RISHBALA SS : PYAR DOSTI HAI update pg 28 - Page 7

LOVED THE UPDATE DIA...
YOU WRITE VERY WELL... CRISP AND TO THE POINT...

PAINFUL ON MADHU'S PART... SHE HAD SUFFERED A LOT !!
IT WAS DIFFERENT TO IMAGINE TRISHNA AS A CRUEL SPOILED SISTER!!

SOON PRINCE CHARMING RK WOULD TAKE AWAY ALL HER PAIN... CONTINUE SOON DEAR !!

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

nice start dear👏
u can make madhu suffer as much as u want since i know atlast rishabh will be there😊
so this puppy is the one u said in tittle!!
is rishabh is puppy now as some witch had cursed him or its rishabh's fav.puppy that went missing...anyway its my guess...u continue dear😊

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

This sounds worse than Cinderella. Poor Madhu! What a horrible life she has had.

Pls continue!

Originally posted by: rg0782

Lovely concept Dia...the name is also very nice... I am sure this is gonna be fantastic...pm me when u update...

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Nice update.

Liked it.

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

Nice concept...pls PM me...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: rg0782

Part 1- Beautiful!!!! No eggs and tomatoes only hugs and love dear!!!
So Malik and Padmini died...here we get that Pabo and Trish r negative...could not understand whether Ballu is negative?????

Waiting for the entry of the prince, Rishabh...hope he saves his damsel in distress...

loved the update...cnt. soon...thnks for pm...

Originally posted by: loveurkmadhu

nice update rima..👍🏼

Originally posted by: uma88

Nice update dia, and this deserve applause and not tomatoes and eggs, thanks for the PM. Waiting for the prince entry