Rishabala FF: Every Breath I Take : Thread II Link Posted (31/03) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Desire6

Prologue looks promising
dats one of my fav movie
nd am on for dis one...
as I said ...Addiction. ... 🤣

stupid lk button nt wkgn frm cell

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

Very nice beginning! thanks hun😊😊Already so many questions in my head: why is RK talking to Madhu instead of the little brother? Why are the parents not considering RK for Madhu and they jumped straight to the younger brother?? it will all be answered in the first part itself😃

Looking forward to your new story!!! i hope u'll like it😳

Originally posted by: ..Ananya..

It seems gripping.. 😃 i hope the story will be hun😊
Please add me in your PM list 😊 will do😃

Originally posted by: -kitty-

plz cont. soon

Originally posted by: sharmila04

its ...meee...😉 HEY!!!

5th time coming first to your update... party time🥳 Congrats again hun👏👏👏👏

was busy with my rangoli...when i opened i found u already updated soulmate and tum mere ho...

missed two update...finally made it here... me first LOL

you started a ff...👏👍🏼... super...i was missing ur its in his kiss update... thought i will repost it here...

now i can enjoy with this new ff... hoping u will😳

already fallen in love with rk in this ff he is going to irritate u big time😉😆

Originally posted by: zina.92

Another lovely story
Waiting to read further
Cnt sn

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

hmm...this story is like mujse dosti karoge...but in a twisted way😉...rani replaced by rk...😆 LOL yeah😆😆
u know what lazy,its my sis's fav movie...but i hate it...i wanna him to marry kareena maybe bcoz she became alone in that movie after her papa's death...anyway waiting for updates... though i always wanted UC to get Rani.. I wanted Hrithik to marry Rani only😳😆😆
by the way i'm happy that u didn't changed neev name to sulthan or mukund bcoz i like the name'neev kundra' and jai will suit as a younger bro to rk... i wanted to stick to the name Neev 😳
you likes one character in it????who is it???patil???...or that ishann of 'KISS'?whats his name?hmm...bharat chawda...is he here?? BC is not in here.. i like RK's self hating Madhu loving alter ego😉😆😆
waiting to hw will rishbal end up together... I hope u'll like their journey in this😳

Originally posted by: Prettyliars

Nice start

Originally posted by: rekha.366

nice story lazy .continue

Originally posted by: manju21.k

Awesome start Lazy...😛 thank you hun😛😛
But y he lie to Madhu...🤔 that will be explained in the first part😊
Continue soon Lazy...😛 will do😃