Rishabala SS: An Order From A Gentleman-Lady Epilogue on Pg 22 (15/12) - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story completed reading it. Sorry like button still not working.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i like your style of writing since i am new to this forum will u plz links to ur various stories,FF ,OS


i read ur FF

Rishabala FF : It's In His Kiss

and i liked it very much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all the chaps in one go and loved it so very much Lazy !!
Mainly because here I felt Madhu is very guyish in the beginning and totally girlie towards the end lol !!
RK and his confused feelings..so true his body recognized Madhu even before his heart 😉 !! The way he kept others in bay while he was in abroad, made me realise that my RK is one man woman lol !!

Oh god !! Guess dips is helpful here ..I can't believe it's her hehe !!
RK's train of thoughts reg Madhu's girlfriends was very hilarious 🤣 !! Oh god !! RK had made Madhu believe that she is guy hehehe and later he was only instrumental the woman in her ..and falling in love with the same Madhu ...ah poetic justice 😉 ...I wanna call it hehe !!

It's so beautiful to find a soulmate/life partner in ones best friend !! That way both Madhu and RK are really lucky !! How RK was all possessive and protective about Madhu from the beginning is just awesome 😳 !! Finally they realised their love and life..was like sone pe suhaaga😆 !!

Epilogue :- oh god !! RK is a wonderful dad man !! They literally make him dance on their tunes hehe !!
Such a cute family man !!
Their playing in the ground on their way back ...made it even mo sweet and on top of it mayuri's beauty conscious heheh was really funny !!
Loved it...cos RK was never prejudiced towards Madhu ... Even after Madhu's make over, he was scared that he might have lost his best friend 😳...but he never judged her and their acceptance without any friction only made it even mo endearing 😳 !!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome story .

Loved it 2 d core .. Specially Madhu .. 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow interesting concept loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG .. this is sooo cute... so so so hilarious... initially I thought you're trying your hands in gay-fiction 🤣🤣🤣

I love the revelation followed by the great transformation of Malik into Madhubala... 🤣🤣🤣

the best line Malik had the nerve to kiss him, and start dating other girls.🤣🤣🤣🤣 I burst into laughing reading how RK was being possessive towards his (possible) gay partner 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 and that Casanova remark... 🤣 OMG It was a pure delight to read this story Lazy... I could actually picture madhu like that.. only you could do that
hats off to you for such cute imagination Lazy..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
hahaha it was fun
d gay part was seriously funny

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