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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
LIKED THE TITLE...
INTERESTING START DEAR !!
DEEP INSIDE THEY HAVE STARTING DROOLING FOR ONE ANOTHER...

WILL WAIT FOR NEXT..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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madhu realized the meaning for rk's smirk...and came back to
her cabin...her eyes were about to tear...her past life
flashed in her mind...she closed her eyes and said to herself
"i have nothing to loose"...meanwhile rk was happy on seeing
madhu's condition below him ...madhu finished her works and
left as soon as possible she could...she felt rk's memories were
disturbing her...

madhu felt relaxed on reaching home...she lied on her bed
and tried to close her eyes...her flash back ...flashed
in her mind...madhu was happy to rejoin her school after
her holiday's...it was her 11 th std...on entering school
she parked her cycle and tried to lock it...due to lack of oil
...her cycle lock seems to be rusted and hard to lock...she
tried fa about 10 min and got tired ...she heard a soft voice
from her back..."may i?????"...she turned back to see rk
who parked his cycle near her's...and locked madhu's cycle...
madhu meanwhile admired his smartness ...his cute voice kept
echoed on her ears...she had never saw him before in the
school...she kept looking at him...while rk handed her the
key...with a cute smile on his face...madhu stood there like a
statue seeing his figure disappering...it was her first class while
madhu still thought of rk and his cute smile disturbed her a lot...
madhu tried to find him but couldn't...days passed she never met
him...madhu left her schooling and joined college ...she has crossed
many guys in her life never found anyone as interesting as rk...
she always use to dream about him...days moved on...her college
friend invited her for a birthday party ...madhu was unwilling to
go there at first later something inside her deep heart insisted her to
go...as soon as she reached the party hall...someone hit her
in her shoulder...and later asked sorry...when madhu manages to
see his face...she was shocked to see rk...after a eyelock which
lasted for twenty seconds...her friend introduced rk to her...madhu
who was unable to recover from the shock...kept staring at rk...
but rk waved his hands to bring her... back into her senses ...rk greeted
her formally as if he had never seen her before...
days passed on they madhu managed to become close to rk...while rk always
thought her as a normal girl...and gave least importance to her...madhu's
friend(trishna) revealed about madhu's love to rk...while rk who was angry
with madhu asked her about it...madhu who was unable to bear rk's anger...
..revealed her love towards him...while rk hung the cal angrily...after
that rk rejected her love when madhu approched him by her cal and messages...
...without even giving her a chance to speak to him...since madhu knew
very well that rk was deeply in hurt due to his breakup with ria...madhu
managed to contact him...while rk always rejected her cal and messages...
after every talk with him over the phone...madhu cried badly...due to the
hurt she got from rk ...mean while rk who was upset with ria ...never
believed madhu...he always gave priority to himself and his ego...as girls
in his coll kept drooling on him...madhu after her proposal rarely spoke
to rk...there relationship was going on bitter day by day...madhu was
longing to hear his voice...so...on a fine day...when madhu called rk...to
ask for a chance atleast to have his friendship...meanwhile rk who was in his
mental frustation on seeing ria hugging sultan...was tensed to core...as
soon he saw madhu's cal...he abused her badly by calling her as the bitch ...he
yelled at her furiously...while madhu was freezed with his behaviour...his
words was so sharp...that managed to priece her heart enough as deep as it could
...she felt like going through the hell...madhu who was unable to show her
frustation hid herself in the bathroom cried for a long time...as since her
mother padmini may ask reason for her tears...she tried to hid her tears at
class room and from everyone...she spent most of her time lonely...she tried to
make herself happy but unable to since his words was so harsh...madhu
managed her frustation in front of her coll mates but trishna(friend via neighbour
as well as her coll mate) who is madhu's mind reader tried to console her...
madhu spent her sleepless night hidding her self under the pillow so that no one
will notice her tears...madhu who had deep love for rk...also had deep
hurt because of rk...as days passed rk never recieved any cal from madhu...
...he realized his mistake a little...but his hatred towards girls...and
his ego never made him to ask sorry...madhu knew very well that those words are
not from rk's heart but still it hurted her deeply...as days passed she
wished to hear his voice...she used to dial his no from pco...when rk pick's
up the without knewing who is it ...says 'hello'...on hearing his voice she
felt relief that ...he is doing gud in his life...she felt much pain her words
never came forward...since it got struck in her throat ...she hung the cal and
cried like a mad...unable to explain her love for him...days passed rk's
birthday came...madhu called rk ...
madhu suddenly jerked on hearing her mobile ring...came back to her senses...
she wiped her tears which rolled on her cheeks few minutes before...her
flashback and rk's memories gave her much pain...her heart beat was so
fast...she managed to answer the cal who is none other than her ma padmini
"madhu beta...kaise ho thum??...madhu on hearing her ma's voice cleared her
thorat and spoke"main teak hoon ma??? app kaise ho????..."beta main teak hoon"
...while"madhu" madhu managed to hear ...trishna's voice "how r yo darling ???"
she understood that trishna had grabed the mob from her mother's showing her
emergency to speak with her..."how was your new job?"..."how is chennai??"...
"are yo settled?"...is your room comfortable for yo???...when are yo coming back
here??? how is your new office?? how was your first day??...after madhu on
clearing all doubt's and enquires of trishna...trishna sighed in relief...
...madhu again heared her ma voice..."be careful beta...be inside your room
...dont go anywhere without informing"...while replied okay ma...padmini hung
the cal...while madhu rememberd meera aunty...she was the only person because of
whom madhu was able to do this job... she remembered how her ma and trishna
opposed her fa going to chennai due to her safety purpose...but fa madhu doing
this job meant something important to her since...its one of the biggest software
company in india.on seeing madhu's willingness ...padmini who doesnt want to
hurt her daughter's feeling...granted her the permission to stay with her
friend meera...madhu after reaching meera aunt's home...had der dinner
and left to sleep in the guesthouse...today...after cuming back she never
met her...she saw her clock which was about to strike 9...she also remebered
that her aunty said her that she will introduce her son today to her... madhu
washed her face and tied her long hair loosely...minutes later she had her
dinner with her aunt...and also some formal talks with sikky who is none other
than her meera aunty's son...
finally the second day arrives...madhu reached her office at 8 ...and shocked to
see her table which was fully loaded with files ...and a small paper which was
written by rk..."miss madhubala i need all the files to be completed
within three days"...madhu cursed rk inside her heart and started to work...😡😡
madhu completed her first file and rushed to rk's room and surprised to saw sikky
...who was talking with rk...sikky on seeing madhu greeted her...and
informed that he has been here to give some orders in behalf of his company...
madhu after knowing reason for his visit ...simply smiled at him...meanwhile
...rk was noticing madhu...sikky at last told her to wait for dinner today
and he also promised her that he will be coming soon...and said bye to rk
...and shook his hand for a formality with rk...which showed madhu that they
were only related to each other by buissness...sikky at last said bye to madhu...
.while madhu kept smiling...on seeing sikky's dinner proposal for madhu...and
the way he said bye to him...and her smile towards him...made rk to loose his
temper without his knowledge😡...he was burning inside his heart...while he managed
to take the file from madhu...his heart insisted to him to know her relationship
with sikky...he smirked at her evilly inside his heart saying
"sorry madhu today you are not going for that dinner"...

hello friends sorry for the delay...i hope so that yo will like this...if not pls spare me...constructive critisim is welcomed
Edited by rishbalaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
So did he really loved her? Or just that he was unable to see Madhu moving on in her life.
Continue soon dear.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am really enjoying the story. Pls continue. But can you add a table of contents somewhere so we can find the parts faster???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: rishbalaa

Hi friends , i am new to this forum,this is my first rishbala ss ...
pls don't scold me harsh if i am wrong,am only ready for constructive criticism.
based on your comments ill decide whether to proceed the second part or not.
thank yo all for spending your precious time.

" MY PUPPY LOVE "


It was a cold day. the clouds have just now finished crying leaving a dark moody climate .

madhu managed to open her eyes and tried to stop the alarm which had started ringing few seconds ago and got ready quickly for her office.
she was excited and tensed since it was her first day to that office.

she looked at the mirror for her final touchup her cheeks grew pink and her lips became darker due to her nervousness.
At kundra software solutions limited:

As soon as madhu entered the office her manager mukund greeted her and introduced her to the other staff members .

madhu also met her new friend dipali and find her temper reducing coz of dipali's nonstop talk.
When the clock was about to strike 9 ,madhu recieves a call from her chairman and rushes to the her chairman cabin to greet him.

At chairman cabin: madhu gets excuse and enter the cabin with a small smile in her lips her face grew pinkish which matched her saree colour and her hair made small curves near her neck which added a gorgeous look to her.
madhu was about to greet good morning ,
and suddenly shouted "rishab wat are yo doing here??" while her face grew anger on seeing him she made a sharp gaze at him...meanwhile rishab who was engaged in laptop looks at madhu and says

"madhu??? ...wat are yo doing her"...
there was a pin drop silence for a second and later.

madhu finally realizes her position at the office and greeted him"good morning sir"...am madhubala ur PA...

Her voice was so stiff which also revealed her anger
towards him.rishab who was lost in thoughts manges to get in to his senses and replied

"good morning miss madhubala" with a soft voice which sounded cool...

his mind made a smirk on seeing her position below him in office while his eyes was still on her face trying to catch her doe shaped eyes...

the silence in between them for five seconds which was interrupted when rishab started to speak ...

madhu:madhu's eyes rolled and thought ,he looked handsome than before, his brown eyes was so deep which has some feelings for her ...his face became brighter ,his deep blue suit added a matured look to him.

rishab: madhu...bala...where are you? evilly smirked at her.

sorry guys for the short update,,,,will catch you soon...





chap index
part 1:page 1
part 2:page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 3:

madhu was about to leave her office...while dipali came with some files on her hand and kept on

madhu's table ...and was about to leave while...madhu asked"wat is this deepali?...i have

already more amount of files with me which are not yet completed"...dipali simply gave her a paper

and left...madhu started read it"miss madhubala...these files contain some m😈😈😉istakes correct it 😈

...i need it by today itself.you will be payed for over time "...madhu cursed him this time

heavily inside her heart😡...and rushed to his cabin to show her opposition...as soon as she

entered the cabin... on seeing madhu ...he throwed some agreement papers on his table...indirectly saying that she

had signed the agreement while she jonied the office knowing for all its terms and

conditions...madhu on realizing it started to mumble "durga devi pls save me from this devil 😭..y does this hell happen to me always..."while madhu's

mind told her " cant you ask for an excuse madhu?"...suddenly her mind replied again "instead of

asking excuse to him...i can hang myself in this fan..."when rk seeing her lost in thought's

cleared his throat to bring her back in to senses...after a sec madhu managed to get back in to her

senses...she cursed him for his devil behaviours😡...rk on noticing madhu's reaction...smirked simply knowing that she is cursing him hardly...
madhu finished her corrections and rushed to rk's cabin after seeing the clock which was about to

strike 9.30... ...as soon as she entered the cabin...she was schoked to see him still staying in the office😲... she submitted her files and waitied for his reply...minutes late rk replied"good job

madhu ...am sorry miss madhubala...this file will be used for the project that we are going to start by next month😉"...on coveying his reply he smirked at her...on hearing his reply her eyes got widen and face grew darker due to

anger 😡...within a sec madhu lost her sense and she shouted "wat???😡😡😡...for next month why did yo make this much hurry ...we have lots of file to be completed within three days"...she shouted out of anger which was uncontrolable for her...minutes later rk on noticing her anger"giggled inside himself 😆..."and his

mind said to him"you got succeded rk...yo made her angry...wow wat a beautiful scene going on

here...how is it possible for her to be so calm and move on with her life ...by forgeting the great

rk?...is this rk is much easy for a normal girl to forget and move on with another guy...is it tat much easy for you to forget my charm" minutes later rk came back to his senses and smirked at her by showing

her the board" silence please"...then his eyes rolled on in to the board kept on his table written as

"rishab kundra...chairman"...madhu on understanding his reply ...made herself calm and

cursed him inside heavily for his irritating behaviour ...her heart was burning due to anger 😡...as

soon as she reached her cabin ...she got a cal from sikky...she attended the cal whikle sikky

spoke"hello madhu ...where are you???...had your dinner??... when yo will come ??"while

madhu narrated to him about her overtime work in office and asked for an apology...sikky replied

"its okay madhu you wait there itself since its 10 now yo wont get any cabs...and its not safe

too...ill bring my car wait there ...madhu on hearing the offer from sikky accepted it immediately

since she had no other better choice than this...meanwhile rk was happy after seeing madhu

irritated ...thought to himself sorry madhu your dinner plan is cancelled...as well as yo have no

other go to reach your home rather than me...after minutes later when he saw her leaving the

office ...he packed his things and started to leave...he thought to himself that "she will ask for a lift
...since she had no other go reach her home rather than me..." his lips smirked on seeing her waiting

to leave...rk hurriedly took his car from the parking and was trying to reach the place madhu was

standing...before he could reach ...it was late...he saw her getting inside another car with a

smile on her face...while rk started to fume inside himself ...how the bloody she can do this

???...who is the bloody giving her the lift ...that too at this time...questions were keep on arising

in his mind ...minutes later he saw the car moving...rk who was tensed now made himself

calm...he started move on otherside of the before car's direction teeling to himself
"rk you are rk???chairman of the leading company...why should yo bother about a normal girl...y

should i care for her?...its none of my buisness ...am not jealous neither i dont have any feeling for

her her decided to move to the other side on taking reverse...but after a second when he saw the car

which was moving on the otherside is flashed in his car's side mirror...his mind insisted to know

him where is she going...with whom she is going ...rk without his knowledge out of

curiosity...made a u turn and started to follow sikky's car...

precap:after an twenty minutes travel sikky stopped his car near in a fine restaurant and opened

his door and paved way for madhu to get in to the restaurant gently...while rk on watching this

staying in his own car from few distance away from was irritated to the core since ...he saw

madhu's smiling face clearly😊...but unable to see the face of the guy who was with her since he was showing his back to rk...and clenched his wrist due to anger😡



sorry for the short update friends...next update will be posted soon😊...but only based on ur comments buddies...waiting for your comments...silent readers please hit the like button

Edited by rishbalaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Update, dear.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update thnxxx 4 update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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NIce update...grt progress.. 😃
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Really nice one dear, pls continue soon.😊

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