Rishabala FF: Every Breath I Take : Thread II Link Posted (31/03)

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shasha

@shasha1989

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

hi lazy, i missed ur updates in these days.welcome back.
long & great update. continue soon & thanks for pm

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alina.b

@alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Awww so cute!!! Madhu will be so happy with her present!!! I want Rishbala to meet face to face!!!

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Hmm am commenting after all the four parts hehe !! Chorry 😉!!

Firstly I love this self talk that goes on and on in Rishabh's mind hehe !! This talk turns their tele conversation totally hilarious !! The way his heart goes on saying I love her..and it keeps itself a separate entity makes me giggle totally lol !!

Loved the way their relation is progressing gradually and the rising comfort level in their conversation !! Their feelings getting stronger n stronger and in no time they will obviously realize their feelings towards each other 😉 !!

Can it get any more hilarious where his conscience speaking to him as a separate entity expressing its opinion and love towards Madhu hehe !! They way it condemns Rishabh left n right adds such humor to their talk making me lol all the time..wish his conscience had its own body lol.. As its more romantic than Rishabh himself 😆😆 !! In fact it forces Rishabh to take up that extra mile with Madhu hehe !! I totally love when I get to read to that talk and it's brilliant when they both start accusing each other 😆 !!

Tele conversation with Neev as per Madhu is totally cool hmm lets see what happens when she will realize its actually with Rishabh 😉 !!

Welcome back Lazy 😳 !! Love you 🤗

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Oh..boy!
Such an amazing update...hahaha (couldn't stop myself from writting oh boy hehehe)
Keep it up :)

-Sana

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

i think even i'm gonna catch up to that "OH BOY...OH GIRL" thing😆...

both are falling in love and rishab is in denial even though his alter ego has admitted the fact but he being tough nut is not ready to accept it...waiting for the day when both will come face to face..

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Wow, very nice story lazy dear, i love this Oh boy and Oh and Oh Girl, missed these very much in your absence, now happy that will be get to read that regularly.

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Haaaaawwwwwwwww

@Haaaaawwwwwwwww

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Awesome !! it was fun reading it =D

loved it =D

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Nice update !

Okay, so I just don't comment or like and seriously I don't get time to log in also ...

But anyways i get back to read your updates so ... PLEASE CONTINUE PMing me !

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stay_on_waves

@stay_on_waves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

For me your this story its jst smethng sweet but makes me confuse alot and I cant guess what will happen further I want to see how will madhu reacts for this deception of these brothers they should tell her soon...