DVD(Rishabala) FF-a raise and a fall( part 5 updated on10/10) - Page 4

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PART 2

Darthi was going to sanaya's house.the whole way she was thinking about who wants to meet her?"ma'am..."she jerked and asked"what happened?"the driver told that they had reached sanaya's house.she got down the car and saw sanaya waiting for her.she went and hugged her.

"so..my superstar has come..""sanaya...please stop it...by the way who wants to meet me?""wait drasthi you will come to know..."both of them were going to the hall when sanaya got a call.she excused her self and asked drasthi to go and sit in the hall.drasthi went to the hall and saw a man ...but he was turning the other side."barun hi hoga..."she taught and went forward.

"hey looser...do you think you are great superstar that you can't even call and wish me hah..you think you are very smart..but i tell you you are not at all."she kept on shouting at him."drasthi..."from the back someone called her.she turned back and was shocked to see barun."tum...yaha..toh ""why are you so shocked drasthi"barun asked."who is this..if you are here?""my friend vivian.""vi...vivian dsena..."vivian turned and looked at drasthi and smiled."woh..i am really sorry..i taught you were barun...""its ok relax..."drasthi just gave a weak smile."drasthi he only wanted to meet you..."sanaya told while coming.

drasthi smiled and looked at vivian."you dance amazing drasthi...""thank you vivian...".all the four of them talked for a while and then they were about to go to have some snacks.when drasthi stopped barun."all because of you..."she stamped is legs while telling this and she went."because of me..."barun stood there confused.vivian who heard this just laughed looking drasthi who was angry.

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