Rishbala SS: And then he kissed me..Epilogue pg13 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Back to back so many updates...


i'm loving this story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...yuck!! Mukund is coming back😡..hate his tone !! OMG !!! Rishabh is trying to move away from India...hmm waiting desperately to read further😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear u r a superb writer..👏

u r hook up me wid ur exciting updates...

m eagerly waitin fr next parts 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello readers. This is the last part of this SS😭. I hope you enjoyed it reading as much I enjoyed writing it😃. I would like to thank all the writers of this forum who have inspired me with their FF, SS and OS👏. I would also like to thank DD and VD who have portrayed the characters of Madhu and RK so brilliantly which has led us all to land of fantasy weaving numerous love stories around these two characters😳. I hope my inspiration stays so that I can write more stories like this😊.

"Aaiye Mrs. Dixit. Please have a seat. Padmini, Madhu, Mrs. Dixit has arrived," announced Shamsher. "So how was everything here Malik saab? Hope everything went well with Jeevika's wedding." "Oh yes, it was a beautiful wedding. Everybody enjoyed a lot. Jeevika is very happy in her new home." "Good, good. Now you will have to see to it that Mukund and Madhu's wedding is even grander than Jeevika's. As you know they had so many common friends. I would not like to hear from them that you made any discrepancy in these two weddings." "Mrs. Dixit both of them are my daughters. Why would I neglect one from the other?" The door bell rang again and Madhu went to open the door. "Kundra uncle? Aunty?" Madhu was surprised to see Mohan and Radha at their home that moment. "How are you beta?" They were seeing Madhu first time after the holi. Madhu flashed a genuine smile and said, "I am fine aunty. Please come in."

"Mrs. Dixit. Meet my samdhi Mr. Mohan Kundra and samdhan Mrs. Radha Kundra," Padmini introduced the Kundras. After exchanging pleasantries they started talking casually about Madhu and Mukund. Padmini went to the kitchen to get some tea and snacks for everyone. "My Muku is a 'laakho me ek' boy. He has always been ahead of everyone in his class. He was the first to get the best job in his university.." "But I heard that Madhu was the topper in their batch and she was awarded student of the year medal," interrupted Radha. "Who told you?" "Jeevika, my bahu. Moreover Madhu has been working with my younger son in their technology hub project. And she has done a commendable job there." "Oh, that's nice. Muku was telling me that Madhu had asked him to look for a job for her in US. I told Muku what is the need? You are earning so well and that is more than enough for you two. She can just enjoy there and take care of the household." Madhu made a stern face on hearing this but did not say anything. Everyone in the room gave a nettled look to Mrs. Dixit which she knowingly or unknowingly ignored.

Everyone was having the tea and the snacks when Shamsher got a call and went out of the room. Mrs. Dixit was still continuing her blabbering. "Muku's dad had left us a fortune when he passed away. That is why I did not think of getting married again, although there were too many proposals you know!" She would always look for some opportunity to harp on the fact that Padmini had re-married to bring up her daughters. Her hinting words were loathsome, yet Padmini and Madhu did not react. Radha could not take any more of this nonsensical talk from her. She was about to protest when Shamsher came back from his call and Mrs. Dixit blurted out, "So let's decide on the date Malik saab. My son will be here for 10 days. Sab kuch usi me nipatna parega." "Mrs. Dixit the wedding cannot happen next month..." "What? No, no, Malik saab. I did not come here to ask you about your suggestion on the wedding date. It has to be next month. My son cannot spend unnecessarily on flight tickets for some other date." "Excuse me Mrs. Dixit; please let me complete my sentence. I said the wedding cannot happen next month, or for that matter ever between Madhu and Mukund." "What? Are you trying to convey that this engagement is called off?" "Yes Mrs. Dixit. I am sorry for all this inconvenience but I do not think Madhu and Mukund would be happy with each other. So before going any further I would like to express my sincere apologies to you and wish you and Mukund a very happy life ahead."

Madhu was stunned. She looked at her father and then at her mother, who gave an assuring nod and signaled with her eyes that everything is fine. Mrs. Dixit stood up and fumed. "Calling off an engagement of a girl in our society is not accepted so easily Malik saab. You will never get a better match for her than my Muku I am sure. Nevertheless, I always knew that people of your stature do not deserve a relationship with people like us." Her last sentence was pointed specifically towards Padmini. "Namaste Mrs. Dixit. You may go now," and Shamsher opened the door for her.

"Whoa! What was that Papa?" said Karan as he entered with Jeevika. They had barely missed the drama at the Malik residence, but had an almost head-on collision with Mrs. Dixit when she was storming out of the door. "Didz, Jiju you all knew about this?" asked a very surprised Madhu. "Oh yes my darling aadhi gharwali. Now you have to decide what you will call me, Jiju or Jeth ji," guffawed Karan. "Ma, Papa," and Madhu rushed to the Maliks for a hug. "Thank Mohan ji and Radha ji beta. Without their support we would not have been able to get this done successfully." Radha came forward and kissed on Madhu's cheek. "I was waiting for this day from the day I have seen you beta. You two sisters will fill my abode with love and happiness." Padmini could not hold back her tears of joy anymore. "Par who naalayak hai kahan?" asked Mohan Kundra. "Wait, I will call him," said Karan.

"Hello Rishu, where are you now?" aksed Karan over the phone with a fake tone of concern. "I am at the Lansdowne Lounge with my friends. Why bro?" Rishabh's only friend there was a glass of scotch in his hand. "Come down to Papa, I mean Malik Papa's home right now." "What? No, bro, I cannot come. I am with my friends and.." "Rishu it's urgent. Please Rishu." This time he genuinely sounded concerned. "Why bro? Is everything fine? Madhu, is Madhu ok?" Karan just hung up there. "Who gadha abhi bhaagte huye aayega," said Karan and winked at Madhu.

After 15 minutes the door bell at the Malik residence rang. Shamsher opened the door. Rishabh rushed in and seeing everyone together stopped for a moment and asked, "Is everything alright uncle? Is Madhu alright?" and looked for her face around. Shamsher placed his hand over Rishabh's shoulder and asked, "So when do you intend to get married beta?" Was that a trick question? Rishabh in his current state of mind replied, "Don't know. Never!" "But that would mean my daughter would have to remain a spinster all her life. I cannot let that happen I tell you," said Shamsher with a fake intimidating tone. Rishabh was about to say something when it suddenly struck him what Shamsher was trying to convey. He scrutinized every face around and saw Jeevika and Radha trying their best to stop bursting in laughter and Karan standing there with, yes with Madhu and indicating him what he is going to lose if he says no. "I'll kill you bro!" "First get married then think of anything else saale."

It was happiness unlimited. The bond these two families had already was to be doubled. Everyone started contemplating the next big event of the year. Rishabh could not take it anymore. "Uncle.." "Call me Papa, else.." "Ok, Papa. Can I have a word with Madhu? In private?" The last part was spoken very carefully. "Oh yes. Who am I to stop you from stealing my daughter? Go, get her," and pushed Rishabh towards Madhu. Before Madhu could say anything, Rishabh pulled her in an adjoining room, which was incidentally Madhu's room.

"Rishabh, I am sorry for all my rude behavior to you. As you know I did not want to hurt Papa and Ma but never knew that they were so keen about all these." "And what about today? Did you know about all these plans?" "No Rishabh, trust me. I had no inkling about what was going on." Madhu did not notice that Rishabh had already cornered her. She bumped against the wall behind and realized she was caged within his hands. "Rishabh, I.." "Did I ever tell you talk too much?" And this time he did not shut her mouth with his finger, but with his lips and had the true first kiss of love.




P.S.: This is the link to the song which was my inspiration for the title of this SS. It also depicts the mood at the end of the story. So enjoy.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cE_jOD2Fxvs[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by mimibm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome update 😳 but i didn't expected it to end so soon 😭 please can u give an epilouge for this ss? Please?...but wait a minute...i'm the first one to like & comment 😲 yaay...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Wow 😳
Amazing Ending 👏
U write very well. Do write more 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Yayy finally RK-Madhu are together, thanks for the happy ending and loved panicking RK a lot, Lovely SS :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awesome update..fab ending😛!! Love you writing style,narration ..it's crisp and clear and yet alluring!! Moreover the speedy updates is like icing on cake hehe!! Please write some more okay😊.
Hey if possible, do finish it with an epilogue...would love to read it as well from your pov
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice update happy ending...
nw u cn write new one...waiting for that😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Awesome update..fab ending😛!! Love you writing style,narration ..it's crisp and clear and yet alluring!! Moreover the speedy updates is like icing on cake hehe!! Please write some more okay😊.

Hey if possible, do finish it with an epilogue...would love to read it as well from your pov



Thank you very much.. I get time during the weekends only, so my next story would come up on some weekend only, and of course with speedy updates, because I don't like waiting for updates myself 😆.

As far as the epilogue is concerned, hmm didn't think about it before. Let's see..😉

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