RishBala SS: Forgotten - Part 7 - Page 19 -The End - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awespme ss pritt loved it!!!👏👏
great idea...looking forward to it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Very nice ss. The next part please😊...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start pritto..plz update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHAT A FANTASTIC STORY
WAITING TO READ MADHU'S FIGHT TO RECLAIM HER HUSBAND
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is truly not my best work. I haven't been able to write all of today. I just quickly wrote this up right now...


Forgotten


Part Two

"I've heard plenty about you."

Of course I had. I knew his entire backstory.

"Who hasn't? I'm RK."

I smiled and released his hand. With a smirk in my direction, he turned to face Bittuji.

"Bittuji, I want all details on my costar, understand?"

He hadn't changed. Speaking about people standing right in front of him. I didn't mind though.

"Chief, I can tell you everything you need to know right now."

"Oh really?"

I shook my head, impatiently waiting to begin the shooting for the first scene.

"Um, Mr. RK, can we do this later? We've need to begin shooting."

"Shooting can't begin without me. And right now I'm busy."

It was like he had gone back to square one. The same, rude, arrogant, self-absorbed RK.

I decided to start a conversation with the director while giving RK the chance to get my history from Bittuji.

"What scene are we filming first?"

"There's a scene, no words. Just action. All you need to do is slap RK once. Then walk off in tears."

"Tears? Once? Can I request a change?"

"Well…"

"Make it four slaps, more dramatic. No tears. Just anger."

"Uh…"

"I love it!"

I turned at the voice of RK. He was smirking in my direction again.

"Bittuji, forget it. I like this one."

I stopped a smile from crossing my face as he referred to me as an object basically. If he remembered who I was, I would've hit him in the arm.

"Let's go shoot this scene."

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"ACTION!"

I walked up to him slowly. With a turn of his head in my direction, I crossed his face with four slaps.

"CUT!"

I stared at him, hoping for a reaction…something…anything. But there was nothing. Maybe it was because I hadn't actually slapped him this time? It was a mere camera angle effect.

He looked in my direction and raised an eyebrow.

"Not bad, Madhubala, aahaan."

So, he hadn't changed.

I decided to speak up.

"I can do better."

"Oh really?"

I cued the cameraman to switch on the camera again. The director looked in my direction.

"Another shot?"

"Just one."

"Alright…ACTION!"

1 slap.

2.

3…

And 4…

"CUT, CUT, CUT!"

This time it was real. I slapped him. Just as I had years ago.

I stared at him, standing with his hand on his face. He slowly turned to face me as the director ran towards him.

"Are you alright Mr. RK?!"

RK raised a hand to shut everyone up. I stared directly into his furious eyes.

"I told you I could do better."

His junglibilli was back. I shot him one of his own smirks and turned to walk away with my shock-stricken manager. I continued to walk forwards until Bittuji came to a stop in front of me. I looked towards Bittuji and watched him nod and smile. I shooed away my manager and then heard him speak with a smile.

"Welcome back Bhabhiji, welcome back."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome Pritt! <3

Yayyy! Jungli Billi is back :D

I wanted RK to react though! :)

Fab Job!
xxx

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Nice Update.
RK didn't change, he is the same arrogant man.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW...superb update, short though. Good Junglibilli is back
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome work prittB
i totally loved this concept
u better continue this soon or else iam going crazy...

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