Rishbala OS: Ijaazat Part 2 updt Pg4 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
aww..that was very sweet A perfect end to a beaytiful story. I love this mature and sensible RM . Keep up the good work . :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb part 2 😳 thanks alot for the pm 😊 i wanted to ask u if u are gonna update a part 2 for ur os chalte chalte...if u continue it than please pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was great... though i was happy with first part as ending but its even better this way

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...superb...words would fall short to describe it...it couldn't hv ended better than this...this is my most favourite OS...i have already read it 5 times,still feel reading it all over again...kudos to ur writing creativity
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Thanks to all the readers for liking and commenting 🤗

I wanted to individually thank you but being a Groupbie I cannot make more than 20 posts a day...so first I will update Upakhayan and then come back to your comments.

It was your interest in the 1st part which encouraged to think a logical end to it

So thank you once again 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing update lovely job



I am glad that you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: Clara20

hey nice ending...thanx for updating...



Thanks for liking it 😊

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

I really enjoyed reading this os.the simplicity of the words.the matured thinking and especially a matured rishab were a treat to read.thanks for the pm.



Ohhh thank you so very much...yes even I was very happy to depict Rishabh as a matured and accommodating husband..

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

I really enjoyed reading this os.the simplicity of the words.the matured thinking and especially a matured rishab were a treat to read.thanks for the pm.



I should thank you my readers who had the faith in my writing.. I really need it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: DevilClan

Nice ending. I like happy endings and hope that Radha ji would have understood her mistake.



I deliberately avoided Radha's POV, as it was very difficult to change; when her son and grandson's death could not curb her vanity, nothing else would stand a chance..



Thank you 😊



Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: tinkerred10

aww..that was very sweet A perfect end to a beaytiful story. I love this mature and sensible RM . Keep up the good work . :)



Ohh thanks a ton.. I would try in my future endeavors to show as many facets of human nature in Rishabh as possible..



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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

superb part 2 😳 thanks alot for the pm 😊 i wanted to ask u if u are gonna update a part 2 for ur os chalte chalte...if u continue it than please pm me 😊



Thank you my Reader number 1 ⭐️... and you won't have to remind me pm'ing u everytime...as you are in my buddy list, so u will definitely get the pms 😃

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

it was great... though i was happy with first part as ending but its even better this way



Thanks Suhana, even i was quite skeptical to continue the story, but it was definitely all my readers' encouragement that helped me to conclude logically..

Originally posted by: memad

awesome...superb...words would fall short to describe it...it couldn't hv ended better than this...this is my most favourite OS...i have already read it 5 times,still feel reading it all over again...kudos to ur writing creativity



Hey thank you so very much...I feel honoured to see such a comment!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SB200

awesome story 👏



Thanks dear 😊

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