HuM HaI DeEwAnE- Rishbala FF (Part 23/page 121) - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
Di I know u have ur exams in next month.. But please write the next part in ur free time and post it... We r waiting...
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waitinggg 4 next part dear...plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read d whole ff in one go...
Amazing story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ITS REALLY SUPERB M NEW TO D FORUM LOVED UR STORY PLZZ CONTINUE SOON
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Originally posted by: neha_001

ITS REALLY SUPERB M NEW TO D FORUM LOVED UR STORY PLZZ CONTINUE SOON


Aww thank u dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please Update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
i read this story on a fb page "diya's fanfiction story" i m crazy for it yar!!
main us page pr msg n post kar kar k tgag gayi!! Next update ka!! Then I left doing so., last part I read fb was 17th ...
today I saw this here on forums.. Mujhse dekhe bina raha nai gaya!! So I opened n found its same story which I m crazy for!! Who is it?? Diya?? Riya?? Plzz next part part update karo na !!! I dying now!! 2months ho gaye h!! 7june ko ki thi last part update... :v :v plzzz next part!!!! Plzzz
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I am so sorry for not posting my story.. But I promise I will give you two updates weekly.. And and I am dedicating this part to my sweetheart NehaVivianholic as she asked to post regularly.. And also dedicating to all of you.. Here goes the part..
PART 19

"Lets start the ring exchange ceremony.." Padmini said to Radhaji.. Madhu and Mukund looked at each other.. Mu: Madhu think about this once more.. M: No Mukund I decided.. And Madhu looked around and was finding him.. When she saw Bittuji was there.. She gave him a question look and Bittuji shook his head as no... Tears rolled out from her eyes.. She understood RK left from there.. "Madhu.." Padmini called her and she looked at her.. Padmini and Mukund's mother gave them engagement rings... Madhu was looking at the ring... Other side RK reached at airport.. He has a hope that Madhu will come.. He was looking all around and entered inside... "Madhu.." Padmini shook her little.. Pa: Put the ring in his fingure.. Madhu nod... Madhu reminds all the moments with RK.. "Madhu!!" Padmini again called her... She looked up at Mukund.. Ma: I am sorry Mukund.. I cant.. Tears rolled out from her eyes.. She turned at Padmini's side.. Ma: I am sorry maa but I cant so this.. I love RK... I cant marry him.. Mukund you... She turned at his side when he reaaured her by "Now Madhu dont waste your time.. Go and stop him.." Madhu wiped her eyes and going to leave when Padmini pulled her.. Pa: what is all this Madhu.. Mu: Aunty let her go now... We will talk about this later.. Madhu go now.. She nod and came near Bittuji.. Bittuji: Chief is going back to Canada... Madhu was shocked "No he cant leave me.. I will stop him.." And she ran away from there...

"Drive fast please Bittuji.." Madhu said to him...
Mu: Dnt worry Madhu.. We will reach soon..
He assured her,,, They reached at airport... She was looking all around.. And then she went to the ticket counter.. M: Did Mumbai to Canada flight take off?? TC: One minute mam.. After checking she replied "Yes mam.." Tears rolled out from her eyes... M: No.. No.. This cant be happen.. Bittuji RK...
Everyone were looking at her.. Bittuji: Lets go from here...
M: But RK..
Mu: Madhu come now.. They takes her outside of the airport... Madhu broke down.. Bittuji: Madhu please calm down... M: It was my fault... I lost him Mukund.. She cried and hugged him... Bittuji: No.. He will come back.. I will tell him about this and I know he will come back to you... You please dnt cry... Mu: Yes Bittuji is right.. He have to come back.. He loves you... Now lets go home.. Everyone is waiting for you... They came back to the chawl.. M: Mukund what will I tell maa now.. I did wrong.. How will I face her?? Mu: You dnt worry.. I am here with you.. They came inside and Madhu called "Maa.." Everyone looked at them.. Padmini came near her and slapped her and dragged her outside the room.. M: Maa.. Listen to me please.. Pa: After doing all this you are still expecting that I will listen you.. You are not my daughter... I felt so proud to call you my daughter but no.. Today I am ashamed to call you as my daughter..

Ra: Padmini calm down and listen to her once.. Pa: Didi.. You are saying this.. (looked at Mukund) And Mukund how can you take this so lightly.. Mu: Aunty I knew everything.. Everyone were shocked.. Mu: Yes.. Madhu told me this before.. And I stopped her to get engaged with me.. But you know what aunty.. What she said? She promised you and she didnt want to break this.. She can sacrifies her love for you.. And now you are blaming her.. Did your respect is more important than your daughter's happiness.. Padmini looked at Madhu shocked.. Madhu broke down on her knee.. Padmini immediately came and hugged her.. Both cried.. M: I lost him maa.. I lost him.. Padmini console her... Mu: Aunty she loves RK a lot.. Padmini hugged her tightly...

"Madhu.." Radhaji called her but she was lost in her world.. Tears were flowing from her eyes.. Radhaji again called her.. Madhu looked at her and hugged her.. M: Why did this happen with me badi maa.. Radhaji cupped her face and said "Madhu if you love him truely he will come back.. Keep faith on your bappa.. He never let happen wrong with you.." M: But if.. Ra: Sshh.. No but and if.. Stop crying and have some food.. M: No.. I am not hungry.. Just then Padmini came and fed her by her own hand..

Days passes.. Madhu again joined office.. She missed him a lot.. M: Bittuji did RK called you.. Bittuji: Yes.. M: Did he ask about me?? Bittuji(looked down): No.. I dnt know what happen with him.. Even he didnt want to listen your name... But you dnt worry I will talk with him soon.. Days passed.. Madhu regularly asked Bittuji about their convo and Bittuji disappointly said the same.. Now Madhu didnt ask anything to Bittuji.. She accepted her fate.. After two months.. Madhu was busy with her files.. When Bittuji came to her hurriedly "Madhu I have a good news.." Madhu jumped in excitement.. Bittuji: Chief and his family will shift here.. And they are coming after two days.. Madhu was surprised.. M: Really?? He is coming?? Now I can tell him everything and now he have to listen to me naa Bittuji.. A happy tears came in her eyes... In evening after returning home she shared this news with everyone.. All are so happy seeing Madhu.. Radha and Padmini prayed to bappa.. M to herself: Now RK.. I can tell you how much I love you.. And now you have to listen to me also.. She gets so happy...

I know it was not good and unexpected part.. Full of drama part.. And also short.. But sorry for that.. I will try to put some Rishbala romance in my upcoming Parts.. Now its your turn to like and comment here.. Thank You in advance... 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update! Hope they meet soon and clear out the misunderstanding.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one yaa but plzz update regularly that continuity gets lost thats y .go n tell him madhu .waiting for next update .thanks for the pm

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