RISHBALA SS: Afar for my Love's happiness Epilogue on pg 58 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice beginning!! RK's past sounds painful. will be interesting to see Madhu bring some happiness into his life.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start Dear!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2


RK was sitting on his chair smiling widely remembering his crazy past. Madhu had now reached her cabin and was sitting in her chair and smiling remembering the same.
---------------------------------Flashback
Two people were fighting with all their heart in a classroom. Students were gathered all around them. Some were happy and hooting seeing them fight bucking them up to fight more. Some were uninterested as they felt it as everyday drama others were horrified and still some trying to pull them away from each other. But the two were busy fighting with each other and pulling each other's hairs. At last they were pulled apart.
RK shouted- " Keep off Malik!!! and thank your destiny that I dont beat up girls"
Madhu- "I will show you who beats whom"
"Your tongue is longer than your height."
"YOU!" and Madhu pounced back on RK pushing the others who were holding her.

Sultan, Trishna, Dipali and others wondered what happened to them again.

15 mins back

Actually Madhu was sitting on a desk and working on a piece of paper very intently as RK came inside and saw her and stood behind her watching her do her work. He bit his lip to stop himself from laughing seeing Madhu do her work with so much focus.
RK- "You must add a mole"
Madhu is shocked- "Huh!!" as she looked back in fear.- "Shut up! Its my drawing"
C'mon Madhu Prof. Baldso just scolded you for being late. he was right. Dont be so mean to him." RK said as he controlled his laughter.
"I am just venting out my frustration."
"with that horrible caricature of yours. I can see that."
"Yes.. He looks like this to me." Madhu said determined.
RK stood there behind her as he saw Madhu drawing on the paper. Madhu was getting irritated as she felt RK standing behind her. Though he just stood their but she knew he was laughing hard in his heart. She felt irritated and angry at RK... he was getting on her nerves now.
"Yes poor Prof. Baldso with all those horns and teeth and that potbelly. I am telling you add a mole on his cheek, he would look funnier."
"Kundru, this is my thing.. why are you soo irritating."
RK burst out laughing at last not able to control any more. Madhu became furious and jumped over him to beat him up.
And the next thing was they were both battling.

As they were fighting Prof. Mehta aka Prof. Baldso (called like that because he was bald) entered the room to see what all the fuss was about.
"Whaat thee hell are doing you 2" he shouted in his crooked english.
RK and Madhu looked at his side and then at each other and then again at Prof Baldso and held their heads as low as possible to control their laughter.
" Whaat this waas fighting over you 2" he asked while the other students too held their mouths from laughing.
Madhu and RK's faces were red as they tried hard not to laugh.
Prof. Mehta asked again-" Tell reason to me, are you kindergarten kids fighting like hooligans"
Sultan interrupts as he realised that something is fishy otherwise the two would have covered it up by now.-" Oh leave them sir... you know they never need a reason to fight. Its their favourite hobby"
RK looks thankfully at Sultan with an i-so-owe-you-bro look.
Prof. Baldso or Mehta walks off mumbling to himself.

Rk and Madhu burst out laughing... as they almost rolled on the ground holding their stomachs and laughed uncontrollably.
RK raises his hand towards Madhu for a hi-fi and Madhu returns the hi-fi both of them still laughing. When they had controlled a bit Madhu said to RK- "You were right RK... a mole would have looked funnier." and she burst out laughing again.
RK -"I told you..."
"Waise he looked no less funnier without any of it..."
Madhu kept laughing as RK admired her still smiling widely ear to ear.
They got up and hugged each other heartily.

Everybody looked at them amazed. But Sultan was shocked-"SO THAT WAS THE REASON OF YOUR FIGHT"
Madhu and RK looked at each other giggling. Other students moved away from them amused at their child-like behavior.
Sultan-" Unbelievable!! Baldso was right... worse than kindergarten kids."
"yeah... samjhao isko" Madhu says playfully.
"Cut the crap Malik" "Sultan you saved us man!!... I doubt if Baldso would have laughed at his horrible imitation like that"
"yeah... thanks sultan"
"Ohh yeah... you two should worship me... cuz iys not the first time." Sultan said sarcastically...
" By the way Madhu... Mukund was searching for you"
"yeah go... tael ki dukaan bula rahi hai"
"He is my friend Kundru" Madhu says annoyed.
"yeah friend-cum-puppy"
"C'mon RK"
Sultan-" Dont start again both of you."
Madhu walks off... Sultan-" why do you have to irritate her all the time"
"I dont know man! but i love to see her Jungli Billi avatar..."

---------Flashback ends

"Chief..." Bittuji comes and interrupts. And Rishabh returns back to his present. Seeing Bittuji he realised that who he is now. He felt a thorn prick his heart.


Precap- Madhu's life.
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Thanks a lot all of you... it really encouraged me.
Edited by katrina75 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
i liked ur story dear...wanna know hw was their past
i hav send u a buddy req,plz accept me...pm me also
and cngratz 4 ur first work


hey i'm first to comment😊
nice part...rishbala r worst than kindergarden kids😆
wow i lied their funny fights
we hav seen rk's life...hmm...waiting to know precap😊
Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update. I went into past. Me and my best friend used to fight like this. Everyone used to tell us that you guys are worst than kindergarten kids. Seriously, we were total disasters.😆
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Amazing update Dear!Loved Rishbala's past fights!Waiting for precap!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vrrry nice love it dear continu plzzz really want to know madhu life n y rk is change a lot plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Loved both the parts Katrina... Kinda loving their college life 😉..continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Awesome update. I went into past. Me and my best friend used to fight like this. Everyone used to tell us that you guys are worst than kindergarten kids. Seriously, we were total disasters.😆

Thanks for the pm.




Thanks a lot... i am really very glad i was able to remind u of ur school life... i am amazed my imagination was so vlose to reality...

😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice update dear. continue soon and pm me plz.

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