Rishabala SS: Dancing At Midnight: Part 09 on Page 87 (28/03)

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Awesome update...⭐️👏
Full of suprises..rk already knew she is madhubala malik & suprise he had been having feelings for her from long time..😛
Madhu is a cutie love her..😳
Sad the story ended...😕
Plz do write some light hearted stories like this more.😃

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Preethu

@crazysakshi_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

loved it a lot

awe update

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Omg, I am shocked to see this update, I thought you will update by next week, but am so so happy and so so so sad that this story came to end, will be missing this RK and his dumbo too much, and lazy, as u have told many times, the reason would be silly, I never expected itto be this much, am rofl when rk said that.

now all my doubts were cleared, because rk's sudden jealous on mukund closeness with madhu, and once when he kissed her first, everything was hanging alone, but now everything was sorted out.

Loved this story very very much lazy, thank god u didn't bring out another child madhu finding her groom at such an early age.

Things which were missing,

Why didn't u mention whether deepali and sultan got married or not.

And I was more eager to see them dancing high at midnight, as per the title, have you brought it before, and I missed it by any chance?

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Okay that was a great and pleasant surprise.. all this while dreading the reaction RK would give and it comes out to be so cute... thanks for the lovely end

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Phew !! Finally got a closure for the fic through rishbala which had me in tenterhooks since pachi-milind 😳 !!

So Surprising that Rishabh knew it all this while and was just humoring Madhu (and us too😆) ! Hmm all this because he had strong feelings for her since he was 17 hehe..I was wondering what would be Madhu's reaction if she knew this then itself..guess Madhu by hook or crook would have become "Balika Vadhu😆" ! Shucks we missed it big time 😆😆 !! Anyway his "ballonish" expression love😆 was the best...he remembered every minute detail of their previous encounters ..sigh...totally "RK-ish"😳 !!

So finally they got married ..thank god 😆 !! Life after marriage looks so happening man 😆😆

Oops Rishabh is old fashioned...after barging into ladies hostel so many times ...never realised he could have reservations too lol !! Must say he has too much control😆😆😆 that too when he has jumping jack aka Madhu in his arms 😆 !! Oh my Sultan...I completely agree with him, come on even he is Mard and he has hormones too yaar 🤣🤣..not everybody is like our Rishu after all 😉😆 !

Seriously agree with Mohan uncle..even I wished to see his grandchild😆..it would have been fun too lol !!

Lovely end to ever so lovely story😳 lazy !! Thanks for the dedication hun 😛

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Laila

@lailapnj

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Thanks. It was amazing n also Every breath I take. Thanks for all the lovely stories

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Minblowing updt
Loved it
Rk's reason was so silly
But i liked his thinking of pyshical relation should be after maariage
I don't find it old fashion
Dis is called value n respect for a relationship
But ye lovely story kab end hogayi n pata bhi nahi chala
Anyways loved n enjoyed it a lot
N dat last line was awsome "Let's just say... someone tried helping someone with balloons and ended up hooked, booked and cooked."
Love you lazy
Thnx for these wonderful stories

Edited by Crazy_Arshi - 11 years ago

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

Wth story got over so early
But really loved this surprise part
Woww rk baby roxxx he knew it all the time he is seriously unpredictable
Loved it fully
Awesome story