RishBala OS - Time For Her To Go

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prarthna

@Prarthna.B

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Lovely OS, would love to see if they show exit of Pabho in the same way as you have written in your OS :)

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

loved the os so want that witch gone she is causing so much problems and madhu is staying quite awesome os beautifully done thanks for the pm

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Nandini Swarna

@nandinidavid96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome...pabbo leaving the mansion is the nicest thing.

Beautiful OS Pritt

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Superb OS
Thank You For The PM

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

IC... thank yew so much. Atlast... My dream comes true!!

Pabbo out of Rishbala's life.

lovely OS,

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: PrittB

That's it. I'm adding an apology scene into this OS before more people read it. 😆
I love that idea! I wish I had thought of it.
Adding it in somewhere now!

There I added it! :D

And ahaha omg, I wish I had consulted with you before I wrote this up! I dislike that woman too!
Can't wait until she's gone.

And thanks so much Julie! :) <3

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I reread the story for the apology - better! But of course you got Madhu's character nailed perfectly because you are right, Madhu would have 'understood' despite the rats and all. The woman is aiming to be a saint!

But overall, I liked the story as RK not only stands up for his wife but protects her first!