Rishbala SS: Balika Bodhu_Chap14..Pg 69

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mimibm

😆 Radha is old fashioned because the timing is quite old...this is during the time when British were ruling India...sorry for the confusion...I will mention it in the update...and as for Rishabh's age, he is studying medical, third year, so not more than 20-21...

thanks for clearing the confusion mimu 😆 but tune yeh nahi bataya ki tu limelight kab update karegi 😛 dekh jaldi se bata de taki atleast mai wahaan toh first aa sakoon 😆 woh kya hai na ki teri update par first aane ki aadat ko mai chhodhna nahi chahti thi par chhut gayi toh kya karu?lekin yeh lat mujhe phirse lagaani hai toh jaldi se bata de!waise tujhse ek aur baat poochni thi ki teri age kya hai?

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Mimi i must say you have a gift in your hands. 👏

even in upakyana you maintained the ethnicity by using the language of that gener and even now you kept the mood of the ss with the bongs dailect.

Now coming to the update...it was very good. The sofisticated rishab and rustic madhu. And my my rishab seems to have developed liking towards the village belle.

Looking for more...thanks for the pm.

Edited by tanuja.siri - 11 years ago

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vimala jersha

@christobelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

nice update

rk started feeling for madhu

cute n waiting for the next

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rekha

@rekha.366

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

nice update mimi ,loved it ,continue dear

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kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

HEY MIMI.. AWESOME UPDATE !!
THE ENTIRE CONCEPT WAS VERY CATCHY.. WHEN I FOUND RISHABH AS BENGALI, I STARTED IMAGINING AS BABU MOSHAIYE..LOLZ.. IN DHOTI KURTA..
THE BOAT SEQUENCE WAS TOO GOOD..
LOLZ.. MADHU CLIMBING THE TREE IN NO TIME..
OHH, HER FIRST IMPRESSION ON RADHA WENT BAD.. HOPE RISHABH MAY CONVINCE HER TO STAY THERE FOR FEW DAYS MORE..

OVERALL, I LOVED & ENJOYED THE UPDATE THOUROUGHLY.. UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON DEAR !!