RishBala OS: The Last Encounter

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This was requested by Rkmadhuawsome. It's slightly rushed because it was requested that I include what'll happen tomorrow and what'll happen when Sultan gets caught.


The Last Encounter

"WHERE'S MY RK, SULTAN?!" Madhu pulled on the collar of the man.

The lights flashed on, leaving Madhu stunned as she let her hands slide down to her sides. There before her, stood RK, her RK.

"I'm right here, Biwi," RK smirked in her direction.

"RK...You?"

"Yes me. Were you expecting someone else? Who did you say again...Sultan?" he raised an eyebrow in question.

"No...no, I..."

"Are you going to try to come up with an excuse for everything you just said Biwi? Because I don't think your RK will buy it."

Madhu's eyes shot up at him as he emphasized the last bit. She let her eyebrows furrow as she stared at her smirking husband.

"Hm?"

"No. This cant be," Madhu ran her hands through her hair in a frustrated motion.

RK placed his hands on her shoulders, grabbing her attention.

"This IS. Biwi, you're not dreaming."

"Shut up RK! Get out of my head. STOP."

Madhu closed her eyes tight and pulled free from RK's grip. She turned her back towards him, not believing he was in front of her.

"Madhu?" RK's soft voice spoke.

Madhu turned around, facing RK. She looked him up and down as he stood there still.

"RK...?"

"Nope. Right Kameena."

An instant fear arose in Madhu. What if Sultan finds out that RK knows?! She worried. RK began walking towards her as she backed away.

"No RK. Stay away. Sultan will..."

"He won't do anything," RK cut her off.

Her steps came to a stop as RK cupped her face with his hands.

"Nothing will happen to me."

"But..."

"No. No buts. Just you and I. Nothing can come in between us. Not even that Sultan."

"Sultan's dead," Madhu tried to lie.

RK let out a sarcastic laugh, let go of Madhu's face, and shook his head.

"Do you really think I'm going to buy that now Biwi?"

She stared at him silently, hoping he would accept whatever she said. RK stared at her in return. After no response, he spoke as convincingly as he could.

"I know he's alive Madhu."

"What are we going to do...you have to divorce me. You have to RK. PLEASE. PL..."

RK placed his hands on her arms and shook her gently.

"Madhu!"

Madhu fell silent and looked up into his eyes with fear.

"Don't worry. I have a plan. Well be okay."

"Promise?"

"Promise," RK took her into his arms for an embrace.

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Madhu and RK watched as a human pyramid began to form to break the dahi handi. They kept their distance from each other, pretending to still be amidst the middle of a divorce. RK turned and began walking away from Madhu. As he kept walking, he found himself face to face with the cause of all problems, Sultan.

"Sultan," RK spoke his name with disgust.

Not even a second passed when Sultan pulled out his revolver and held it in front of RK.

"Give me Madhu, now."

"You'll never get her. Not even in your dreams."

As their argument grew heated, Madhu ran towards RK.

"RK?!" she screamed as she went to stand beside him.

She stared straight towards Sultan.

"Madhu, come, now."

Madhu looked up at RK and then towards Sultan. She interlocked her fingers with RK and kept silent. Sultan's nostrils began to flare as he took the safety off his revolver.

"PUT YOUR HANDS UP."

Sultan kept frozen as Madhu and RK watched Inspector Joshi heading towards Sultan.

"Not today. If I can't have Madhu, then no one can!" Sultan spoke with anger.

"I SAID PUT YOUR HANDS UP," a group of policemen backed up Inspector Joshi.

Sultan kept his stand as he began nearing RK and Madhu.

"NOW OR WE'LL HAVE TO USE UNNECESSARY FORCE."

Sultan ignored the calls from behind him. Suddenly his steps came to a stop. His eyes widened. And he fell to the ground. Madhu stared in shock while RK smirked at the dying Sultan on the ground. RK stepped forwards and looked down at Sultan.

"Not in this lifetime and not in any other. Madhu was, is, and always will be mine."

And with that, Sultan breathed his last.

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-Pritt- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👍🏼


Yay, so glad you did. Thanks!
I just fixed it now, I didn't realize a bunch of punctuation disappeared when I posted it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks so much Clara! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pritt awesome OS 😃

Sultan breathed his last.

bt i lyk ^^ ths line most!! 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RockchickFaiza

Pritt awesome OS 😃

Sultan breathed his last.

bt i lyk ^^ ths line most!! 🤣 🤣


Thanks so much Faiza!
I liked that line the best too! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks so much Shreya! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love the way you write for RK. His thoughts, his dialogue are all RK-style.

I think Madhu is easy to write for as she is straightforward but to write for a Right Kameena - that takes talent!

Well done!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nc OS pri.. Me waitn 4 2days episode
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Posted: 12 years ago
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no i'm not commenting about ur OS! 😈

grow up, u can send 50 PM's now! when were u going to discover this 😆

ps: lovely OS! did u write more? 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice ...bt thoda aur drama hona chahiye ...😃

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