RishBala SS- My Angel | Part 17- Page 140

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Richa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

read last two parts!

they were awesome as always!

ab kya bolun yar awesome ke alawa lol

now wht will Madhu do n react this is gonna be interesting!

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Ramani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Nice update..
Now lets c wat happens with both of them & in their home..
Awaiting next update.

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mahimesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

pm me when u update

loved the storry😃

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Karamjeet Kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Superbbb SS ...i just recently read all 15parts nd they all r Superbbb ; Out standing dear i just loved d story concept it's intresting...plzzz continue soon...

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Karamjeet Kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Superbbb SS ...i just recently read all 15parts nd they all r Superbbb ; Out standing dear i just loved d story concept it's intresting...plzzz continue soon...

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alina.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This seems like a really interesting FF...will read!

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Mahi78

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Just completed reading all ur 15 parts in one go, loved it. Role reversal haan?😉

Continue soon and if possible PM me.

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Shivangi.

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Rishabh was shocked to the core. Never in his worst dreams had he expected a normal Indian Girl to be a drug addict of this level. In this case, he was a bit conservative as he always thought Indian Woman to be nice and mannered. He considered them ideals. For him, he always admired the limit of endurance and love which the women and aspired to see India as a country where women and their capacities to spread love and endure was respected. But Madhubala was an exact opposite of what he could have thought of her. He narrated the entire thing to Bittuji and told him that how not even in his wildest dreams, he had imagined her like that. Torn, in pain, and longing for care. Bittuji was shocked to see how much had it affected Rishi.

"Rishi, she's a superstar!! That world is INSANE! Why do you even care?"

"Bittuji, you're talking of Madhu! She's not JUST a Superstar"

Bittuji could very well judge how Rishi wasn't paying attention at what he was speaking. He was lost in some other world. His heart was speaking for him.

"Madhu is special. People underestimate her so much. She has such a pure heart. She doesn't show it though"

Rishabh smiled as he continued.

"She thinks she can win this world single-handedly. And most of the time, she's able to! Because of her eyes and smile"

Bittuji noticed the spark in his eyes.

"You know Bittuji...you can just drown in those deep brown mysterious eyes. They speak volumes about her. And her smile, its the most heavenly smile I've come across in my entire life. No malice, no jealousy. She just smiles from her heart"

A little smile crept BittuJi's lips.

"No one knows what she's been through...but people only know to talk ill of her! She's an angel at heart and cute and sweet devil on face"

Rishabh chuckled as he described her.

"And she's naughty. She keeps tearing my shirts..."

Giggled Rishabh. BittuJi's mouth gaped wide open.

"Rishi, do you know tum kya keh rahe ho??"

Rishabh's smile vanished away. He turned towards Bittuji in horror, popping his eyes wide open. Bittuji burst into laughter and Rishabh ran away from there.

"Phas Gaya Yeh Bhi..."

Was all Bittuji said.

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Rishabh and Nakul were strolling the streets of Mumbai after a heavy downpour. Rishabh had almost forgotten about the drug incident and he was enjoying the wet smell of the soil and the drenched shining roads parallel to the shore. He could feel drops of sea waves crashing the shores of Mumbai on his face and the cool sea breeze.

"Rishi, see there's so much crowd. Kuch hua hai..maybe an accident. Dekhte hai if we could offer some help"

Nakul pointed towards the corner of a road, there was heavy jam. Cars and Scooters honked but the crowd refused to clear off. Rishabh and Nakul struggled their way into the crowd when they heard some famous person's accident. Somewhere deep down, he feared if it was Madhu. The memories of her and the drugs came back to him and his heart stopped beating for a second. He pushed himself inside and found a car crashed on the pillars of a building. He saw the number plate and was shattered. It was a Singhanias Car. He refused to think that there could have been a possibility of Madhu being inside. He saw the Police was already there and there was a corpse wrapped in white cloth lying on the road. Rishabh almost died. But somehow, he still shut his mind, refusing to believe any of his theories. He ran to the Insector and blabbered out softly.

"I am sorry sir! Its not the right time but you can definitely tell us if you need any help. Clearing the crowds or anything?"

Rishabh could've done anything to make the Inspector speak of the casualty in the accident. Inspector told him that they will manage.

"Sir, trust me! These people have no work! They can't help but they know how to poke in!"

Inspector smiled and patted him.

"We need youth like you! Anyways! Its not their fault...afterall, this isn't a nobody's case. Its Superstar Madhubala's sister Dipali whom we lost"

Rishabh trembled in his feet. How on earth could Madhu bear all this. This was a bigger disaster for him. He asked softly.

"Have you informed her?"

The Inspector nodded and told him how they hadn't asked her to come down to the accident spot, but called her at the hospital morgue section. Rishabh pleaded to accompany them, and somehow the Inspector agreed. Rishabh sent Nakul back to the hostel to inform Bittuji...how he wasn't coming to the hostel that night...again!

It was late at night when Madhu's car sounded from the hospital parking. The media wasnt allowed inside the premises and so Madhu had no idea what was in store for her. She saw Rishabh in the lobby and ignored him...with a naughty smile. Tears formed in Rishabh's eyes thinking of her when she would come to know of Dipali.

"Ms Singhania, unfortunately we lost your sister in a terrible car accident! We're investigating into the reasons for the mishap. For now, the slippery roads and petrol leakage are the probable causes."

The inspector blurted out in one go. Madhu refused to believe at first. But soon, she started looking around...trying to sense the surroundings. Rishabh slipped behind Madhu quietly while she was being shown Dipali's strangled body. She sank when she saw her...dropped when Rishabh held by the waist. She turned at him in horror and saw tears in his eyes. Her eyes began to question him, as if he was the only one who could say her something which could soothe her.

"That's a prank na RK?"

Rishabh dropped his head down and denied the possibility. Madhu held his collar and nailed him on the wall.

"Bolo na its a prank!! Please!"

Rishabh gulped and turned his head away.

"Inspector Sahab! Let me know what are the formalities...I don't have time to spare"

She turned and replied coldly. Rishabh turned and gazed her in horror. Inspector stood shocked as the lower staff handed her the papers. She signed them and then went and sat on the steps of the hospital, asking to vacant crowd near her. Rishabh refused to go away and stood behind her. She made no movement for a few minutes and then slowly slipped out a cigarette and her injections. Rishabh wanted to do something...but he was scared if this could evoke something in her. "No! I can't let her do this to self!" He affirmed himself and went and snatched off the cigarette butt and the injections and broke them off. Madhu turned to him with blood red eyes. Rishabh didn't fumble, he was determined.

"What the hell do you think you did?"

"I won't let you do this to yourself woman!"

"Shut up and let me go!"

"Madhu!! Get up!! Why don't you understand! Dipali is gone!!"

"Rishi, let me go! I have to reach the sets!!"

"I won't let you run away from yourself!! You feel like crying? Then CRY! But dammit don't just run!"

"Why will I cry!! I am absolutely fine!!"

"NO!! You lost your SISTER! Dipali di!! You LOVED HER! Dammit!! Madhu!"

"Rishi just let me GO!"

"Madhu!! You lost her...your sister..."

Madhu's tone mellowed after a few minutes. Her eyes weakened and tears formed as Rishabh constantly tried to let her emotions out!

"Let yourself out!! YOU IDIOT! What do you worry for?? You have nobody?? Look around! You have me! Tell me everything! What you feel! What you want to do..."

"I need some peace..some quiet place where I can hear no voice! I need my DRUGS!"

"NO! YOUR DRUGS ARE A HISTORY NOW! I swear Ms Singhania...I won't let you touch them now... "

"I have to shoot..."

"MADHU!! Dipali is DEAD! Her corpse is lying inside!!"

Rishabh shouted ruthlessly. Madhubala clutched him tightly this time, sinking her head in his neck...and yelled in pain. Rishabh smiled as his eyes moistened seeing Madhubala express her emotions for the first time. She yelled and hugged him tighter and tighter. Rishabh made her feel that someone was there with her. She went on and on recalling her and Dipali's sister moments. Rishabh caressed her hairs as she cried and cried. Her cries finally sank in soft sulks as she got exhausted. Her voice cracked up due to constant yelling and then finally she lost her voice...for the time being. Rishabh kept holding her. Her eyes were red and the kajal had spread all over her eyes...she was sulking and breathing heavily...

"I won't let you suffer..."

Rishabh consoled her. She left his arms and distanced herself. Rishabh cupped her face...

"You belong to me! I love you..."

Rishabh affirmed her. Madhubala looked at him with those bulging swollen pain struck eyes. He wiped her tears with his thumb and took her in his loving embrace again.
Super Sorry for the Late Update!Enjoy and Leave your comments!

Edited by .BadtameezDil. - 11 years ago

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Seema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#809

A v well written,emotional n a heart touching update.madhu lost da person whom she loved da most.i have a feel dat deepalis death is not a mere accident may b its a conspiracy against madhu,destroying by snatching da person who cared fr her.rishabh is dere fr her n above all he loves her.thanx fr pm continue soon shivu mani n eku ka kaam ab me samnbalonga 😆next update jaldi jaldi update kr nay ka.

Edited by vmpy - 11 years ago

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#810

Well, it was really fantastic but short update...right from Dipali's death till RK's love confession it was fully beautiful picturisation of Madhu's emotions...well written dear...pls cntinue soon...thnks for the pm...

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