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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

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Posted: 11 years ago

Background...
The story starts from where it shoukd have actually started in the show
the holi incident ... madhu and sultan being the first persons to put colour on each other on holi...
and the colour of holi brought a different colour to their lives as well...

Characters:
Madhubala : female protaganist
Sultan : male protaganist
R.k :antagonist
Aryan: sultan"s son
Padmini:madhu's mother
Trishna : madhu's sister
Bittuji: RK's chief secretary
Rest characters to be introduced later...

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CHAPTER 1
The story begins...
Part 1
Madhu's chawl
Madhu is thinking of wht happened in the mrng ...hw she applied color to Sultan n aimed a gun
At Bhujang...
Padmini brings her out of her thoughts by asking her to come to temple...
Sultan's home
Sultan is also thinking abt Madhu ...n aryan comes n hugs him fr letting him play holi...
A sweet smile comes on sultan's face thinking of madhu putting color on him...
Aryan :sultan mujhe ice. Cream khani hai...
Sultan : ok ...get ready we r going out today ...

In the car
Aryan sees the temple n asks Sultan to stop there he stops...

Madhu n Padmini r on stairs when aryan spots them n
Comes to them ...
Madhu ..:.tum yahan kiske saath aaye aryan (how come u r here aryan)...
Aryan :sultan ke saath ...(withsultan)
Sultan comes n holds aryan's hand n lifts him up ...aryan is happy n madhu a bit shocked ...seeing sultan showering luv on aryan...She remembers taunting him fr nt being a gud father...
Padmini : acha kiya ki tum log bhi aa gye ab chalo andar...(its gud u r here lets move insidr)
They enter the temple
...They r praying ...
Padmini prays lord to give strength to her daughter n make her life easier...

Just then madhu almost falls bcz of stepping on oily floor bt sultan holds her in time ;) they hv an eyelock .❤️...n Padmini looks on

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aryan : Sultan mujhe ice cream khani hai( i need to eat ice cream)..

Sultan : thik hai.. chalo(ok)

Aryan : madhu tum bhi chalo .(madhu u too come)..
Madhu : nahin aryan aaj nahin ..(no aryan not today).
Sultan : aap log chalenge toh aryan ko acha lagega( aryan will like it if u will come)
Padmini : sultan tum madhu ko le jao mujhe trisna ke pass shoot pr jaana hai aur madhu tum jao inke saath(sultan u can take madhu .. i have to go to see trishna) ❤️😳😳

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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 2
Sultan n Madhu at ice-cream shop..
Sultan brings Aryan n Madhu the ice-cream..
Aryan: Sultan tumhe kaisa pta ki madhu ka fav bhi choclate hai??(SULTAN HW U KNW THT CHOCLATE IS MADHU'S FAV?
Sultan( says lovingly): kyunki woh tumhara bhi fav hai isiliye woh madhu ka bhi fav hai...(WELL BECAUSE IT IS UR FAVOURITE TOO)

Madhu blushes on hearing sultan say that n has her ice-cream ...
both Aryan n Madhu hve their ice- cream ...n Sultan looks on..❤️
when they finish Sultan drops Madhu home...

At CHAWL
Madhu enters home smiling .. Padmini thinks tht atleast smone cn still bring smile on Madhu's face
AT SULTAN'S HOME
Aryan: sultan tum roz ice-cream khilane le jaoge??(sULTAN WILL U TAKE ME EVERYDAY FOR THE iCE CREAM)
Sultan : hmm roz nahin pr weak mein do baar nahin to tum bimaar ho jaoge..(NO NOT EVERYDAY BUT TWICE IN A WEEK)
Aryan: Madhu bhi chalegi na hr baar hmare saath
Sultan gets lost in Madhu's thoughts ...her fall ,their eyelock n aryan's sweet wrds abt them..
Aryan: bola na sultan madhu chalegi na humare saath..(SPEAK UP NA)
Sultan : pta nahin .. tum madhu sepuch lena( I DONT KNW U ASK HER)

Aryan : abhi to madhu so gyi hogi mein kl puchunga..(SHE WUD BE SLEEPING I WILL ASK HER TMRW)
Sultan takes aryan to bedroom n makes him sleep

both Sultan n Madhu r trying to sleep but the feelings fr each other make them restless... none of them knws wt it is ...mere care or real love...both r afraid to call it love bcz of loosing a gud frnd❤️

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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 3

Madhu gets ready to go to shoot ...thinking of hw is she going to tolerate R.k today.. Seeing R.k.'s face on sets ws a torture to her bt she cudn't help it as she wished to tell him the she had moved on.
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AT SETS...

Madhu arrives at the sets when R.K. sees her n comments tht
R.K.:hmm aaj kl hr koi apne aap ko film ki heroine samajhta hai ...jb mrzi aao jb mrrzi jao.(NOWADAYS EVERYONE THINKS HERSELF A HEROINE...COME WHEN U WANT AND LEAVE WHEN U WANT)
Madhu : jin logon ki zindgi hi film ki kahani bn gyi ho woh log apne ko kya samjhege( Those whose life has become a film they r helpless)

AT SULTAN'S PLACE

Aryan : Sultan aaj mujhe Madhu ke saath khelna hai pr driver nahin hai yahan tum Madhu ko le aao na(sultan i want to play with madhu driver is not here plz u bring her naa)
Sultan with( light in his eyes : hmm pr sirf aaj ke liye(ok only for today)
Aryan: main bhi chalun tumhare saath(may i come with u)
SULTAN( lifting him in his arms) : nahin mein Madhu ko le aaunga yahan pr...(no need i will bring her)
Sultan then heads towards his car n drives to Madhu' s sets n all the way sees Madhu everywhere..😳😳😳

At the sets::
R.K. chides Madhu fr spilling juice on the floor n pulls her in his vanity..
R.k : tum apne aap ko samajhti kya ho(wt do u think urself)... hw cn u spoil my dress
Madhu : maine jaan bhuk kr nahin kiya aur tumhe kb se chizon ki prwah hone lagi...(i didnt do it intentionally)
R.k.gets angry n he holds Madhu's arm tightly

Sultan enters .. n pushes R.k to the side ..

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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 4

AT THE VANITY:
Sultan pushes R.K. to the side..
Sultan: tumse koi aisi hi umeed rakh sakta hai... (only this can be expected from u)
agr kissi ki izzat nahin kr sakte to beiizati to mat karo..(if u cant respect then dont disrespect too)
R.K : wah biwi.. R.K. ko izzat ka matlab samjhane ke liye ek personal gunda hire kiya hai tumne(excellent biwi...TO tell me the meaning of respect u have hired a personal goon)..
Aur kon- konsi services deta hai yeh tumhe.. RAAT KO BHI HAZIR REHTA HAI TUMHARE LIYE???😡😡😡(which other services he gives.. IS HE PRESENT FOR U EVEN NIGHT)
Sultan grabs R.k.'s collar n is abt to hit him bt Madhu intervenes..n asks him to stop it...
Sultan leaves R.K. on seeing Madhu tensed n crying..

Madhu : Sultan pls chalo yahan se...(SULTAN PLZ LET US LEAVE)
R.K. Claps hand... n says: yahan to koi dusri hi script likhi jaa rahi hai..(SOME NEW SCRIPT IS BEING WRITTEN)
Sultan clutches his fist .
Madhu notices it n holds his arm.. they hv an eyelock..😊
R.K. gets annoyed seeing their proximity..
Madhu n Sultan leave..

Madhu n Sultan sit in the car...n Sultan drives... while R.K sees them leaving..
Madhu has tears in her eyes which she tries to hide..
Sultan stops the car at a lonely place with no one around ... MADHU GETS WORRIED..

Madhu : Sultan tumne yahan car kyun rok di..(WHY HV U STOPPED CAR HERE)
Sultan : tum pehle niche utro...(GET DOWN FIRST)
Madhu gets down...
Sultan blindfolds Madhu ... She gets tensed... Sultan holds her hand n asks to cme along n nt to be afraid...
Madhu follows wt he says..
They come to a lake .. a beautiful lake.. Sultan opens Madhu's blindfold.

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@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 5

AT THE LAKE :
Sultan opens Madhu's blindfold...
She sees the place N is mesmerised by its beauty. n SHE TURNS TO SULTAN
Sultan gets closer to her: i always come to this place whenever i feel bad...
Madhu : bahut sundar hai yeh ...koi bhi sab kuch bhul sakta hain yahan n a tear drops from her eyes...(VERY BEAUTIFUL ...ANYONE CAN FORGET ALL HIS PAIN COMING AT THIS PLACE
Sultan gets more closer n wipes tht tear...

Sultan :TELL ME UR PAIN MADHU
Madhu finally melts n tells hw she married R.K. n then fell fr him N hw she ws ditched...
She cries a lot n breaks down on ground... Sultan just looks at her helplessly...but then moves towards her after she gets up...
Sultan: MadhuPAIN ARE ALWAYS THERE ...WE NEED TO F8 IT
Madhu still in state of shock hugs him N startls him ...
Madhu holds him tight n Sultan responds by putting his hands around her...
Madhu realizes .. n suddenly breaks free...

Madhu : Sultan i m srry i jst didnt realise
Sultan( puts finger on her lips ): shh i can understand Madhu.

Madhu gets mesmerised at his first concious touch n gets lost in his blue oceanic eyes..
Sultan : MAY WE GO HOME aryn is w8ng
Madhu haan
Sultan drives Madhu home

Sultan and Madhu reach home and Aryan is angrily waiting for them.
Madhu hugs Aryan n he pushes her away
ARYAN : Madhu where were u? I was waiting for you for so long ...
Madhu looks at Sultan and blushes and then turns to Aryan and holds her ears..
Sultan just looks at her and smiles seeing her innocence..

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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

chapter 6

Madhu carries Aryan to his room and makes him sleep...
It starts Raining Heavily

Aryan is deep asleep and the lights go off...
Madhu panicks..
Sultan comes to the room with his l8r fearing Aryan wud need him.
He lights the lighter n sees Madhu trembling and Aryan asleep ..
He goes near her .
Madhu looks at him and gets up.They have an eyelock.

Sultan( breaks the trance ): Madhu are u o.k.
Madhu : haan sultan voh mein bus ...she stammers
Lightning Struck..
She hugs Sultan ..
Sultan : u r urself fire and afraid of lightening..
Madhu breaks off and looks aside and says I need to go home
Sultan : have u lost it ?? u r nt going anywhere .. I will drop u myself 2mrw morning and yes u can take Aryan's mother dress its in my room for today.

Madhu goes to Sultan's room

She takes a dress out of that cupboard and suddenly an album falls.
She looks at the album and sees sultan's photograph with his wife.
Sultan looks damn hot in those photographs and his wife is very close to him .
Madhu remembers every moment of spent with Sultan .she feels jealous
Madhu (in mind): wts happening to me she is his wife . why is it bothering me and she is already no more .. wait why I am telling myself all this.
Sultan enters and sees her with photo album..

Sultan takes away the album from her and looks at his wife's pic n is lost in thoughts
Madhu : sultan I am sorry .. I don't know it just fell from cupboard so I picked it up??
Sultan didn't listen to her he was remembering his wife ..a faint smile came on his face n madhu notices it.
She was mesmerized seeing him smile but something inside her heart ached..she knew she was not the reason for his smile
Madhu(in mind) :u love her so much she can bring smile on ur face even today.

Next part
Madhu: Sultan U loved ur wife a lot na.

Sultan : she was and is my life Madhu ...I wud have died the very day she left me forever but she Gave me a reason to live she gave me the symbol of our love ..She gave me my son...Aryan is the only reason for my life Madhu ..
A tear escaped from his eyes...
Madhu cud see pain in his eyes. She went near him.
Madhu: Sultan ..(gets closer and looks in his eyes)
Sultan : you change the clothes and sleep ..I will drop u tomorrow at the sets.

Madhu leaves.

Sultan (looking at his wife's picture): I don't know whether its r8 or nt but I am falling for Madhu... Icant forget u but I cant deny that she is also taking place in my heart.

Madhu remembers Sultan's words .. She feels unusual and is unable to understand wts happening to her
Next day : Sultan's Kitchen
Madhu is preparing food .Sultan comes
Sultan: Madhu what r u doing Kaka is there na..
Madhu: No problem Sultan , I Love Cooking..for my fam...(she stops AND ACCIDENTALLY HER HAND GETS BURNT)
SULTAN takes her hand in his and slowly blows air ...
They share an eyelock
Their eyelock is broken by aryan who asks for food.
Sultan & Madhu both smile.
They have food and Sultan drops Madhu at the sets

At the sets .

Madhu & Sultan reach the sets and R.K. looks furiously at them
Sultan leaves..
R.K.: Bittuji nowadays the city's don has changed his profession ..He has become a driver to a mere hair dresser ..GOD knows wt happened
Madhu gets irritated but just continues with her wrk
Heroine :Where is ur attention ..see hw hv u messed up my hair..u stupid.
Madhu :I am so sorry maam ...
Heroine : Director either u change her or me
Director: Maam plz we will get u a knew make up artist n Madhu u can leave
Madhu :bt sir ...
Director : Madhu leave...

n Madhu leaves...

Madhu is walking on road towards Her home & thinking wt R.K said this mrng n hw she ws forced to leave sets..
It starts raining n she moves unconxiously n comes in front of a car ...
The person driving applied breaks suddenly n Madhu stood stunned
The guy rushed out of the car

Its Sultan
Sultan :Madhu r u alr8
Madhu hugs him n breaks down completely
Madhu : Sultan i cant take this pain anymore its becoming difficult for me ...she sobs
Sultan :Madhu ( gently lifts her face n wipes her tears)Pain is everywhere n i promise u Madhu I m there with u ...

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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 7

Sultan asks Madhu to sit in the car ..Madhu complies.. n he drives...but suddenly the car stops...
Madhu: what happened Sultan????
SULTAN: I think the car is damaged..
They get down..
Sultan: I will get a mechanic..
Madhu( afraid of being left alone) :no, sultan u wont get a mechanic at this hour...

Sultan : ok then I have a guest house near by we can stay there.. till rain stops..
Madhu(shows up she is hesitant ) but complies when lightening strucks..
They enter the guest house..
and both are drenched in Rain...
Sultan: there are some clothes in cupboard ... u go n change.. ..
HE TOO CHANGES HIS CLOTHES...

Madhu comes out in a dazzling red saree.. n Sultan is stunned seeing her...
They both sit on the sofa..( an awkward silence prevails)
Sultan(breaking the silence) are u not getting bored ??
i will play some music .. n he plays a romantic number..
Sultan comes frwrd to madhu asking her to dance with him..
Madhu: ya sure why not..THEY DANCE PASSIONATELY AND GET CLOSER N CLOSER..
Sultan caresses Madhu's face n is about to kiss her.. madhu too responds by getting more closer...
THE SONG STOPS.. N THEY .. TOO COME OUT OF THEIR CUDDLE... N awkwardly turn their faces .. Madhu blushes red ..Sultan moves forward to her to aplogise but she runs inside...

Madhu sits on bed inside and is blushing (the scene of their abut to happen kiss was flashing in her mind)
Sultan enters...n sits beside her ..he makes her face him...
He kisses her hand and then they have an eyelock😳😳😳😳

Sultan: Madhu I am sorry..
Madhu realises its a dream..😛😛
Sultan (sits on the bed ) ..n Madhu rests her head on his shoulder n sleeps ..Sultan too sleepz..

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