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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow kavya, so lovely story, a thing which every one may face in their real life at some points and thank god rk realized it so soon, and they were back together.. At first when i read about the gifts i guessed there will be something connected to it and you brought it out very sweetly.. Am very happy that you gave a happy ending to this story

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

lovely OS kavya 👏tfs for pm 😃

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mmradhu

@mmradhu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome and mind blowing os... loved it very much
Love or arrange after marriage men are busy with their work so they're not giving time for their family and you described very well how the ladies felt ... i'm feeling bad for madhu... you ended beautifully and perfectly...
Thanks for pm and take care

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kg15

@kg15

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

A big thanks to all those who liked and commented..
I'll reply back soon..

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Vanshika

@Vinona

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Wow... 😲
Dear it's a really heart touching OS..
It made me emotional...
👏
Keep going!

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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Lovely OS n so real.. It happens in marriage life. Often hubbies (nowadays wives too) get busy n they can't care for their dear one like before. But u re-united them at the end. thank u for giving Akaal to my RK! 😆

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Lovely story. I liked Rishbala's journey in your OS.

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manju21.k

@manju21.k

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Lovely OS kavya...Keep on writing ...😃

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kg15

@kg15

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan
YAAAyyy!!!!!! me first to cmmnt...
superbly awesomeee os dear...loved it... 👏
u written is amazingly kavya dear... 😳
"BECAUSE I CAN'T
LEAVE YOU ALONE, RISHABH!! YOU'LL
FEEL LONELY!!" dis line made my eyes teary... loved madhu... she was going thru such a pain bt finally rk undrstood wat he is dng...nd happy ending... 😉 😃

Aww... Thank you so much Suru !!! 😳😳

I wanted to write a happy ending OS and I am glad that you loved it !!😃