RishBala SS- My Angel | Part 17- Page 140 | October 26 - Page 15

Originally posted by: ..Cute_Angel..

Awesome update

RK z champu😆

Originally posted by: RockchickFaiza

woww..another superb update shivu... 😃

love sweet-goody RK & Superstar Madhubala..feelin bad to knw about her past...bt deeps is on her support...

excited fr next part & thnku fr PM babes 😊

Originally posted by: Tyro

nice start,,,,

Originally posted by: 1Sumana1

Amazing concept!

I am really surprised to see ''RK, the Angel'' 🤣 and the somewhat RKish Madhu.😎 🤣

Beautifully worded, will love to read more of it!

Thanx for the PM Shivu!

Originally posted by: nahtani88

awesome updates
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ..Aliya..

Finally unres my comment on page 1
I know I'm late. I'm sorry 😳 No Problem dear
Coming to part 2:
Aww Rishi is such a sweetheart. He really is an angel. Yup...he's different from RK!
But I wonder how did he find such friends 😆 They're Nakul's friends actually...!
They aren't like him at all.
What a mommy's boy. All the time he thinks of his mom. Now that's really a perfect son! Exactly... =D
When I read the title of the SS I thought Madhu is meant with 'angel' but now I know who actually is. 😉
Dips calls Trishna trash? 🤣🤣 superb idea! 🤣 Yup...I know but I hate Trish's character in the show also...so its sort of a revenge...🤣
Dips is such a sweet sis in ur SS.
But selfish paddy married an idiotic businessman and has daughter of him. you got that right!
I really can understand Madhu's behavior 😃
I would have moved out with my sis 😛 There are reasons why she's staying...
Radha is really a nice woman. Cares a lot for an alcoholic superstar whom her son brought home. 😉
Rishi is really studying? Aww wish he will be so successful that he will not have A BIG mansion but 100 😳 Aww...thats soo sweet!!
Part 2 was really nice.
Plss add me to your PM list. Will add you to my buddy list now 😃 added

Originally posted by: itsRitzi

👏omg shivu u r really lovely writer i love ur style! its a bit casual which i love!

Thank u...yup...I write ainvayi..its not something I am perfect at...I just write the way I think...😆

And seriously u mixed up all charac shamsher evil balraj good dips good lolz !

Yup...that was done on purpose...I hate Paddo/Shammo/Trish... and I luv the baddies of MB...except Bhai!

its very unique in terms of characterisation very refreshing loved it !

Thanks!

plz do continue

RIshabh acch abacch ahain padhta hain 😳

Yup...he's sweet waala boy!

PS: sorry for late reply seeing ur SS i too wan to revive my writting skills again alas m too lazy 😆 will wait for you to change your mind and start writing!!

Originally posted by: prishiya

wow.. awesome ss... 👏 Thanks Prisho🤗

I hardly read any ss ff... bt I love ur ds ss... Aww! Means alot!!!

kya characterization hai... rk ko tune pura opposite scatch kia... woh apne kapde bhi khud dhota hai... 😲😆... yup...IITs mein toh sab aise hi karte hai right??😉

N MB alocoholic.. 😆... n most surprising was dipz... mb's sis n like best frnd... 😲 she is...😆

btw u hvnt given nakul's intro... he is jst cameo or wht?... n wht a char of sikky... kudos !!! Nakul's not very important in the SS... so I didn't give the CS... and yes..Sikky🤣

awesome ss dear...

Originally posted by: prishiya

res for part 2.. 😛

unres...

amazing shivu.. 🤗... wht a beautiful piece of writing... 👏 Thank U prish!!

u hv changed char of all... would luv to read da way story also... I am glad u are liking it...!

rishabh as champu... 😆.. O god... super like... everyone had their eyes fixed on CHAMPU only🤣

dipz.. cant believe ds char,.. its awsome... hope rk would hv bro or sis in show... yup...I so wished that happened...but wish aise poori ho gayi...Bhai ke form mein🤢🤢

I really want... mb open her mouth.. wanna knw more abt her.. 😉 let see!!

all char u hv desc so well...

Originally posted by: taraka2005

Awsm SS 👏..pls continue... 😊 Pls PM me when u write next part..

storyline is also interesting and Intro of chrac. is written beautifully...tune saare characters ke rang hi badal diye..😆 but i loved it...😳
Thanks in adv.