Rishbala SS: Balika Bodhu_Chap14..Pg 69 - Page 5

wow fantastic update
just loved it
madhu was so cute n naughty😆 n rishu liked her that way...hmm now i think rishab will be interested in marrying her n radhaji will oppose his decision😆

continue soon n add me in your om list😊

Awww...lovely update...gosh radha is pathetic...Madhu is a child of 14yrs for godsake...u don't expect age of her kids to be all shy n good.. this is their age to have fun...stupid brainless woman!

Originally posted by: shweta2728

Hmm...very interesting! You should continue! I was imagining RK in a dhoti lol! I think...I'm the first on to comment!

Oh yes...RK is in a white dhoti and kurta...but unfortunately I did not have any of VD's pic closely resembling that attire...anyway thanks for liking the story so far...

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Mimi i must say you have a gift in your hands. 👏

even in upakyana you maintained the ethnicity by using the language of that gener and even now you kept the mood of the ss with the bongs dailect.

Now coming to the update...it was very good. The sofisticated rishab and rustic madhu. And my my rishab seems to have developed liking towards the village belle.

Looking for more...thanks for the pm.

😆 now that is an advantage of being a Bong myself...i guess we adore to see RK-Madhu as opposite poles in any storyline...will try to update as soon as possible..

Originally posted by: christobelle

nice update

rk started feeling for madhu

cute n waiting for the next

Not too sure about feelings at this moment, but yes he is captivated by her bizarre nature (according to his understanding)..

Originally posted by: sriramlaxman366

nice update mimi ,loved it ,continue dear

Thank you so much dear 😳

i love the simplistic touch 👍🏼

Originally posted by: kg15

HEY MIMI.. AWESOME UPDATE !!
THE ENTIRE CONCEPT WAS VERY CATCHY.. WHEN I FOUND RISHABH AS BENGALI, I STARTED IMAGINING AS BABU MOSHAIYE..LOLZ.. IN DHOTI KURTA..
THE BOAT SEQUENCE WAS TOO GOOD..
LOLZ.. MADHU CLIMBING THE TREE IN NO TIME..
OHH, HER FIRST IMPRESSION ON RADHA WENT BAD.. HOPE RISHABH MAY CONVINCE HER TO STAY THERE FOR FEW DAYS MORE..

OVERALL, I LOVED & ENJOYED THE UPDATE THOUROUGHLY.. UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON DEAR !!

Thanks a lot Kavya...even i found it quite amusing while writing the part about Madhu climbing the tree and Rishabh staring in amazement...will try to update as soon as possible... as I am no more a vella, I have to perform patni dharm in full swing these days 😆😛...so getting time for my back-to-back updates is next to impossible...

Originally posted by: livelyrose90

nice start..loved the backdrop of story.i was picturising scenes ...update soon . thnx 4 pm

Oh thank you so very much dear 😳

Originally posted by: pantil

Nice start..continue soon and thanxx for pm

Thank you dear 😳

Originally posted by: zina.92

Nice concept n updt
Cnt sn

Thank you so much...will try to update soon..