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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

WOW, that was beautiful!!! I have tears in my eyes.

Excellent!!

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mimibm

@mimibm

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

You have done a brilliant job Kavya...I have read in many stories how RK waorks hard to get a better life for Madhu but this is the first time a story showed how it could actually pull them apart and make them lonelier...the concept was very pragmatic and your writing was superb...keep it up dost...write more of such beautiful Rishbala stories...

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

fantastic brilliant os

cvs can take ideas from your stories

please write more

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS. Very well written. :)

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

your story has a flow didu

loved it everything with a flow

love it

and especially madhu's work I WANT YOU NOT THESE

really love that

accident united them

story with lovely end love it

muhaaa

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

res..😉
it was awesum dear!!!👏
i liked when madhu said,she is complete with him...
the last paragraph made me cry😭
omg...hw much loneliness madhu had suffered!!!!😭
anyway rishbh realised his mistake...thank god
thanks 4 pm dear...😊...continue ur works...

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Very beautiful OS Kavya 😃 !!

Loved this patient Madhu and her outlook towards life !! Thankfully RK realized before its too late .

All in all a very nice story 😃

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139271

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

a beautiful OS... really loved it... though i wanted to read a little bit more on the changed RK.. like to what extend he has changed and the joy that brought to Madhu... *sigh* i'll imagine that now😆