TS: Irreversible Mistake, Part 3.2 (Alt End) Pg. 13

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

OUCH! So RK does not get to play hero in your story? No chance to redeem himself by saving Madhu from Sultan. The hero turns out to be Bittuji? whew.

well written. The emotions were heartbreaking! No one is happy and both RK and Madhu are broken.

I look forward to your 'alternate ending' but this one was very good too despite being sad.

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Blue_Scrubs

@Blue_Scrubs

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

whoa!! wonderfully written and a fitting ending 👏 i support this ending than your alternate one(happily ever after,I guess)...there can be no reconciliation with a man who betrays a wife's trust in this manner...and I would have said the same for RK had Madhu been intimate with another man...some mistakes,rather crimes,are unpardonable in a marriage.

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simran

@Love_Ashvik

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

It was quite well written..but heart breaking..
Poor RK..cant imagine of him lyk dat.. it was a beautifully wrtten emotional update dat had me in tears..
really luv d way u write..

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

NICE UPDATE...BUT MAKE RISHBALA TOGETHER AGAIN PLZZ!!!

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Puja

@..FrozenHeart..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Nice update . Please give the happy ending update fast

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

IT WAS SO PAINFUL AND HEART BREAKING

FELT RK'S PAIN BUT WHAT HE DID TO MADHU CANT BE FORGIVEN

SHE CAN NEVER FORGET THE SIGHT OF HIM WITH ANOTHER GIRL

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Neela

@Neel_M

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

so sad ending so far, hopefully it will not be heart breaking at your next episode...

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sush

@sush12_RM

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

wow this was superb update...😳

RK broken n Madhu gone !!this was a sad piece.

Waiting for next alternate part !!😊

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Sad update. What will RK do now so that Madhu will forgive him.

Thanks for the pm.

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Heartless_Freak

@Heartless_Freak

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

nice update bt i wud rather love a sad ending in nxt part..best will be RK killing himself coz i don't think after all dis any couple can live in love together..it wud be better if RK dies in love after proving madhu how much he really loved her.!

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