RISHBALA SS : PYAR DOSTI HAI update pg 28

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: rekha.366
nice character sketch dia continue

thak u so much

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

nice start dear👏
u can make madhu suffer as much as u want since i know atlast rishabh will be there😊
so this puppy is the one u said in tittle!!
is rishabh is puppy now as some witch had cursed him or its rishabh's fav.puppy that went missing...anyway its my guess...u continue dear😊

Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

This sounds worse than Cinderella. Poor Madhu! What a horrible life she has had.

Pls continue!

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Lovely concept Dia...the name is also very nice... I am sure this is gonna be fantastic...pm me when u update...

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Character Sketch - So RK is elder than Sikandar.

Different and nice concept.

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Res give me time to read first chapter.

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Nice concept...pls PM me...😊😊😊

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Part 1- Beautiful!!!! No eggs and tomatoes only hugs and love dear!!!
So Malik and Padmini died...here we get that Pabo and Trish r negative...could not understand whether Ballu is negative?????

Waiting for the entry of the prince, Rishabh...hope he saves his damsel in distress...

loved the update...cnt. soon...thnks for pm...