TS: Irreversible Mistake, Part 3.2 (Alt End) Pg. 13 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

OUCH! So RK does not get to play hero in your story? No chance to redeem himself by saving Madhu from Sultan. The hero turns out to be Bittuji? whew.


well written. The emotions were heartbreaking! No one is happy and both RK and Madhu are broken.

I look forward to your 'alternate ending' but this one was very good too despite being sad.


Thank you! 😳
Bechara RK. He got the short end of the stick. Don't worry...he will be the hero in our show. Will make up in abundance for this RK's blunder. 😊
I'll have the alternate up as soon as I figure it out and have it written. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
sad ending...😭
Waiting for next...
thanx 4 d pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: bahnni.mj

whoa!! wonderfully written and a fitting ending 👏 i support this ending than your alternate one(happily ever after,I guess)...there can be no reconciliation with a man who betrays a wife's trust in this manner...and I would have said the same for RK had Madhu been intimate with another man...some mistakes,rather crimes,are unpardonable in a marriage.



You are absolutely right. There's no going back, no reconciliation after such a betrayal. Sleeping with another is unpardonable. And it would be really hard to trust the person again. I wouldn't. Everyday I would wonder if he is straying again.

Alternate ending will have a twist. I think you all might like it as well. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: cuterishabhala

It was quite well written..but heart breaking..
Poor RK..cant imagine of him lyk dat.. it was a beautifully wrtten emotional update dat had me in tears..
really luv d way u write..



Aww! I sowy! Huggies for you! I literally went through a box of Kleenex writing this story. I'll stick with humor. It's less painful! Lol. 😃

Thank you for your lovely comment and for reading my story! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: cool_sri

NICE UPDATE...BUT MAKE RISHBALA TOGETHER AGAIN PLZZ!!!



Madamji...wait for the alternate ending. 😉 You may get your wish!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: punam2712

IT WAS SO PAINFUL AND HEART BREAKING

FELT RK'S PAIN BUT WHAT HE DID TO MADHU CANT BE FORGIVEN
SHE CAN NEVER FORGET THE SIGHT OF HIM WITH ANOTHER GIRL


RK irrevocably broke Madhu's heart. Shattered heart and trust can't be mended. Cracks remain.
Hopefully, my alternate ending will make up for the pain on this update. Unfortunately, I won't have time to update till Monday. 😊
Thanks for reading and commenting! 😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NeelM

so sad ending so far, hopefully it will not be heart breaking at your next episode...


I pwomise no heartbreaking update on the next one! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Sad update. What will RK do now so that Madhu will forgive him.

Thanks for the pm.


Thank you! 😳 For that, we'll have to go to an Alternate Universe. Let's see if I can salvage this relationship. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love.abhay

nice update bt i wud rather love a sad ending in nxt part..best will be RK killing himself coz i don't think after all dis any couple can live in love together..it wud be better if RK dies in love after proving madhu how much he really loved her.!



Awww! I know with what I have written so far, chance of redemption is nil. But the alternate is and will be a different twist as the name implies. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NehaVdian

I want rk to die prooving his love to madhu even if madhu forgive him he wont be able to forgive himself soo plss kill him in his love that will be ok



Aww! I am afraid writing that bit WOULD KILL ME! 😭 But have no fear. I will have the alternate ending up on on Monday. And you won't feel the need for RK to die to prove his love!!! And RK, of all people, understands suicide is not the answer to any problem. All it would do is make his loved ones more hurt and miserable.

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