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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sapphire
The Sky, the Sea, and You.. You're all blue...
..
She was looking at him from past 10 minutes, exploring him, noticing him, trying to understand something
Its clearly the lonelyest colour you do..
Yes, he was alone, all alone, and, all lost. He was blinking once in 5 seconds..
Take in some oxygen, and lift up your chin, open your ears.. and let something in.
She didn't knew what was attracting her towards him, she got all lost. Sometimes.. when, blue lights... hide your eyes, you... look alive..His eyes suddenly met hers and she felt a cold shiver run down her spine.
Disgised.. I, realise.. You're afraid, you're.. paralysed..
She started walking, and, at the same second, he also started walking too, still looking at each other.
Sapphire...
You look...Twilight...
And Gunfire..
Now that's right?
They both finally came in front of each other, but they were still on a 2 hand distance, people were passing from between them, but still, they didn't break their eyelock.
And suddenly,
This song stopped.
And they broke their eyelock..
After 2 seconds, they again looked at each other.
" Hi "
" Hi "
They both said on the same second. They again broke their eyelock.
" Well, you looked alone there.. "
The girl said, and the boy looked at her.
" You are right, I was alone.. "
The boy replied, looking down, while the girl was still noticing him. Noticing her gaze on him, the boy looked up at her, but the girl did not break her gaze.
" You know what.. "
The boy was still looking at her.
" You looked like a Sapphire.. "
The boy narrowed his brows.
" Ya.. A shining Sapphire.. and a Sapphire always attracts me.. And some other people too.. "
A bright smile came on his face.
" Thankyou so much ma'am.. "
The girl immediately cut him-
" No, not ma'an, I am Madhubala, Madhubala Malik.. "
The boy smilled.
" And I am Rishabh Kundra, the son of Mohan Kundra. "
Madhubala raised her brows
" Mohan Kundra? You mean the owner of the brand 'MK' jwellers? "
Rishabh nodded, but his face suddenly changed into a sad expression.
" What happened? "
The boy looked up at her.
" Its a long story "
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'Sapphire' is a blue gem stone, and it is very different for me.
And the red words, is actually a song from Late Night Alumni, and the name is 'Sapphire' only. From the album 'The beat becomes a sound' Its a very nice song.
Coming back to the FF, if you liked the consept, please leave many and many comments, because if I don't get enough motivation, then I discontinue.
Please check my other ongoing FF too -
Its a new FF.
Please do like and say me I should continue or not.
Your's Vinona.
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trolldemortx thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Nice write up hun :) Keep up the good work :)


xxx

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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Interesting beginning.
Obviously continue yaar. .. 😉
kg15 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Nice start dear...😃
Will wait for the chapters to begin...!!!😊
Keep writing !!

P.S.- I'm sending you buddy request... Accept it !!
PristineSoul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Good start!!

Please update your other story FT also.. waiting to read it
meiejrishbala thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
nice start👍🏼
continue dear😊
eager 2 know y was rk alone&ofcourse the long story😊
can i hav a suggestion plz??wil u give long update with small sized letters??
anyway nice work dear👏
Janani24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
gud start dear do continue😊 waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Nice start Please keep going :)
rinku06 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting story
Pl. continue
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start vinona continue dear

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