Love will take you there : Rishbala FF updated Chapter 11 pg 136

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Chapter 5
Rithu is liking rk and collecting his articles without knowing as father... rithu is so cute and funny girl... trishna is caring person... but she scolding rithu... madhu now also thinking rk... then why she left from rk...

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Chapter 6
Rk is jealous while madhu dancing with somebody... beautiful song... i think rk start to feel for madhu... well written

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Chapter 7
I feel sad that trishna not able to tell rk is father of rithu... loved the way father and daughter's bounding without knowing their relationship... loved their conversation... loved little miss sunshine... she is very cute and smart angel...

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Chapter 8
So madhu won 1st prize...poor jay... rk should not console jay but he lost with madhu and her performance... loved the way rk congratulate madhu... i hate dips and her dirty plan... how dare she insult madhu???

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Chapter 9
Madhu has remembered rk through little miss sunshine's activities... so all are in india... rima and rithu's conversation is very cute... does rithu call rima as dadi???

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Originally posted by: singhshailesh86
lovely update + ( happy for rishbala & little angel )
feeling sad for paddy + trish+madhu ( her role model )
happy for little angel becuz she will finally meet her hero (/papa) again-waiting for
miss rk in this update but koi gal nahi - finally rishbala will restart in future update
thanks for pm & continue soon

yeah that was emotional in one hand & also good in a way, cuz now Madhu will stay in India 😉 & RK will appear in the upcoming chapters. Don't worry 😆 Glad u liked it. Thanks a lot 😳

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Originally posted by: amminiamma
Please update soon with Chapter 11.U r doing superb.CONGRATS

Hey! I've already updated chapter 11 on page 136 😆 my co-writer will update the next part soon.😊 Thanks

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Chapter 10
Loved the way rk shouted dips for insulting madhu... so rk and madhu became friends... so rk wants to pickup madhu to the college... dips is hearing the conversation of rk and madhu... now what dips going to make dirty plan against madhu???

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Originally posted by: Prarthna.B
read all the chapters in one go, the way you have followed this "Flashback-Flash Forward" technique is really interesting, this used to be followed by great English play writers and still followed by some of them. Loved all the characters , waiting eagerly for the next part :)

Glad u liked our story 😳 & yeah we wanted to do something different 😉 & glad readers are liking it 😳 Thanks a lot

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