Rishbala SS: His Child Bride Chap8 Updating Pg26 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice chapter ...

All the parts were amazing !
Very well written ... 👏
Keeps the reader hooked ... 😉

The story is proceeding in a nice way ...
I am loving it ... 😳

The whole concept is new but still great !

Waiting to read more !

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !


Thank you very very much😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: revti21

really lovely...its totally different u hav an amazin talent of writin...pls pm me whn u update i sent u a buddy request



Thank you for the compliment and the buddy request😃
I will definitely send you a PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Onir

Just came across this SS today and read all parts in one go... and it was a treat. 👏


Nice concept and very well visualized together ... Liked the setup of the story and the whole circumstance woven for the marriage. 😉

Madhu is a true jungli billi an her innocence and courage speaks a lot for her... Loved her character 😃

RK seems quite intriguing 😊

Loved it and continue soon 😊



Thank you! Madhu is my baby and I'm very fond of her. Rk...well you'll know more about him later
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prarthna.B

Very different OS, liked it, you have woven the story so well , loved Madhu's childhood part , read all the chapters in one go, eagerly waiting for the next part. The title of this SS misleaded me a little becoz I was thinking that again this is going to be a story of childhood friends who fell in love, finally I read it but it was totally different. loved it a lot.


Thank you! I am glad you like Madhu's childhood part because you might be getting more of it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Two updates.. Yippee!!!

I liked Rishbala's masti.. Madhu is cute. But I felt sad when RK was leaving...
Want to read more about them..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
nice story..

this week we r getting fab stories from new writers..

eagerly waiitng for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Oh god !! It had so much innocence in her letter that I almost teared up feeling her innocence and such naive expression of emotions...wonderful👏!!!
Oh god!! I can't tell you how much excited am right now to read further to know how they both are going to react when they meet after 5 years hehe!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Omg..what a fanfic...amazing...rishabh gonna go crazy seeing his child bride...omg...hes not gonna let her go...anazing...pkz plz do pm me next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome..its just a fully new concept..update update fast..truly a awesome idea..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OK, so Madhu has matured into a smart business woman??? Very nice. But I love how you have her stealing - no - managing resources of mangoes!!!!

But the last line just killed me!

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