... the grief in her face is clearly seen...

He lifted scooped her up in his arms and placed her carefully on the bed... he kissed on her forhead and is about to get up wen he felt jolted.. she is clutching his collar..

He smiled.. and softly placed her hand on her stomach... and strted walking back to his room...

He once again looked at her and closed the door behind him..


Well lemme clear u.. they are not couple... nt in a relationship.. or frnds.. THEY ARE STRANGERS.. this is a passionate story of two ppl who lost everything in their life except a hope of having someone.. atleast once in their life who cares for them.. who loves them to peaks where there are no bounds... it contains of some mature parts ... and many twists...


BUDDY ME for pm's...

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Desire6 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nc prologue WAITIN for story to start
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting n nice start... Hey aaru pls update MBM also...pretty pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey aaru thanks for pm. Nice prologue,.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start...but How???? he knew her name if they r Strangers...Any ways Plzzz Continue Soon dear...Excited 4 first part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start, Aaru...
Continue soon
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb concept aru...plz continue...and waiting for update...
nahi to ronnie ko jaisa tang karte hai tuze bhi karenge😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start Aaru Di!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant start Aaru.. As usual looking forward to it now desperately 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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two strangers but going through same feelings??nice concept aaru👏
waiting for the twists and turns👍🏼

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